Edge Mechanic

After all, many readers are the silent majority. Hope meat, human sticks, etc. That are common in rimworld are fine if they appear in the hostile force, but if they appear in the protagonist's force, they will arouse a lot of disgust. Secondly, the villain should not be too supermodel. Having advantages and disadvantages can better highlight the character's image. In fact, most people are B-level or even C-level villains. Finally, there must be a clear main line, and then branch stories. After all, it is not a game. Most people will not like to watch a story simulator without a main line. Wish you better and better

Well... Chapter 72 has just been released, and I have to mention some issues now. I don't know if it's because of a reset, but sometimes the plot will suddenly pop up with some unseen settings or plots that are too out of the ordinary. For example, the setting of mutual perception between fried rice fragments was not explained in the previous article, and there was no reaction or special reminder of the plot when first meeting Obsidian. This led to the sudden jump of the perspective to the castle in the next chapter, which made readers confused: where is the castle? Have we seen it before? Why was Obsidian kidnapped, and Qiuye still knew about it? Obsidian's ax has pieces of fried rice on it? I didn't bring this ax later. . Although it is said that many questions can be answered by the reader's own imagination, such imagination is very meaningless and will make the reader feel disconnected and weird - these plots that should have been written by the author have been inexplicably omitted. Chapter 71 also has the same problem. At the end of the previous chapter, I was still at the edge of the boulder. Why did I suddenly jump to an unknown place? Although there is a little explanation, there is so much separation between the two paragraphs that I wonder if I have read one less chapter (maybe I have really missed one chapter.?). The problem with this plot jump is huge. Then, some details of events are too vague and unclear, making people wonder what happened. For example, when Qiuye and Mobai confessed to establishing a bond, the process of establishing a bond was not reflected. This is the only scene I can recall right now. There should be some others, but I can't quite remember them. When I wrote it, I may have thought that the explanation was clear enough, but it seems that there are several chapters between the last time I mentioned the spiritual bond and the next time. Remember that this special effect may not make any difference to the old harms of the world, but if you want to expand the group of people who read the book, timely explanations are very important. Finally, there are some descriptive details, and I can feel that the author is trying very hard to express the feelings in his mind, but unfortunately, some are strange and some have unclear meaning. Take, for example, the countdown to the time when Qiuye and his friends returned to the colony from Shushu Village. At least I didn't understand what he wanted to express at the first time. I stopped and thought about it for a while before I understood it – oh, it wanted to express that the group of people had been "normalized" by fried rice technology! But no, such a place does not allow readers to use their brains. It only means that the author's writing skills are not very good and readers cannot quickly understand what is going on. After all, we are not here to read novels to be stunned by the details. The above is me, myself, personal, subjective, and the unreasonableness I felt during the reading process. It does not represent the majority of people. If there is something unreasonable in what I said, you should just laugh at it and don't take it to heart. If you agree... Then you can only say that these problems do exist and must be corrected immediately. In short, I hope the works will get better and better. It's rare to find a few Huan novels, but don't be a eunuch. I will keep reading (after all, Tista is still there) ps, this is my first long review for you, you have to be responsible 😌

It's so fast. I really like the settings in Marvin's advanced secondary core equipment construction machine.

It's been a long time since I've experienced the disastrous start. The start is a trio of psychic supermen with full plug-ins and ultimate modifications saved at the end of the game.

From the group. ———————— No matter what the evaluation is, it seems pale and feeble. ———————— The most important thing is: keep writing. Come on. ———————— Above.

Although players of Yuan often discuss various ways to use people efficiently, I think it is more interesting to live kindly in this chaotic world, right? Although it is easy to suffer from real competition (600 pirates chasing the kid, refugees setting fire, etc.)

The Golden Mouse faction is designed to hate the mechanical race extremely.

Edge of Immortality and SOS2 are very popular recently. Should you consider linking these two mods?

No, buddy, isn't the protagonist a native of Zhonghuan? Why did he suddenly become a time traveler?

I'm from Tieba. Let me see what's going on.

Although the plot is still very messy, after the changes, at least it won't be worse than the original.

Aren't the machines a creation of extraordinary intelligence?

Have you changed the previous plot? I said why it can't be connected. Author, you..., At least open a single chapter to talk about it. You have confused the readers who are following the latest chapter. Since the plot has been completely rewritten, why don't you just open a new chapter?

It turns out that the author is also a RimWorld player?

At present, it seems that the empire's surveillance of this planet is terrible. Just a few days after becoming a mechanic, he sent a knight to overlord and forced him to bow, showing off his force and dragging the protagonist to join the empire.