Konoha: the Ninja World Under the Six Eyes

Ohnoki: Our opponent is the legendary Uchiha Madara. Are you sure? Otomo Naoki: If it was in its heyday, it would be a bit troublesome. Ohnoki: Will you lose? Otomo Naoki: I will win. Otomo Naoki: I'm really sorry for not letting Madara-sama enjoy himself to the fullest. Without a moment of sadness for the death of Otomo Naoki, those who immediately rushed to the battlefield were the Five Shadows of the Five Great Ninja Villages. Next episode, Death of the Five Shadows I did not feel sad for the defeat of the Five Shadows for a moment. What immediately rushed to the battlefield was the resurrected undead, the pilot of Otomo Naoki-Orochimaru

The writing is too flat and doesn't feel interesting. Now there are still washing Sarutobi dogs, which is really rare.

I always feel like I have to stay alone.

It looks awkward. Whether it's the protagonist's mentality or behavior pattern, or the inexplicable dream. The overall plot is very bland. It even looks a bit boring. I was given a cheating golden finger, but it was cut in half and the character creation of the protagonist was also very awkward.

The ideas and ideas are great, but the plot feels a bit boring.

Even 5t5 can't get past Kakashi in the early stages of Shippuden, and a single six-eye is useless.

The writing is too flat, and there are too many narratives that have nothing to do with the protagonist. Spending money to watch something like this, I really have no desire to subscribe. Skip to read, there are not many pictures, so I can only save them to see how the author will advance the plot. Keep it, if it continues like this, it will have to be removed from my bookshelf.

Writing spells in Naruto is the same as mentioning Korean culture in Chinese culture It's either that it's not possible or it's inappropriate.

It's a bit baffling that the six eyes are defeated by illusion. According to this logic, the Byakugan should not be able to restrain most genjutsu, but the Byakugan should be restrained by genjutsu~

No, there are still people writing about Erbai becoming a clown.

Alas, the key plot of the protagonist has not changed at all. We all know what happened in the original work. This is a fanfic, so it is okay to change the whole story, but the three battles in the ninja world are portrayed very well.

Don't follow what others say, there's nothing wrong with the protagonist's name, it won't make a scene. I don't know how much better it is than a name that smells like fantasy. It's just that the golden finger is a bit off. In a world where cheaters are everywhere, it would be unreal for the protagonist to be low-key. I feel like I have no expectations for a world without hangings. If it was 10 years ago, I would have watched it with gusto, and this level of hooking would be fine. But I have read too many, hundreds of similar, relatively plain articles in which I work hard to weave my own weak advantages and then go through the plot. This kind of thing without special highlights lacks expectations. The hanging does not have to be big, the key is to make it interesting to collide with the characters inside. If you are small, you need to describe the characters delicately, or have wonderful dialogues, or have a big imagination in the plot. This requires even higher standards for the author.

The subject matter and details are quite good, but after reading several chapters, I feel that the character of the protagonist is still blank, mediocre, and has no characteristics or charm. Also, the protagonist is often "helpless" in the past. After reading it, it feels a bit 😥 that the protagonist lacks the self-confidence that Liuyan should have Continue reading and see

Protagonist: Madara-sama, I'm sorry that I didn't let you enjoy it to the fullest.

It is said that the curse can be solved. It is assumed that the power of the spell is caused by emotions, especially negative emotions. Isn't there something like Yin Escape Chakra and Dark Chakra in the Naruto setting?

So the protagonist with 6 eyes can analyze all ninjutsu? Infinite chakra? Even if it can be used, it feels so-so. It's not as good as Reiner's Rewriting Eye and Annihilation Eye.

The plot of Ye Cang made me regret voting for it.