The Past in Hong Kong

I understand that the author needs to add a character arc to the protagonist, and needs to make the character grow through cuckolds and mixed financial confrontations, but it is very unpleasant to read. One of the taboos in Qidian novels is to abuse the protagonist. If you don't give the protagonist an immediate backhand slap in the face after abusing the protagonist to add a climax to the excitement, most readers will abandon the book, including me. Because in essence, most readers read online articles because life is stressful, and they hope to improve their mental happiness through various levels of enjoyment in online articles. Similar to smokers who smoke, drinkers who drink, and game fans who play games, they need positive feedback from the level of enjoyment to persevere. The author wants to write a financial stock article, so it is best not to add too many emotional lines to the main plot, which is very unpleasant. If the author determines how to write a cuckold novel at the beginning of the outline, please cuckold the author at the beginning. Most readers will tolerate it. After all, the bottom line is that after abusing the protagonist at the beginning, most authors will not engage in emotional abuse of the protagonist, and focus mainly on the main career line. However, the author used a realistic theme and combined it with online writing, which gave most of us old bookworms of online writing a big meal. With the development of online literature now, at least for male comics, I can say that readers like me have transitioned from harem stories to pure love stories. In other words, it is the most suitable comfort level for the emotional line to have only one female protagonist. Why? The main reason is that I am really tired of reading harem novels and bulldozer novels. If the protagonist is a prodigal son, then bulldozer is nothing, because most authors arrange it so that the emotional line will not be entangled. In fact, to put it bluntly, it is still a single female protagonist novel. Why is this happening? It's because bookworms of our age have really watched too many movies and don't like them anymore. The enjoyment is concentrated on the career line and the plot line. Rather than an emotional line. This is also the reason why Qidian's pseudo-chronology and chronology have become so popular recently. I have personally patrolled the comment areas of many "Siheyuan" period articles and cover-up period articles. According to the comments in the comment area, the oldest age is probably in their 60s or almost 70 years old. Among them, I am deeply impressed by the fact that there is an aunt who is a book friend in her 60s. Her family could fly in and out of Hong Kong in the 1970s. There are many male book lovers in their 50s and 60s who resonate with the various prices and popular elements of the period. So these people, including bookworms like us who are more than ten years old, are really tired of reading this kind of harem literature. Instead, I prefer a simple single-heroine romance. Of course, as mentioned above, the satisfaction lies in the career line and the plot, not the emotional line. So the author is very unhappy about using emotional lines to abuse the protagonist. If we want to read about torture, wouldn't it be good to read realistic novels by well-known authors? For example, Yu Hua's various abusive writings. In short, forget it, abandon the article for now, I hope the author can receive comments on this article. It's up to you to listen or not!

I have read the latest, but I haven't subscribed to the chapters that basically involve emotions. The emotions written by the author are really separated from the characters' personalities. He is calm and decisive in the stock market and career. He has such an unclear idea of ​​​​how to deal with emotions. The fresh dancer blames herself and the rich girl is entangled. This is not a romance novel. Can a person, especially a highly demanding financial elite, really have two circuits of life and career? Isn't this inappropriate schizophrenia? It's hard to stand up to scrutiny because of the severe separation of characters. In addition, your subject matter is not popular, so the only ones you can insist on watching are some veterans. Such obvious mistakes and omissions, don't persuade the few veterans to quit.

This novel of yours is not satisfying at all, and there is no sense of struggle or grudges. The whole novel is dull and sluggish. If you are good to the protagonist, your relatives are all dead. So what is the point of your development? You have become rich and don't return to your homeland without getting rich, just like walking at night. You will either post on the wrong platform or entertain yourself. I boldly predict that if you write like this, you will not even get perfect attendance at the starting point, and it will be difficult to read. If your collection exceeds 5,000, you have won the lottery. Your first three golden chapters are not readable at all. Will the passing reader be attracted? When I read this chapter today, I was only about 40 years old. Think about it for yourself.

I will tell the truth in this book. It might be worth making into a TV series. If it had been written as an online novel 10 years ago, it might have done well, and it might have become a classic. But it is too late to write now. The biggest poisonous point of this book is the relationship between men and women. Look at all the business in Qidian. I'm talking about books with good grades. The love line does not intersect with the business line. Love is love, and business is business. Once they are connected together, the two things, love and business, will feel different. Today's readers cannot accept a man working hard for a woman, and it is even more unacceptable for him to delay making money. Especially in business writing. There can be love, but love can only be an adjustment. But it cannot become the main theme, especially if love hinders business development. It means that when the protagonist is in a business war with others, he can accept certain setbacks, but what is unacceptable? It's because you fell in love with someone else that it caused business damage. Otherwise, this is the biggest poisonous point in business novels. And this is a business article in Xiangjiang. To be honest, business articles in Xiangjiang are definitely difficult to write, because there are actually very few channels for making money. To be honest, finance is not easy to grasp. It is very boring to just speculate in stocks. At this time, you can write about love, but the love at this time must be able to help the protagonist and help the development of the protagonist. Thislike is acceptable to everyone.

This novel is delayed by its classification and title. Change the title of the book to one related to Hong Kong. Classification goes to the city. The results are estimated to be more than 2 times better.

There is no doubt that the book is a good book, but the results may not be particularly good even in urban areas. This is not what I said. The fact is before us. All the business war articles in Qidian that are most popular must be rebirth articles. Unless the author is sure that the book is good enough to let everyone go beyond this point, it is tantamount to setting a precedent. There is no need to refute me. After reading twenty or thirty chapters, of course I am convinced of this book, but the living environment is like this

The author is definitely a novice, because it would be impossible for a veteran to write a novel about stock traders and business wars into a brain-dead romance novel. He finally made 3 million (in the late 1960s in Hong Kong), but in the end, for the sake of the love of his children, he worked hard and even went bankrupt. I'm ready to give up the book.

I read Chapter 4 and I don't know what I'm writing about. Entering the main line is too slow and grinding. The way it was written about 20 years ago, I didn't even know who the protagonist was unless I read the introduction. Brother, if you write like this, it's to be expected that you'll be offended.

Come on, author! Well written. I'm actually very picky. I can't stand ordinary novels. You have a level. The subject matter is also very unique. Describe a person's growth through the ups and downs of the stock market. At the same time, through the various people around the protagonist, we witness the history of an era. And the complexity and diversity of human nature. I think this is a good book in this era where cool writing and trivial writing are rampant.

What does this book say? I have been reading along, except for the latest updates in the past few days. When I happened to see the protagonist falling in love with the rich girl, I knew there was a similar plot. I really don't like it, I think the other female characters in these emotional scenes are okay, but this rich lady really can't stand it.

Good guy, almost a lone star of evil. Those who care about the protagonist in the early stage are either seriously injured or dead.

I'm a little speechless. It's a good financial business. Why do you need to add so many bloody plots and impose hatred?

The book is a good book, and the author's writing style is very good. The problem is that I came to Qidian to read Shuangwen...

The shortcoming of this book is that it is less entertaining and refreshing. Readers come here to have fun and entertainment, not to chat with a girl. The same, the relationship is protracted, the protagonist is indecisive and dawdling, just pursue it if you like it. You are worth a million, and you can even dawdle and whine in front of a dancer. You can't change the fate of a dancer. Why are you feeling sorry for yourself? The writing is as bloody as Qiong Yao's drama. If you don't like her going out to do things, and you don't want to marry her, just take care of yourself. It was also popular in that era, why did you come to Hong Kong to trade stocks? Go home and farm. Isn't it just to change your destiny and make yourself less powerless in life? You can help the people you want to help, but if you write the protagonist so bloody, so indecisive, like a bitch, like a dead eunuch, which reader will like it?

1956 Stowaway in Hong Kong 14 years old Playing stocks Are you serious?

A bloody little book! When we got ashore, someone actually sent us food, so forget it. If my mother is written down to death, there is no need to read this book! To be honest, I believe someone sent food when we got ashore, but there was no other purpose. This is very unreal!

What does it mean when the author of an online article writes so heavy-handedly? Dissuaded

After reading Chapter 77, is this rich girl's father really an elite who wants to climb up? In this operation, you either don't agree to the bet from the beginning, but you agree to the bet and then destroy it before it succeeds. Isn't this a feud for no reason? It's better to make a revenge when you see the potential of the protagonist. After this matter is over, you don't directly kill the protagonist and eradicate the roots. Still doing this makes me dream back to the villains in Hong Kong dramas from the 1980s to the 1990s. If it is not explained later that there are greater benefits for him and he can be solved. The protagonist simply wants to marry his daughter to the rich second generation, so don't force yourself to be an elite person. With this level of layout, you can live in an apartment of a rich man. If you really try to climb up to the upper class, you don't know how to die. In Hong Kong from the 1960s to the 1970s, who are those in the upper class? They are not ruthless people. They have experienced smuggling by directly driving small speedboats to hide from warships. They support the uprising and maintain various societies and fruit party agents in the colonial army. None of them are human beings. They can make money by being friendly without a life-or-death conflict. They will do it if they really want to. Otherwise, the big local families in Hong Kong can eat up the capital from the mainland, expel the Taiwanese forces from Hong Kong and Macao, and then start a takeover war with the British-funded consortium. The father of Zhu's father's operation, vision and magnanimity can only be said to be really inadequate.

You can read it before it is released. If you are bored while eating, you can read the free chapters. After it is released, it is not worth it.

In all the chapters involving Zhu, the protagonist's performance is a mess, like a licking dog. On the contrary, the chapter about stocks is quite good.

Forget about writing about old-fashioned industries like the stock market and real estate, and also engage in bloody plots

The protagonist should be like Brother Jiacheng, who has a problem with his head now

Is this book written by aborigines, not time travellers?

If a person cannot try his best to bring joy and happy life to his family, relatives and friends, even if it is only temporary and short-lived, then what is the meaning of life in this world? Would the author feel comfortable writing those tragic fates to the poor characters in the book? Will it make your readers feel comfortable? Some people may want to cater to the author and say that there are more tragic things than this in reality. But those people may have forgotten that we are in a virtual life. Pain and sadness are allowed in online articles, but they must be used with caution. What are the ups and downs, the ups and downs? The various writing methods depend on the author's style. But there should be few online readers who would actively seek out pain, experience sadness, and find joy in suffering. From pain to pain, from one sorrow to the next. What's the point of such a reading experience? The male protagonist is an efficient money-making machine in the book. In addition, what meaning does the author give to his life?

Does the author have an outline? What is the protagonist's career line? Have you been trading stocks? It's too young, this book should be placed in the realistic category.

It is indeed a rare good book. I hope the author can keep writing!

When I write a book, I first want to write what I want to express, and I want what I express to be recognized by more people. As long as you review the work you are writing from time to time and refer to some meaningful comments from some readers, you will always get better. It will be difficult for newbies in the beginning, so keep writing as long as it doesn't affect your family.

This is a period article describing Hong Kong from the perspective of stock finance. As a stock trader, I like it very much. As for the emotional drama, it's okay. Many people who work in finance are very homebound because they are very lonely, so it is very difficult to arrange an emotional drama for the protagonist if it matches the protagonist's personality. If you don't arrange more than one emotional drama for the protagonist, many readers will be dissatisfied and it is not logical. Support, come on, update more!

Is the protagonist 14 years old? I'm going to sneak away

I'm used to reading cool articles, but I can't watch this one. I'm in my 30s, and it brings tears to my eyes while I read it, and I feel so panicked.