Lu Mingfei's Infinite Time Travel

I like it very much. I rarely see Lu Mingfei go to other worlds. I just like to see Concubine Ming go to other worlds and kill everyone with her golden eyes!

It is still not recommended for newbies to write original copies of Infinite Streams. There are many things to consider, such as the world view, indigenous characters, character descriptions, etc. After the subsequent writing skills are improved, they can then create their own original copies. The writing now is too boring and boring.

The writing was okay, but it was too uneventful and not particularly exciting. Moreover, at this point in time, Lu Mingfei had already joined the executive department after the Nibelungen Plan and became the president of the student union. Although he is not decisive in killing, he is not so soft either. This character is more like Lu Mingfei before Long Si. There is another question. Looking at the category of gods, what I hope to see is that you can gain something after going to a world, or that you can redeem superpowers, skills, bloodlines, etc. When you return to the space of the gods. Lu Mingfei could not exchange for anything else, but choose to use the word spirit in his own bloodline or improve his bloodline. However, I haven't seen any enhancements so far, so I can only replace some cold weapons with hot weapons, which is too useless. This causes teammates to become accessories when facing a fight. You can time travel to works such as animated comics and novels. Those works have an audience to attract readers and have a general storyline. Original works may not necessarily be good-looking. Here are some of my opinions.

The author's writing is good, but why are so few people reading it? I thought about it seriously. Most of the people who were attracted to read the book were because of Lu Mingfei, but there are no dragon characters at all. Even if there are dragon supporting characters, such as high school classmates, at least it will be satisfying to pretend to be good in front of them, which will attract people to read. But they are all unknown. Even if some other anime characters are introduced, they can attract some people, but using unknown characters only attracts fewer people. Second, the shock and horror in the first and second copies were basically not written out. No one was killed in a cruel way due to foul play, and no companion was killed. Instead, the story was written like a detective, which greatly reduced the appeal of watching this. Generally speaking, this kind of world travel requires a lot of contrast. For example, the people around the protagonist are saved because of the protagonist's ability, and other people scold the protagonist or strangers because there is no one to help them break the rules and die miserably, forming a contrast. You don't have any. There is a crisis surrounding the protagonist, but the other strangers who come with him have no description and are normal until the end. Third, no matter how you didn't pay attention to the second dungeon, you should know that you are leaning towards the protagonist Lu Mingfei. Some strangers or people from the dragon tribe or people from other animations will be brought in to increase the readers' sense of identification with the protagonist Lu Mingfei. Your second copy is still the same three people, no one else is there yet, and they are bound together so quickly. How is Nalu Mingfei any different from anyone else? He has nothing to do with the Dragon Clan, and there are no other anime characters. This is still the case for your original protagonist. Most of the people who came in because of Lu Mingfei were kicked out. The most important thing for you now is to think about who will come in to read your book, and who will be attracted by the title and the description of your book. If you haven't realized it yet, no matter how much you write, no matter how good your writing style is, not many people will read it. I hope you will think carefully about the plot development, but the most important first copy is to attract and retain people. You are already like this, and I can't think of any way to remedy it. Finally, I hope you come on! The writing is good, but the plot structure is not enough to attract newcomers and retain readers.

It's rare to see a book about Lu Mingfei in other worlds. Nowadays, I'm embarrassed to death by reading all the books about Lu Mingfei's return from xxx. To be honest, I think it's right not to write about the world of dragons. There are a lot of old thieves in the south of the Yangtze River. Those who write about the world of dragons must either have very good writing skills or have extraordinary creativity to complement the world view without appearing obtrusive. The bunch of Lu Mingfei who returned from xxx sometimes seemed very inexplicable. The conflicting world views were like Guan Yu transforming into a magical girl and holding the Pangu Ax to help Diga suppress Sun Wukong in the Lei Feng Tower. The power system was completely ignored. In the end, the homogeneity was serious, and it became a mindless novel. On the contrary, I think it would be easier to write if the author Lu Mingfei went to other worlds.

Awesome author, few write about Kui Ba

It turns out to be Quiba, now I have to vote one

I quickly passed this stupid dungeon. I came to see Lu Mingfei go on a killing spree. If the small dungeon is still so bad, then everyone should go directly to the original. Why are you reading this stupid thing?

It's very well written in Dragon Clan fandom, but it's a pity that few people read it The plot is a bit bland, to be honest, it's not exciting enough!

But why doesn't Lu Mingfei use the alchemy skills of the Yanling Dragon Clan?

Monthly tickets are en

I thought he was a lone wolf, but I didn't know he was in a team.

Author, I still admire you

Brother, are you a little slow in writing?🔨

Lu Mingfei was kicked by the little devil into the world of Game of Thrones. He went through all kinds of hardships and sat on the Iron Throne. The poor child will eventually become the king. With S-level hybrids and the blood of true dragons, Lu Mingfei and the Dragon Mother CP are not impossible to fight

After two years of writing, this result is still not missing.

Awesome, very persistent in writing

Holy Mother Lu Mingfei is quite stunned. No wonder no one is watching.