Cultivation: Take a Farming Space with You

The protagonist has reached the fifth level of Qi refining. Haven't you even learned the most basic spells like fireball, ground stab, golden needle, water arrow? To fight the lowest level monster, you still have to rush up with a sword and slash with your arms?

I have always wondered whether your fish are male or female. Why can't they reproduce? You need to buy seedlings again.

It's a waste of time to buy all your space fish seeds.

True knowledge can be seen in the subtleties. The author's writing style is very good and not inferior to many v5 authors. Don't be unfinished. Come on, author.

The current map is limited to the world view of the current protagonist's combat power. After the plot is advanced and the world view is upgraded, I will draw a new world view map~ Here is a new author asking for a wave of follow-up reading~ Your support is my creative motivation~

1. Prices are too uncoordinated. If there are spiritual veins in the space, you can dig spiritual stones 2. You can hide in the space when fighting with the sea monster 🙂

The only thing you need to pay attention to is that the author should read the comments. After catching so many bugs for you, at least make changes, otherwise it will affect the perception of subsequent readers! There are also some small details that still need to be paid attention to. Sometimes the sentences are not smooth and not very logical. The author can think about these details again and have time to optimize them later. That's all for now, cheers! 😁

Spirit fish, mature, won't they give birth to little fish? Why buy fry a second time? If a fruit tree bears fruit, can't it be used as a seed? Just buy one. If you grow the elixir in a closed space, you don't need to take care of it at all. Just use it as grass.

The foundation-building family can be called an immortal clan. Then this "immortal" deserves a good taste! ! !

The editor is just different, a stew pot of manure. If pests are attracted, the seedlings will not move into the space.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing style is not.

No, there is no sense of immersion

There are indeed a lot of small problems. At the end, I almost skipped reading. The family has existed for such a long time, and the way of distributing resources should be reasonable. In this book, the family is going bankrupt 😰 How do you survive until now? When the protagonist exposed his golden finger (not exposed, but exposed his energy source to continuously obtain cultivation resources) and tried his best to support his family, I felt that something was going to go wrong. Xiu Xian, you really think everyone is a good kid, right?🙂 The author should know how to reciprocate his efforts. My family helps me practice, so I will never give up and repay them. That's no problem. But the protagonist's efforts have far outweighed his gains. And if you help others to improve their cultivation level even if they are at a low level, or even surpass yourself, there will be an unavoidable poisonous point: Who cheated? This is very depressing. There is no distance between the protagonist who is cheating and the one who is not cheating... Can you tell me whether it is depressing or not? If the protagonist reluctantly breaks through to foundation building, and then randomly distributes some Qi training resources, wouldn't the above problems not be so many minor problems? Who dares to ask about foundation building? Brother, how did you get so many resources? It's not easy to ask the patriarch, baby, the family is short of resources, why don't you stop suffering yourself and donate your resource points? ... In this way, the golden finger will not be "exposed" easily, and the poisonous spot where the golden finger is discovered will be skillfully avoided. The biggest problem with this book is that there is too much content about the family. It should be reduced appropriately, and some actions of the protagonist living alone are added, and the golden finger is too stingy... Just thinking about a portable space with a third-level spiritual vein that is less than fifty acres is quite joyful. Can twenty or thirty acres of third-level spiritual veins support a Zifu family? It is hard for a foundation-building family to imagine... After all, the higher the level, the number of family members increases exponentially. If you include mortals, the number is even higher. Forget it, that's all. I hope the author can understand. Come on!

The protagonist keeps saying something like "I already know the plot, but it's still the same old story" recently. It's so distracting that it's a bit hard to break down. I feel like I can't write it well.

If you have the resources and space, why don't you raise a combat spirit beast?