Fuso Sword Heart Picture

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I didn't have the patience to continue reading. It's not that the writing is bad. The author's writing style is pretty good and it reads very smoothly. Maybe it's because the realm is privately set by the author, so I can't remember it well. Also, I read more than a dozen chapters and the heroine only appeared very rarely. That is, the heroine was not pushed in front of me at the beginning of the story. Instead, she kept writing about other plots and other characters. For a protagonist like me, other than the protagonist, everyone else is irrelevant, so after so many people appeared, my patience was exhausted before they entered the main plot. I don't know how this world is set up. What I personally like is to change the map, either multiple worlds, from a small world to a big world, or a whole big world with a large area, which can be explored one by one, which is more fresh. Judging from the introduction, it seems that there is only one world, because the conference where the heroine became famous in the introduction was mentioned in the previous chapters, indicating that it happened in this world, without changing the map, which made me feel that the world is too small (there may be a big world later, but I have not seen it, so I can only talk about what I have seen so far). If the dozen or so chapters I read were all foreshadowing of the plot, then I think the foreshadowing was a bit too long. It didn't grab my attention right away. It wasn't attractive enough, and I didn't have much desire to read on. But it can be used as a break while waiting for the update. It's good in all aspects, but it's missing something and a bit wordy. That's probably the feeling.

I couldn't read the first dozen chapters because I was impatient. After I persisted in reading, I got a really good warning! Good writing, good characters, good story, super awesome👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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Let me tell you a little bit about my own feelings (I don't know if it's right or not, just treat it like I'm talking nonsense) First of all, there is no doubt that Da Da generates electricity for love. So I respect all the author's decisions. Don't be embarrassed to cut off the article just because of comments or monthly tickets. Spending so much time and energy every day and staying up late to write articles only costs a few hundred a month. It's really outrageous. I think no matter what, you have a clear conscience. I started reading it at 240,000 words. I remember that it was a book shortage and it was really boring. In fact, because I personally don't really like Sword Xiuwen, I only clicked in after reading it three times. Let me talk about the most impressive plots I have seen so far: Lingsang's revelation of cultivation, Shuangtian Spiritual Realm and the Kyushu Conference. I thought about it and realized that these plots all involve collisions with talented disciples of different styles, so they should be written more excitingly. It's not that the writing is not wonderful, but if you only have one person, it's hard for me to express this feeling. I think another reason why it is not popular is that most of the market for sword cultivators has been taken away by some completed novels and I am a sword cultivator. Of course it's great that Da Da dares to create a new system of cultivating immortals, but to be honest, the audience for female immortal cultivating articles is too small now, that is, some people may not like this type of writing, and they may be more familiar with Qi Lian Qi Building Fund Dan, styles like Dao Wei Yi or Yun Ji Dada. Anyway, the summary is that it is better to consider it comprehensively. It is still this data and reading after writing to 600,000, which is really distressing. Because of the great writing style and the concept, it's really good. If, I mean if, if you want to cut the text or how to do it, you can discuss it with the editor. Beast Control will also have a certain audience (I think the style of Dao Weiyi or The Practitioner is more popular. Of course, I don't mean to criticize the author). Because it is difficult to get approved, you must communicate with the editor if you want to cut the text. (Also, the writing of Da Da Yin Xiu is also quite good. Maybe it can be combined with the control of beasts. But if you cut the text, it depends on the editor's intention. I may think that the system of cultivating immortals needs to be changed.) Anyway, I support all Da Da's decisions!

Hold the grass, I saw this book on QQ Reading, and I read 17 chapters. It has the flavor of the classic fairy tale with connotation in the past, but it still has no cp. The author writes well. I came to Qidian to vote for you, come on! ! !

The author's writing style is very good, very well written! I don't think there are many characters, and I can almost remember them all. The concept is very good, but the heroine is often alone. It would be nice if she had three or two like-minded partners with her.

It looks great. The author is great. Come on, you can let us see such good works.

The content is quite good, but I feel delayed by the introduction (Purely my personal opinion)

I haven't read it yet, so I don't know what the content is. But I like the title, introduction and the name of the heroine.

After reading the first two chapters, I feel that the author's writing style is good. There are too many characters in these two chapters, which feels a bit messy and scattered. I don't know what the author wants to convey.