Starting from Xianwu Sui Dynasty

It started very well, but it started to become abstract when learning the thunder and lightning sword skills. The skills learned were all advanced, but the execution was not very good. The author of the Assassin chapter said that assassins who practice the assassin's way cannot perform it in a square-foot area. This is simply too abstract. This assassin is using a Barrett or a sniper from eight hundred miles away. The plot is light and compact, but it is too compact. It is either a comparison with the original work or a psychological description, various introductions to the plot background, but your protagonist is following the plot. More than ten chapters have passed, and the protagonist has only lived a few days.

Zu Xia, Di Shang, Tian Zhou, Xian Qin, Shen Han, Xie Jin, Huang Sui, Sheng Tang, Dao Song, Mo Yuan, Wu Ming and Man Qing.

The main character is from a wealthy family, why don't they understand the most basic information?

With such a large worldview and a world where several historical dynasties are mixed together, new authors generally cannot grasp it!

Xian Qin, Shen Han, Tian Sui, when I saw the introduction, I put Sui and Qin and Han in the same row. Sorry, I couldn't help it😆😆😆

Because I think martial arts characters may not be able to defeat famous historical generals, and even 99% of martial arts characters cannot defeat famous historical generals. Because the world can never defeat the temple

A bitch, a routine from ten years ago, no writing skills, no experience, no imagination, blind gay bar writing, fake and empty, highly toxic

I hope you don't overestimate Qin Shihuang. In history, there were many emperors who were better than him in civil, political, and martial arts. He mostly took the title of the first emperor.

After reading the first two chapters, I felt like I could actually sign the contract

As soon as I read the introduction, I knew that the author couldn't control his writing skills and would be ruined later.

I can't stand it after reading Chapter 4. There's too much nonsense. Chapter 4 is just water.

Please ask, what is this book about? Now I don't know what the main plot is, what is the protagonist's goal? To put it more directly, is the protagonist a loyal or rebellious minister of the Sui Dynasty? This book gave me the feeling that it was a hodgepodge. I didn't know what was written from beginning to end?

After reading more than ten chapters, the author has been raising doubts. He has not said anything about the protagonist's skills, abilities, and realm. He is vague and pretends to be profound.

They are all sworn enemies, with traitors inside and enemies outside. As a result, the protagonist, as the strongest single unit in the country, played house with others on the way to support the core point, comparing each move, and said in advance before sending out skills: Bring out your strongest form, I'm afraid you won't be able to catch it. High, seconds, well written, I deleted the book and left. Nausea

Writing novels is just enough money. After reading the previous chapters, if it hadn't been for the last paragraph of the third chapter, I wouldn't have known who the protagonist was. Also, the plot jumps abruptly and the complex settings don't make people feel novel. Instead, they are complicated and difficult to read. Brother, I came here to read a novel and relax, but you made me feel even more uncomfortable. The food is tasteless.

I saw it was a big recommendation, so I clicked in to take a look. Before I read a new book, I have to check the comment section first, but I clicked on it and saw: Good guy, there are only a lot of bad reviews, but there are only a few good reviews! Can such a book be highly recommended? Of course, I can't read this book without reading its content, so I'd better read it first! My ability to resist poison is still very strong 😁😁😁

Resist hydrology, the Milky Way is weakened

The Immortal Martial City was shattered into nothingness and only had a lifespan of a few decades 😒

After reading the first few chapters, there is too much nonsense and no substantive content at all. It is also a super hydrology.

Fortunately, the place where Wang Yangming stayed in Guizhou was Longchang, and he sounded tall and domineering. If he were in a cat farm or a pig farm, I don't know if other people would be embarrassed. I would definitely be embarrassed if he wrote a novel.

Fast update

The monthly votes are full and I really can't afford rewards. Come on update

This continuation is too watery, please replace it.

What the heck is this? It doesn't matter that the main character only appears in the third chapter. The content of the next ten chapters is even more watery and boring, and there is no desire to read it. What's even more ridiculous is that the protagonist is not even introduced at all, and his strength is unknown, but every aspect describes the protagonist as strong and resourceful, which makes it completely unrealistic. What is the difference between this and self-promotion?

After reading three chapters, the protagonist showed up, and he didn't explain anything, just his identity and background There was no training system, just military ways, military formations, and a fake sky Looking at the description of the war, the blood went straight to the ninth heaven? ? ? What kind of thing does this describe? At the beginning of the recruitment, we mentioned that there are many countries, but we didn't see where the Sui Dynasty was. The old and the young were dead. There was no national background and situation, and we didn't see what the protagonist wanted to do. Strive for hegemony? Assist? Neutral liver sanctification? Look at the introduction. Is this Gao Wu? It doesn't even have much lifespan, it's pure destructive power? Decline of Qi and blood, this situation seems to be only seen in the first stage of martial arts, right?

It's true that anyone can write a book, and you have to borrow some novels. If you can put characters from other people's novels into your book, what you wrote is a piece of shit.

It was a bit interesting at first, but then it got all messy. It's not as good as AI.

I haven't finished the first chapter, but I just felt it was awkward for the reader, and I felt that the author wanted to write something grander. I don't know if it's me that's the reason why I can't read.

Are there so many people fighting for a copy of Zhuge Martial Arts? Even though he has been reincarnated, he still fights for a copy of this, and gets beat up after beating him. If you write about Zhuge Liang, you might as well write about Qin Shihuang's request for the elixir of longevity. If you have a fight, write dozens or hundreds of pictures to make a fuss.

The writing as a whole is okay, but why is it intermittent? You can even update once a day, or write slowly. Oh, what a pity. Goodbye. Goodbye. Goodbye.