Recast the Glory of the Species in Douluo Continent

After reading a few chapters, let me tell you a few things for those who were attracted by the title and introduction The protagonist is not Nasida Adopted by Tang Hao Eye of the Spirit Grass System Worship the Master Teach Tang San elemental combat skills Become sworn to Sanwu Then I couldn't stand it anymore and died of poison. Be sure to read the table of contents and reviews before reading the book.

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It's so bad, how come it's recommended?

This beginning reminds me of a previous Douluo fanfic, Uchiha Tomie

Become a disciple of Gangzi? ! Run! Extremely poisonous! When he saw his disciple Gangzi, he ran away!

It is recommended to read the table of contents before reading 😏

The God of Wisdom does not have the wisdom of the God of Wisdom. You are not required to have an IQ that exceeds everyone in Douluo Continent. Knowledge is like an encyclopedia. But a god who has been in power for so long has his own thoughts. The part about being picked back is not very poisonous, but the descriptions of apprenticeship and other original god characters are not brilliant at all. It is specious. You can say that you have to follow Douluo's rules, but you can't be apprenticed at the beginning. You know that you are going to school, why don't you understand it first? , And there is the point of controlling soul beasts to sacrifice. I really want to complain. Your strength has been suppressed. Even your body has returned to four or five years old, and your spirit will be suppressed and weakened accordingly. As a result, you started by controlling a century-old soul beast. I can tolerate this alone, but I can't bear it if you control someone for ten thousand years. To say the least, the creatures in this world have weak souls, but you control a soul beast with strong spiritual attributes. Isn't it the same as other ordinary soul beasts in terms of spiritual energy and strength? And you can control the ten thousand year soul beast, so you still need others to help you hunt souls? You can completely control multiple soul beasts to siege the soul beasts you need. You haven't described each character's character and thinking, as if they all have a unified template. Moreover, the protagonist and other original God characters have a lot of abilities. As long as they have the same attribute skills, they can be used. So what's the point of hunting soul beasts? If you simply unlock the restrictions, wouldn't it be enough to just find one? If it's to enhance mental power, can your god's mental power be improved by these rubbish? In other words, the protagonist's ability is suppressed or sealed. The soul ring is actually equivalent to a key. Once the seal is unlocked, the power will slowly return. Your body size is very different from that of a soul beast. What effect can the soul beast's power have on you? At best it's just a key. The protagonist's ability is also a big problem. As a god, even if he loses his power, his brain should always be there. The power of elements can only be used to place skills in the protagonist's hands, without any control skills. And as a god, he has authority. You can communicate with the forest and vegetation to obtain the knowledge you need. Don't talk about the earth. The torrent of knowledge is too big. The God of Wisdom itself is the World Tree, which is the root of the protagonist. There is too much knowledge, so you can only accept part of it instead of all of it. I personally suggest that the author should re-open a new book. , This book has become so poisonous at the beginning that no one will read it. I have also thought of the subject for you. The protagonist travels through Douluo. You give him the Eye of God. A single attribute is enough. If there are more, it will be easy to write about. The connection is the knowledge and brains of the original god and modern society. You don't have to follow the crowd or step on the three. Like this, you must have your own main line and ultimate goal. All behavioral plots are moving forward towards the ultimate goal. When writing, you must consider the character's personality and power. I personally recommend not writing about emotional lines, because 99.9% Of novice writers will fall into this pit.

The God of Wisdom Worships the Master🥵

I recommended the book "Kill Tang San alone at the beginning and become a pure Douluo man". After reading a lot of Douluo fans, they were obsessed with how hard they wanted to drive. After the first few chapters, I couldn't feel it anymore, so I started writing it myself. The development is generally based on the plot of the original work, mainly to change the poison point of Tang San's Bluesilver Grass cultivation and control, and at the same time, the story is extended based on the new martial soul theory. Brothers and sisters who like to analyze the world of Douluo Continent are welcome to give us some advice.

Isn't it possible that the following plot will involve Tiandou, Qibao and other big forces each inserting one, and then PKing each other to earn destiny points, and then Xiao Wu, Zhu Zhuqing and so on fall in love with the protagonist?

The young author also hates being wet, but he cannot start the story by having the protagonist start to fight against being wet without thinking. That is illogical and will make readers feel that there is something wrong with the plot. The protagonist is a pure Tiwat, not a plot prophet. He did follow the protagonist Tang San in the beginning. No matter how much everyone hates Da Shi, we have to admit that Da Shi is indeed one of the most important supporting characters in the original work. Using the author's destiny value setting, the master's destiny value is indeed more than that of ordinary people. The protagonist first meets Da Shi when he is six years old. In our terms, he is a child with a yellow mouth. Do you want to see a six-year-old genius flourishing in Douluo Continent like a fish in water every second? Anyway, the author doesn't really want to do that, it's so brainless and readers will feel tired watching it. If you want to oppose Da Shi, you must wait until the protagonist is older and has more say. Finally, please rest assured that there will definitely be things you want to read, new books for newcomers, and I will do my best to prevent you from being poisoned. If you feel that the recent plot is really unacceptable, you might as well say it in the comment area and the author will try his best to change it! Bow Admit your mistake 🙏🏾🙏🙏🏻🙏🏼🙏🏽🙏🏾

This book has a lot of poisonous points. It is recommended to read it without thinking. If you are tired of regular Douluo fans, you can read it and treat it as a novelty

It can be said that this plot has basically changed a few points from the other book.

Your plot is a complete plagiarism.

How should I put it? It's a bit superficial, and I don't like the master, let alone the god of wisdom who worships the master as his teacher. It's poisonous.

By the way, I thought of a trick, put up a canopy to display the contents of the book ten thousand years later, and then stitched it with the original

The subject matter is quite good. The author has changed the setting and outline, and then he can actually write the book again to avoid the poisonous points. The plot will be perfect and perfect, and it will be a good fanfic Come on, I hope to see your new book 🤝