Seeking Immortality Through Dawn Dew and Breath

It describes that the protagonist is too mentally retarded, only seeks supernatural powers and magic, not the enlightened path, does not distinguish between good and evil, blindly accepts demons, does not know the enemy's situation, goes straight into the demon nest, damages the body, only relies on his will, and cannot make decisions before taking action. It can only be said to be a mediocre work.

I would like to make a small suggestion. I wonder if the realm of Shentian and Dongxuan can be changed to Shenxuan and Dongzhen and then Yuanshen. The realm of Shentian feels a bit awkward. Of course it's just a suggestion.

The background and the concept of the exercises are quite good, but the writing is not very good and not rigorous in all aspects.

I persisted until Chapter 36 and couldn't stand the cliche plot. The pig's trotters are extremely stupid. What's the result of talking about pig's trotters traveling through time and being reborn at the beginning? What kind of thing is this written? In Chapter 36, the money was stolen by a child. Later, it was discovered that the child had several younger ones. The money was given to that one, which made him even more poisonous. He said goodbye and never saw her again.

I thought it was okay after reading the introduction, but the main character in the book is clueless and likes to be a nanny.

The protagonist is like a fool, with no sense of vigilance at all. To say he is vigilant is just what he means. His personality is superficial and superficial.

The protagonist makes elixirs from Qi. This is the first one I've seen in a book. It's very classy. Unfortunately, after reading Chapter 104, I can't stand it anymore. Going to the cliff for three people to escape is no problem, but going to the city to help is a problem. They meet by chance. If there is a case against these two people, the protagonists are mixed together. As for the content, the author understands nonsense literature. Some words are simplified and read more smoothly. Now when I read it, I feel that the next sentence is explaining the previous sentence. It's totally unnecessary. It makes me very upset to read it.

You can still watch it at first, but you can't watch it after you get to the cave fragment. It's like a retard. Jiuli's place is a mess, and then the baby's place is obviously being plotted. Just go to the place where you don't want to do anything and just kill it. Who can the Holy Mother show? What's the use of raising that stupid bird in the future? The more you write, the more retarded you will be. You can look at the front and pull it down later.

This book,,,,, that one, I'll run away first

How do you continue to see this kind of person who has no strength and likes to show off everywhere? Disgusting stuff😰