The Girl's Wonderful Journey of Douluo

I have read Chapter 44 so far, so there may be spoilers. The setting is quite fresh and hundreds, so I quite like it. But apart from the above, in summary, it feels like a little white text. The main reason is that the pacing is not very well controlled, and I have a bad habit that most new authors have: adding a lot of explanations every time the protagonist does something small. Whether it's the protagonist's thoughts and considerations, or the various settings and backgrounds, there are too many. What I want to say is that readers are not fools and do not need to explain everything. Once such a habit is formed, it is difficult to break it, and it is easy for readers to scold you after signing it. From 32 to 44, I have been in the underground cave for 12 chapters, but I feel like not much has happened: I went down the cave for a long time without finding anything, I found the symbol and thought someone overturned it and said it was gone, I met a horned dragon and had a fight, I got lost and took a break to eat snakes, I met a sleeping horned dragon, but I couldn't beat it in a fight, so I used my soul bone to make a comeback. There are 7 chapters in total, and each chapter must have important plot steps to prevent the pace from being too slow. The above personal thoughts.

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By the way, only those who eat human corpses can be called evil soul masters, but how can the corpses of soul-eating beasts be called evil soul masters? Because if you are timid about this, it is purely because you are scaring yourself.