Wizard, Starting from the Magic Eye

After reading Chapter 12, the writing is good, but I feel it is too bland, and the writing is not impressive. It is just a bowl of white porridge without even a side vegetable.

After reading the beginning, I felt that it was written in a hurry, and there was an inexplicable feeling. The wizard was not calm and calm, and he was annoyed and angry at times. Especially the plot from the beginning to catching the thief, the continuity felt very ridiculous. I don't know if it's because of the writing or if I misunderstood it (only my personal opinion)

Quick👀What did I find? A lonely and empty author

It's quite interesting to see what happens next. Continue to read more. Like to read and write more.

Just look at the catalog, and there will be books with n kinds of items or abilities in just a few pages. Only those who have passed junior high school or below will read it. Bookworms will only read the stories.

The easiest thing to do is this. Past and present lives. Pig's feet character background. In the past life, let's take Blue Star as an example. The most likely transcendent one is science, biotechnology, a machine. The simplest. Breathe in and out in one direction to maintain health. The tendons themselves are very impressive, and then there's the Dantian. What we are talking about is the lower Dantian, the middle Dantian is the knight's seed, and the upper Dantian is the soul. The story is just made up of connections and the structure is there, right? This life is simpler. Get a mixed race. The talents of multiple races are not excessive. In the end, these are all assists to help Pigfoot get through the novice stage. After becoming a wizard, it all depends on the author's direction. Isn't it awesome without having to hang up? The last and simplest thing is the ability to make money. Wizards also need money. Pigfoot's parents are level 4 wizards or knights, and their family has a small world. It is not easy for a pig's feet to become a wizard. Just have hands. Finally come on.

I prefer watching the wizard system. Personal suggestions are for reference only. First, it is also the biggest problem for many authors. That is where the pinnacle of the wizarding world you want to write is. It's level 4, level 7, level 9. The final result is different. Let me give you level 7 as an example. Most. Then there are a lot of level 4 wizards. It's the flow of all realms. Focus on expansion. The wizard system architecture must be diversified. At the same time, the level of local knights will be higher, right. Second, it's this plug-in issue. If you bring it, you bring it. There is no need to avoid taboos. Then it is the model of Shuangwen. In my opinion, everything is cool. The truth is, you can play games for 999. When it's over, you'll make it ridiculous. Right. Just feel good and that's it. In my opinion most cheats can be avoided. I am a wizard of the Ten Thousand Worlds style. Knowledge system. Isn't it true that your memory will be damaged in one more lifetime? It's about getting through the novice stage in the early stage. Later, wizards don't look at talent, right? The character's background story, past and present lives are all up to you. Do you need to hang it? In fact, it's not necessary. If you fail, 99% of the time it will be done by off-screen advancement. Without it, the story will advance and it will not be easy to jump or collapse. Get a structure for the direction of the wizard system. Write slowly. Write more unique different worlds. How nice. The most simple and crude way is to make the most of your strengths and avoid your weaknesses. Go to other world battlefields more often. Fight all races. Easy to write. Loot more materials, resources, knowledge systems, etc. Finally, let's talk about the eyes. Detection is the easiest. I personally recommend a heart-wrap group to you. Common people have 2 eyes ➕ 3 eyes. Can control creatures. If you want to control a beast but your own eyes can be buffed, you can control up to 3. You can practice eye magic with your own eyes. Noble 2 plus 4. Royal Family 2➕5. Royal 5 is special. Is this a reference from another book? Right. Finally, come on, I hope it will succeed. It's probably in vain now. You haven't thought about it yourself? It's not the author's problem that it's too voluminous now. 90% Of the authors are basically dead in Russia. Your book now seems to have a final score of about 70 points. Come on. Good luck. These are all personal opinions, please don't comment if you don't like them, thank you.