Billions of Clones Hang Up, Low Martial Arts Hang up and Become Supernatural Powers

So far, so good. But there are also some pitfalls. For example, the protagonist's brother's family is obviously pulled into a dangerous whirlpool. Once they die, the book will basically end. Also, the gold finger is not exciting enough. I personally feel that instead of letting the gold finger open high and have low pressure combat power, it is better not to use such a big attack at the beginning, so as to avoid the pressure feeling in the later stage.

Every time I arrived, I was a step late. Every time I arrived, I saw my family members being bullied. Can you write it differently?

The first few chapters focus on the poverty of the protagonist's family. Others come here to read novels, not to see the protagonist suffer, but it doesn't matter if I write about it.

Xiantian is rare in the world, but the bandit leader outside a small city is Xiantian...

Shocked the whole audience! The whole audience was shocked! Shocked everyone! My brother and sister-in-law were shocked!

Is this a victory in the Easter match? ?

If you can't afford to open it, you don't have to open it, and forcefully suppress the protagonist.

I'm shocked that I cut it off right away. The author is also a ruthless person.

I've read ten chapters and it's a shocking novel.

There are currently 9 chapters out of 57 that are shocking

I was shocked when I read the table of contents. I thought it was another invincible and powerful intelligence-reducing article that shocked me to the end.

Poison King, I don't know if it's a modification or some other reason, it's a mess.

I've never seen Judas on the first day it was released! ! !

It's better to write about traveling through the deer and the cauldron, and be a local bully.

The settings are unreasonable. Do you still need a bunch of messy materials to practice sword skills?

Shocked, eunuch after first day