Witch in the Steam Age

Don't think of this kind of classic, routine and homogeneous book titles. There are too many shoddy titles like this, which makes you think it's a simple witch training, or do I want to become a witch training master? The whole point of having a sense of purpose and fitting the content is completely different from the routine naming.

It's already 130,000 words long. I've been thinking about it and preparing to write a summary about the power system. no.1 Authority: The pinnacle of extraordinary power in the world, the way is to sign a contract with the witch and let the dead thorn flower parasitize the heart to achieve a symbiotic relationship. Ability 1: Tough life. After the dead thorn flower parasitizes the heart, it will grow branches and leaves, which run through the whole body like tendons. If a person with authority has his limbs cut off or his head cut off, he will not die. Ability 2: Unsealing the power, releasing all the abilities of the contracted witch, providing reinforcement and stability like an accelerator. (Usually, you can dig deeper into the witch's power and master stronger power.) Weaknesses: 1. Forcibly destroy the heart of the person with power, 2. When the power is unsealed, the Death Thorn Flower will return to the witch itself, and the person with power will lose the tough life effect of Death Thorn. ... no.2 Runes: A special technology widely used in the mainland. The ability is usually a combination of several similar runes to form a spell, which is a bit like magic but with subtle differences. (There is no such profession as Rune Master, because its complexity can only be prepared in advance as a prop) ... no.3 Gospel Prosthetic Transformation: A kind of extraordinary born after the rise of the steam age, which uses mechanical devices to transform the body. The transformation is divided into three levels, ① simple arm replacement, ② semi-mechanical transformation like Old Hawk, ③ full body replacement. This technique has derived three branches (there may be more in subsequent chapters) One: Church Mechanical Priest, (blessed by machine soul) Second: Ectoplasmic steam armor, the Holy See Knight on the mechanical side (similar to armored warriors, Gundam pilots, etc.) Third: Alchemy Doll, which is closely related to the transformation of gospel prosthetics Together, the body performance is higher than that of human beings replaced by physical bodies, but since there is no soul, it can only execute pre-set instructions ... no.4 Enchantment: Similar to runes, but there are many types of enchantments and require specific ritual compositions. None of them have appeared yet, but they will appear soon. ...... no.5 Devil A supernatural creature, similar to a witch. Each devil has its own "trading method". They collect souls through the "trading method" to strengthen themselves, and can do many incredible things, similar to throwing coins to make wishes. Opportunities, as long as you have enough money (soul) Two professions are derived from this Great Spirit (Devil Parasite Version): After successfully usurping everything from the Great Spirit, the devil will have his own body, and can use the Great Spirit's "Ritual of First Life" to expand his "trading method". Traders: People who make deals with the devil. They may have some strange abilities by selling their souls, but most of them carry a heavy price (basically all traders will be eaten alive by the devil in the end, but there are always exceptions, but only they and the devil know the truth.) ... no.6 Great Spirit: Nature spirits born with the blessing of the world, similar to Totem Spirit Druids, the specific abilities they have depend on the kind of nature they are born in. There are two forms: one is nature itself, and the other is the incarnation of the Great Spirit made by oneself (such as Selene listened to Roland's incarnation of the siren) Setting 1: The greater the number of followers, the stronger the Great Spirit becomes Setting 2 The ancient Great Spirits practiced the way of nature to accumulate followers, but as the times change, they also have to keep pace with the times, thus developing new follower models (such as mercenary style) Derived from this Create a profession Great Spirit Follower: Not yet available, to be added later ... no.7 Demon Be dug out of the ground, or something that climbed out on its own (not written here yet) Ability: similar to extraordinary beasts Setting 1: Like the devil, each demon has its own unique bloody ritual, and they enhance themselves by completing specific rituals. A profession was derived from this Devilman: not appeared, will be added later ... (To be continued) There are many settings and extraordinary ways later, the things are much older ξ( ✿＞◡❛)

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But um, regarding the plot of finding the devil, first of all, what is the protagonist's reason for looking for the devil? Is it necessary to find it now? Did I miss it or something? Second, in just a few dozen chapters, you have crammed in four plot-based games that can be said to be the beginning of the main chapters: cultivation, the witch organization and the military, as well as the hostile country, the devil of Gard, and another devil. The first two can be said to be connected together, but the latter were suddenly inserted in a very short period of time. It's like a large-scale RPG that doesn't slow down your level. You can get through the main plot very quickly and skip the plot. But if you don't have a side character or develop your character, you are destined to be beaten to a bloody pulp in the end.

It is highly toxic, with all kinds of inexplicable plots, and the protagonist is fooled into being fooled and continues to do thankless things. Everyone knows that if you invest too much in something, you have to give up, but if there is a better one, you will not give up😅

The name of pig's feet reminds me of an old friend

He doesn't look very smart under normal circumstances

Although this book is stitched together with some other books, the background setting and world view are still quite huge. It can only be said that a lot of things have been stitched together, and the writing style is not like that of a newcomer. I read it two or three times and stopped after reading one or two pages. Unexpectedly, the writing was not bad. But this book is really a bit ink at this stage. It feels like there is no main line. The title of the book is Salvation, and the content looks like the heroine merges all the bloodlines and becomes the savior. The problem is that the author may want to write about the random bloodline of the heroine each time, and then the male protagonist will try to find ways to fuse it. The author wrote 199 types, and the heroine needs to fuse 197 types. If you don't know when to fuse each one, and the fusion is a running list, you can't just surgically change the circuit in the future. It's too slow. From my personal point of view, it is directly designed so that the heroine is randomly selected, and the male protagonist is accompanied and then integrated. This can streamline a lot of content without losing the fun of 197 (monster girl forms). It can be seen that the author's XP is a monster girl. If we try to fuse bloodlines every time to advance the plot, not only will it become a running story in the future, but we may also speed up towards the end and directly fuse dragons or demons, and finally more than a hundred bloodlines will be fused at will. I still hope that it will be based on the main plot, with the random bloodline of the heroine as a supplement, rather than the other way around, advancing the plot because of the resolution of the random bloodline. At this stage, the heroine's emotional module has not been removed, and the frontal lobe of her brain has not been removed. The emotional module has lost part of the fun. If every bloodline fusion in the future is the main bloodline, it will really drag on. The book is a good book, but I hope I can clearly distinguish the priorities, whether the story of salvation and the world view is the main line, or the story of the heroine merging bloodlines, which is the main line. If the advancement of the plot depends entirely on the blood conflict of the heroine, and then the male protagonist acts to resolve the conflict, then the heroine will bear the existence of a drag bottle to some extent. Over time, although the heroine is very cute, but because of the needs of the plot, the blood conflict is forced to advance the plot, she will inevitably make people I find it boring. There is no filial son in front of the bed for a long time. The heroine and the hero support each other and help each other. It will be much better than the heroine dragging the hero down unilaterally. At least for so many chapters at this stage, the heroine has been letting the hero carry the burden forward. From my personal opinion, I don't want to order or control the author to rewrite. I just mentioned it and hope that the author will not feel unhappy. The book is still well written.

Dragon Form

If the author doesn't agree, I will continue to subscribe as long as there are no major thunders.

A rare gem in a new book is that this title should really be considered. It's a title that I don't want to click on as soon as I see it. A lot of these titles are very homogeneous. Although this book has a lot of stitching, the setting is fully integrated, but it is not the kind of work that looks like an assembly line and you can know the end after reading the beginning.

Will there be a demon maid, plant senior, stupid Oudou and two supreme goddesses?

If the eunuch is here, just give him a squeak and I will remove him from the bookshelf! I'll leave it for now while it's updated.

The first two chapters are good, but the rest doesn't feel like a development. Well... For example, the beginning is Sylvie who has just been taken in by the doctor, and then in the fourth chapter the heroine jumps to the middle of the guide. Skipping the most interesting stage of the mentally damaged heroine from zero to one to two, she jumped directly to the repair level of fifty. In the process of the male protagonist redeeming the female protagonist, the author's description of the female protagonist is more like an emotional three-no radio wave girl. It feels to me that the so-called salvation only needs to make her understand the common sense of life, rather than endow an emotionless tool with emotions bit by bit. Although in the setting, the heroine herself has not had her emotions removed, her performance now is too good. The performance in the first ten chapters is too different from the first chapter. It seems that she has already recovered after eighty or ninety chapters, and her expectation and sense of accomplishment in rescuing the slave girl have been half lost.

Each chapter is like reading a new thread, and it has nothing to do with the previous chapter. It is very tiring to read. The setting looks interesting, but reading a story is like playing a jigsaw puzzle, so why not. It's not like playing the old Miyazaki game. The story is so broken that only the author himself can understand it.

There is something very well said and written. The author must work hard and keep writing.

The writing is good, but too many settings are thrown out at once and the explanation is not very clear. As a result, some terms feel confused when I read them. I got a little confused after chapter 30.

The author does write well, and the whole book looks very comfortable, but the problem is that the protagonist looks too suffocated. As a war hero, I feel like I can't do anything. There is no information in hand, and the strength is not top-notch Until the latest chapter, the protagonist himself did not seem to show anything different from others. When the spirit is attacked, it is Heloise who comes out, and when attacked in daily life, it is the heroine who takes action The protagonist's biggest ability should be that he is very charming 🤓🤓🤓

More updates, why not more updates 😭 If you don't read it, you will go crazy

I watched the first 5 episodes of Violet Evergarden, which is interesting. Will it be the same in the later stages?