Chongding Immortal Clan

The author should have borrowed the mirror and settings from the next door... But he has not grasped the key points and excitement of this kind of family novel at all. First of all, this kind of behind-the-scenes family type fairy tale novel is not about a certain person in the family, but what each generation needs to do. Love, the mirror next door, portrays the first generation old patriarch very vividly. In your book, you want both watermelon and sesame seeds. The result is that none of the 6 brothers and sisters and the head of the family are outstanding. In other words, what are the names of the second and fifth children? How many of you who are working on it know? The longer the time span... The more fleshed out the characters, the more popular this book will be

You have Xuanjian's temperament, let's see the follow-up skills

Set up various big pits! First: the protagonist is a tripod slave, so the tripod itself has a tripod spirit. What purpose does the tripod spirit want to spread its own orthodoxy? Is it to add benefits to the protagonist and control himself? Second: Since Ding himself can control the search for a host, it would be superfluous to ask the protagonist to do anything. Third: The protagonist finally controls the insect Ding. That is the Ding slave. The Ding spirit can control life and death with a single thought. Does the author have some misunderstandings about the word slave? Finally: Is 💩 in the head of the review editor? Why don't you remind the author of such a big pit? These editors are not as educated as a group of kindergartens

Advantages: There are shadows of Xuanjian Disadvantages: Too similar and boring

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It's well written. It's best to translate it into insect language and send it to the Zerg people.

Isn't it best to cultivate as a human body? Isn't it slower to cultivate when you transform into an insect? It's a magic insect.

I have not read the book Xuanjian, but I have read the introduction. I cannot say that the introduction is exactly the same, I can only say that it is nine-fold similar.

It took 19 chapters from the protagonist to become Ding Zai to the family to start cultivating immortals. It took 11 chapters just to get the small Ding. It took too long. Things like the Xuanjian Immortal Clan and Ao Wuchang's new book asking the ancestors to manifest their spirits were solved in just a few chapters.

The protagonist has no body now, so it's okay to major in Yuan Shen, but it can't be like this in the future. If you cultivate both life and life, only Yuan Shen is not the Dao. After reading so many years of books, no one has taken the initiative to give up the physical body and only cultivate Yuan Shen. It is only right to practice the Taiyin method and the Yuanshen method together to cultivate magic power and spiritual consciousness. Even if you are worried that there is something wrong with the tripod, you still have to cultivate your magic power.

After reading twenty chapters, I concluded that the author has a good writing style and has clearly shaped the characters. The plot is relatively mature, and the core gimmick is quite innovative (Zerg + Immortal Cultivation). However, the identity of the protagonist and Goldfinger's autonomy are too high. Overall more than food and grass.

There is something, I hope it continues

I feel like I hope I don't keep handing out the knife like Xuan Jian.

What I've written so far is pretty good, I'll give it a try and then read it.

Come on

It's too late. Can't you buy larvae? You can't buy them in the fairy world, but you should have them in the mortal world. It's been almost 3 days since you wrote this, Yu Chong.

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The writing is pretty good, I hope there will be more.

The rhythm feels okay, I can see it, but it's too little 🙂

They are all supporting roles, not my cup of tea.

I've been waiting for it for a long time. Why did a similar movie come out?

It seems that the protagonist will basically not attack in the early stage. In the early and mid-term, it is estimated that the enemy will be killed when there is a danger of annihilation.

Will one chapter be updated every day after it is released? Too short