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I read six pictures I can only say that the author is too anxious and wants to write a fairy The protagonist is a ten-year-old child Looking at the background of the article, he should have never gone to school Such a ten-year-old child My sister was killed by an escaped slave two years ago Died in front of me As a result, the protagonist actually awakens his mind I began to feel pity for the escaped slave I kept thinking about whether the escaped slave should die I saw "no" It made me happy Yes, that's right, the protagonist's sister should die. The protagonist will become an immortal in the future, so the protagonist must be able to do things different from other people, and the protagonist should have no hatred

After reading it, the writing is okay and you can read it. Pig's feet are natives, and those with golden fingers can directly cultivate immortality. Chapter 1: Poison, an ordinary strong man uses an iron rod to blow the person's head open, and uses the iron rod to blow the head away. Suggested modifications.

Sometimes I think, I'll just cover my head and write until I reach one million, whether it's good or not. But I am very happy to see how many tickets come in every day, because some people are watching, some are encouraging, and some are approving. Some new readers gave me several pictures at once, which is exciting. Oh, how wonderful. Please give me a dozen of such good people every day! And the more votes you get, the better your results will be, and more people will see it. Isn't this the joy of writing a book? Everyone, please: I am responsible for writing the book, and you are responsible for voting? Is that possible? If not, you can just criticize me in the book review! I won't necessarily change anything that's written badly, but I'm not happy after reading it. Swearing is good for your health, so you're allowed to scold, don't be afraid. Of course you just scold me and don't bring your family with you. That's crossing the line! Come on, boast the best. Thank you! Grateful! I know the bosses are watching, What a wonderful weekend, Click your fingers and encourage me, thank you!

This book can only be said to be the stupidest thing I have ever seen. It's not just an idea that poor children in ancient times became masters early, but if you look at what the author writes, it sounds like shit. Not to mention that poor people are ignorant, but after practicing martial arts, their IQ is as stupid as that of a pig. If you can't beat someone, just run away. If you beat someone to death, why don't you listen to someone else's nagging? ? Is this the person who killed your master's family? Will the protagonist act like a fool and listen to others nagging him? Either send him directly to the West, or run away directly. So speechless. You wrote that the protagonist doesn't even have an IQ at the age of three. No wonder there is no performance.

It seems a little deserted recently, which makes people a little panicked. I can't help but think about my article: Water? It sucks? Shao almost? Think a thousand thoughts. Two updates a day, there is a lot of water and rot, why is there no one around? Please ask the big boss to reward you with votes, the big boss will give you a reward, and the big boss will reward you with face and criticism. Sir, stop, give me a thumbs up and then go! ! !

I am naive, an old bookworm, I don't know that I have a treasure in my hand, I cannot expose it, the writing is too rough.

It's quite interesting. Come on, I'll definitely follow it.

It's really well written. There are just too few updates. This type of genre will become popular if there are too many words.

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Well written. Fairy novels usually start with half a million and become a god with one million. Stick with it. My suggestion is to go to the palace as soon as possible to solve the mystery of the immortal and embark on the official path of cultivating immortals. Don't worry about it. What kind of spiritual energy will be generated where the protagonist's stone is placed? It has the function of the five elements. It may be a cave. Immortal mansion and the like, develop golden fingers, and solve the problems around the protagonist. Those who can cultivate immortality will bring them with them, and those who cannot cultivate immortality will arrange a place to live in seclusion. Solve the problem of the palace and get on the road as soon as possible. The last few chapters are too watery and no effective content has been written. Finally, come on, I am optimistic about you.

Now that I have read nearly 70 chapters, my level is limited and I can only say that good books are my thing.

I've given you two tickets. It's a good write-up. Keep it up. If you want to read more, novice authors can only rely on the volume of updates, or they can recommend each other in the book reviews of authors with similar scores. Increase exposure.

The writing is very good. Come on, I will support you and put it on the shelves as soon as possible.

It's okay, but it feels like there's a bit too much nonsense.

The writing behind it is really good. The plot and theory become more and more interesting the more you read 👏👏

I took a quick look and found that this is the author's first book, and the writing is pretty good. The indigenous people still don't have much sense of belonging, and they don't feel much refreshed. You can still read Shuhuang. No eunuch is very good, support him. Come on.

After reading the first chapter, I lost all interest at all. The others are all closely related, and this one is all about one thing and another.