
A Ranking of Honkai: Star Rail's Most Iconic Moments, Starting with Aventurine
盘点崩铁名场面,从砂金开始
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- Completed
- Length
- 452k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 2y ago
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194Chapters
67Recommendations
7.9kFans
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It seems the author has a bias against Sundays. His approach certainly has its flaws, but the main characters didn't actually provide a real solution. Furthermore, I don't think all the characters should oppose Sundays. I believe their views on Sunday's ideals should be multifaceted; your portrayal is too one-sided.
Paying after only 23 chapters? That's really greedy. It's written like a diary entry; I suggest they learn from the author of "Honkai Impact 3rd: Skywalker" next door.
Hurry up, hurry up!
Did you take a day off? Not today?
I feel it could be changed to a post-event revelation. Otherwise, the more the worldline changes, the harder it will be to write later, unless you're aiming for a quick conclusion. If you finish quickly enough, you don't need to worry about the game contradicting itself.