Naruto, But I'm Yoriichi Tsugikuni

(Adult) Tsugikuni Ichi: Single-hand grip strength: Conservatively over 200 tons. One-handed punching power: Conservatively over 400 tons. Overall: 800 tons (upper limbs and arms), breaking 2,000 tons with the strength of the whole body is not a problem. The breathing method can mobilize any muscle in the body.

Recently, some readers have been saying that a second time a character transmigrates is not as good as the original character directly transmigrating. But, as I said before, if someone has Yoriichi Tsugikuni's strength, talent, values, appearance, experiences, personality, and memories, but has discarded some of his saintly sentiments, then no matter who he is inside, he is Yoriichi Tsugikuni.

There's no need to say that the Earth traveler is Yoriichi Tsugikuni; if Yoriichi Tsugikuni is an Earth traveler, then he's not. It makes no sense to first travel as Yoriichi Tsugikuni and then travel to another world.

One hundred and fifty tons, what does that even mean? 🤔 Even a young cub like the Desolate Heavenly Emperor would get hammered if he came 🤣

Actually, the writing is not bad, and the premise is quite appealing. However, the plot is a bit too drawn out, and it feels overly saintly, making the protagonist seem like they lack independent thought and have a lazy, sluggish feel to them. It's not very satisfying to read, and it even feels a bit silly.

It's about Yoriichi Tsugikuni, but after reading a few chapters, I feel the author doesn't have a deep understanding of this character. He's practically the chosen one of the world, possessing perfect insight and immune to genjutsu. His ability to observe the human body is even stronger than the Byakugan and Sharingan.

As I read on, I realized something was off. There was far too much internal monologue and narration. The thoughts and explanations before each action almost took up an entire page, and each chapter was less than 2000 words. It felt like trying to make a whole batch of dumplings for a little vinegar.

Similar to Zhang Sanfeng, they've been deified, touted as the most talented in every realm. However, this is limited by the world they live in; they're either more talented than those in high-level martial arts, or have more experience, a better temperament, and higher comprehension. In short, they're always at the highest ceiling.

The characters aren't really developed, but since it's fanfiction, this isn't a major flaw. Then there's the plot. It feels like the author is just trying to reach a word count. Things that can be summarized in one sentence are constantly analyzed and explained, back and forth.

Does the author agree with the boastful claims in the public notice? Then you're finished, aren't you? The ninjutsu in the Naruto official guidebooks all possess the power to tear the sky and the earth apart, while the Truth-Seeking Balls have the power to annihilate everything.