Fairy Tail: Marry the Dragon Slayer Queen Erin at the Beginning

Actually, the author's writing style is quite good, and many of his ideas are also very good. Anyway, I think he is better-looking than the president next door, but his grades are way off the mark... So these are two big flaws that I have to turn into Lucy and complain about! The first point is to follow the old and bloody problem that has been scolded. Shui Wen, things that can be written in three or five sentences must be added with various meaningless and repetitive modifiers. Good guy, where are you going to expand your sentences? The second point is that there are some vulgar jokes. You know, Fairy Tail was an anime more than ten years ago! Many of the settings at that time were indeed in line with the trend at that time, but time flies and it is no longer suitable now! Tiezi, you can't just absorb the dross... Especially the basketball of Heizi, the soaking of kidneys with wolfberry, it is okay to play with jokes occasionally, but the author lets himself go more and more as he goes to the back, like a wild horse that can't be held back.

When I read the first book, it was indeed quite surprising. Since there's basically nothing to see at the starting point of Fairy Tail, it's not bad. After reading the second book, I found the same problem that I should have discovered in the first book. The writing style is too close to the original work without having my own style. In addition, the number of words is too watery, such as fighting, drinking, and so on. Since these are not subordinate to the main line, they can be briefly mentioned rather than described in too much detail. This will bore me, and maybe there will be readers who feel the same way. Even if these are deleted, it will not affect the plot. There is no need to add them specifically for the so-called original Fairy Tail. After all, this is a fanfic and should be written in your style. This is what I thought after reading it. I hope the author can see it.

I ordered this book around 150 chapters, but I felt a little bored, and then I stopped reading it. The main feeling is that the plot content is almost the same as the previous Fairy Tail book. It is very similar. It is all brought in by experts, and then there may be a character who is always stuck at S level, and there is also a naked Gray and so on. Although I haven't read the latter part, the descriptions in the first part really make me feel that the plot direction is similar to the previous one.

After reading it, except for the part about giving free benefits to Mira in the early stage to join the club, which is a bit awkward, everything else is okay. It is a masterpiece of Fairy Tail fandom. The harem is not about large numbers but about finesse. Two giant mines, Irene and Moon God Dragon, are enough.

No, it's almost finished. Why did you still cut it?

If the protagonist rescues President Makarov's parents, and if they are to be resurrected, there is a high probability that they will be resurrected through special magic to stop time or to travel far away. At that time, Makarov, who has a rebellious eighteen-year-old grandson, will face parents who can be his son and daughter-in-law... Isn't this another Olgaster?

In the latest chapter, the content made me feel a little uncomfortable. I don't think Erza is the kind of person who quarrels before taking care of business. It's clear at a glance which one is more important: her revenge on the cake or her sister's joining the club. The Erza who doesn't distinguish between the importance and the importance is not the one I know. Not to mention she is still young, it is obvious that the Fairy Queen Erza may have disappeared in this novel, and as Erza's cook, she has no motivation to catch up. Now the protagonist is a destiny person who simulates saving various tragedies, but in contrast, the portrayal of other characters is a little bit random. The personality traits of many characters have been abused, and many of the daily routines are repetitive, giving people a sense of aesthetic fatigue. This chapter may be a transitional chapter to lead to the exciting content that follows, and also lays out some foreshadowing, but I don't know why I suddenly feel so tired and empty. I'd better adjust my mood first. I'll probably continue to check it out after the adjustment is over.

In addition, there were exactly three female Shura fields in the first generation...

The details are not as detailed as in the next-door "Fairy Tail: I Don't Want to Be the Guild Leader", but he is still writing the main plot and after the story happened, the author wrote it before the story was more difficult. I have read both books, and they are both pretty good.

With this result, I'm really afraid that you will become a eunuch again.

Is there any heroine who is a fan of the first generation?

It's a bit small, keep it as I'm afraid you'll die if you keep it 😅

Try not to write the scene where Gray takes off his clothes, it's too watery.

How long has it been since the protagonist simulated? And why didn't Lucy trigger the simulation and save her mother?

The protagonist is more like an elemental dragon than a celestial dragon. Can he use the seven elements, metal, wood, water, fire, earth, sun and moon? And as Irene's husband, you can't leave out the attachment and separation magic. You must study it carefully. This is really useful.

By the way, I really didn't even see the supporting characters like Rebby and the cowboy couple.

Recently, the Hundred Years Quest has been aired, and Fairy Tail has become popular again.

Adding a simulator system always feels like it lacks a sense of immersion. In the movie The Time Traveler's Wife, you can actually set the protagonist to be cursed by the God of Time and always jump in time. This makes it more reasonable for the protagonist to join each story. It would be okay if the protagonist obtains information through simulation, but now it is a bit abrupt and loses a lot of storytelling if the protagonist sleeps and the other characters are drastically changed.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I went to see that president five times, five times! I can't stand it until it reaches two chapters at a time. I skipped around until I reached chapter 20! ! ! I am short of books! ! ! ! I've been saving, waiting, and raising. It's been almost two months, and you haven't written two million words yet! ! ! You used to have the energy to write hundreds of thousands of words a month? ? ?

Hey hey, first, hey hey 😎

You will become semi-invincible immediately. You can recruit all the people in the guild and become stronger. You can do it.

By the way, do you have any ideas about writing the first and second simulation extras?

I want to ask, has the Dark Monk not been accepted by Mirajane? It seems that she has never used it.

The subject matter and writing are obviously good, but it's a pity that so few people read it. I can't see a few people commenting on each chapter.

Let's raise it for a while first, it's not enough to see.

My writing has improved significantly, I'm so happy! It not only retains the original style, but also unlike the previous book, where the narrative is verbose and filled with a lot of meaningless descriptions. The newbie feel of the previous book was too obvious, and the water injection was serious! The writing of this book is obviously much more streamlined, and it is much more comfortable to read. And I really like the delicate emotional description in the article. The author understands that Fairy Tail should be joyful and full of heart-warming emotions! As for the male protagonist, Uemoto was ambiguous from beginning to end, and then, it was gone! Gone! ! Gone! ! ! This book finally makes up for the regret, it's a straight shot, it's perfect in one step, it's very good! I look forward to more emotional interactions with Irene and Selene. If there are three people in the Shura field, if there are two people, they will sprinkle candies, and they will give back double the candies they owed! Be bold and innovate in the plot, as long as the style remains unchanged, it will be the flavor of Fairy Tail! Keep up the good work and support you!

Let me ask a question, where is Airei's brother Sword Master Dragon? Still alive? Isn't it already on the same path as the original plot?😥

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