I'm a General in the Wasteland

This one is a bit similar to Apocalyptic Red Alert, but that's it. This one still has a lot of innovations.

After reading it, I agree with everyone's posts. The protagonist is a bit of a virgin, and has an overly good temper. If it were in reality, I certainly hope that this person really exists, but in the novel, it is still a post-apocalyptic wasteland war novel, which made me very unhappy. Maybe the author can refer to those Red Alert fans, most of them are good.

The writing by a new author is good, but there are some unreasonable things. The base construction is a bit hasty. Do you think it is reasonable to place the base in the enemy-occupied area? Moreover, the construction of the base is too expensive. A wall can arm an infantry regiment. With this money, you don't want to waste time building a base area with explosive troops. You can defeat Qingyang Town with one regiment and gain another wave of fertilizer. Then continue to explode troops to encircle and suppress local resistance forces and recruit people, which directly forms a positive cycle. You have to understand that the more soldiers you have, the more money you have, and the more money you have, the more soldiers you have. There is no need for cooking soldiers as the food has individual soldier rations. Meat jerky can be made in the gathering place and solve the work problem. There are too many snipers, so it is better to get a few more tubes. I can't think of a Chinese who doesn't want to be covered by firepower. Cool articles can become popular as long as they are cool enough.

Although there are some places in this book that are not very good, the author will also make corresponding rewrites based on readers' feedback. So far, it seems that some places have been improved quite well. And the author is a newcomer after all, so we can't ask him to write a stunning masterpiece.

It is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, and he lacks experience and so on. I hope readers can understand it. If you don't like it, don't criticize it 😭😭

At present, looking at the world view, it should be quite good, with both superpowers and technological factors.

Everything is created to nourish people, and people have nothing to repay God. A group of untouchables surround me every day, sucking my blood, using my resources, and fucking trying to make me do things😡What should I do? Only kill! 😡Haihu blasting punch! 😡😡👊👊Whale-killing fist! 😡😡👊👊

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The speed is updated, which is very good. The author should update it quickly. . .

General, the toilet in Shisongzhuang is clogged again. Please clear it quickly.

Can you stop shaking your head and smiling bitterly? If you can have a higher status, you can wave your hands at every turn. The main character makes me feel so weird. I have never seen anyone shake their head and smile bitterly in all my life.

Author, hurry up, hurry up, hurry up, it's too short.

The Wasteland Army series of books, as a new author, the author's writing is okay, but the update is a bit slow.

Author, when will the massacre begin😡The enemy must be killed, the strong must be killed, the fw must be killed, and the Holy Mother must be killed, boring, I want to see the blood flowing into the mouth of the river! Kill kill kill kill kill! !

Come on Σ(|||▽||| )

It feels like the protagonist is a fool who knows nothing but the military. If the civil affairs say let it go, the residents of the territory will not use it. Everything is done by the army. The people in the territory are kept bare and manpower is wasted. The Holy Mother is mentally retarded. Business is also completely liberalized. There is no one of your own. You are used as a weapon and the female boss spreads gossip. It is worse than the previous warlords. Warlords know how to arrange their own people in important positions and cultivate their own power.

Just kill the monsters. What's the point of bringing a child? You're kidnapping a child

Although the previous writing was a bit embarrassing, it obviously became much better after Chapter 40.

The writing in the front is too strenuous, but fortunately the writing in the back is getting better and better, so you can read it later.

Regarding the fact that the author is very handsome in real life (personal feeling)

In fact, the author does not need to listen to others. After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people. You must first clarify one thing, which is to establish what kind of protagonist you want, whether it is kind or cold.

People who write in a wasteland environment look like they grew up in a peaceful environment.

I am Vlad von Carstein, Count of Sylvania, Elector of the Empire, but everyone likes to call me "the noseless" vampire. I love literature. Growing up in the desert country of Nehekhara, I aspire to become a cultural person who studies pyramids and mummies in the future. But I never expected The Pharaoh Queen was greedy for my handsome appearance and forcibly transformed me into an immortal vampire. Being immortal is certainly cool, but I missed my most beloved literary path. I practice martial arts intensively. Forced to become the queen's husband, I had to strengthen my body and extend my endurance. I spent a hundred years practicing martial arts and became one of the twelve most powerful vampires. But I never expected The seemingly powerful vampire country was besieged by the Tomb Kings. I fought bloody battles on the front line. The queen had already escaped early, the country was ruined and the family was destroyed. I was forced to wander around. I practice magic. While wandering, I obtained a Necronomicon and became a pseudo-believer of Nagash, Lord of the Undead. I was soon appreciated as the Commander of the Undead and was also given a Ring of Resurrection. Immortality, infinite resurrection, and reaching the pinnacle of life are just around the corner. But I never expected When the unlucky Master Na was about to ascend to the throne of death, the black pyramid was accidentally blown up by the Rat Man. Nagash failed to ascend to the gods, and the undead believers also turned into ashes. I began to pursue power. I, the false believer, survived. Suddenly I realized: I have to rely on everyone to run, but I am the most reliable. So I transformed into a prince from a neighboring country, married Isabella, the daughter of Count Sylvania, adopted and transformed a group of little vampires into sons, and became the most powerful elector in the empire. Then the battle for the throne started. I want to be the emperor and control my own destiny! But I never expected During the crucial battle to invade the imperial capital, my resurrection ring would be stolen! So she was attacked by the high priest and fell to death on a wooden pile under the city wall. The vampire army was defeated, Isabella died in love, but her son Manfred was complacent with the resurrection ring. I began to yearn for justice. The ruthless backstabbing made me look back on my thousand years of life and found that I am both civil and military, proficient in magic, powerful, and in love, but I still inevitably end up in a miserable ending. The reason is that I always hang out with a group of villains. So after I beat up the unfilial son and took back the resurrection ring, I decided to change my life - to become a partner of justice! So, I led the army north to fight against Chaos in the Final Battle, rescued the last emperor Karl Franz, killed the leader of the Blood Dragon Knights who took refuge in the devil, and killed the plague doctor who murdered King Raun. Being so righteous, I am already a pillar of the right path. But I never expected The evil god Nurgle resurrected my beloved Isabella to deal with me. I didn't want to hurt her, but I took off my infinite resurrection ring during the battle, put it on Isabella's hand, and then jumped off the city wall with her in my arms. After giving up eternal life, I was nailed to the wooden stake under the city wall again, while Isabella was resurrected by the blood ring and got rid of Nurgle's influence. But the world also ushered in final destruction... When I jumped to the justice camp, the villain actually won? ! I suddenly realized: There are many forked roads in life, and it has nothing to do with good or evil; everything is a trap, and no one can control it at all. But a bard from Cathay said that he could help me change my destiny against the will of heaven. Should I believe him? Or is it another big pit?

Write about good people in apocalyptic themes. This is an urban theater. Brother author, you are on the wrong set.

A novice author, writing novice novels.