Begin to Awaken the Time System as a Full-Time Mage

Chapters 9 and 10 are a bit weird. How should I put it? The protagonist, a man in Bo City whose father is just a mid-level mage, is explaining an emperor-level demon to Mu Ningxue, a person who goes to the imperial capital. Author, think about it, is this reasonable?

Many readers think there is a problem with the beginning, but in my opinion, it is normal for the protagonist to be a little pessimistic after learning that he has traveled through a dangerous world like a full-time mage without a golden finger or backstage protection, especially since he is still in Bo City, a city where the Black Church is conducting experiments. Escape may be the only way to survive. Does it mean that he still insists on staying in Bo City even though he knows it is dangerous? With his insignificant power, he can't change anything at all!

1. The upgrade is too fast. You may finish it after just 100 pictures 2. Mu Ningxue has a cold temperament, and Mo Fan has been a dog licker for more than ten years. He has rescued her in danger many times and is willing to mark the Holy City for her, so that he and Mo Fan can get along Three, the new setting is too messy. It is good to have your own ideas, but it must be logical Four, the dialogue between characters seems pale and has no nutritional content. Even if most of the dialogue is removed, it will not affect the general content of your book.

What I wrote at the beginning... Makes me lose the desire to read on.

From one hundred yuan to two hundred yuan, does it double? Is this math taught by an art teacher?

There is a problem with this one today. Big question. According to the original work and developed into the national team, the protagonist's strength will be much higher. Without suppression, it would probably be over the top. Afraid of Mu Shi. What the hell. I don't know what to think about taking this risk. Wouldn't it be awesome to give Forbidden Curse Mage Hua Zhanhong a chance to awaken the time system and have a national backer?

It can only be said that the author knows how to persuade readers (only personal wishes)

The beginning will definitely kill a large number of readers. You will never become a strong person with this kind of mentality.

The protagonist helps Mo Fan pretend to be a well-connected person who sells resources at low prices. Only by having contacts can they last long, otherwise the guilt will be too great and it will be detrimental to the friendship. Although there are unlimited resources for the protagonist, there is no reason to give them away for free.

I generally don't read the Versatile Mage fanfic. If there is a heroine, please read the comments section first. Sure enough, it's the same. It's been two months since this book was released. Why is it still included in the new book recommendations?

Author, I really don't like your opening chapter. It's just a big flaw. There are too many flaws. That's a pity.

If the heroine is not Mu Ningxue, you can still watch it, but if Mu Ningxue really can't watch it at all

There are a lot of people who should be killed directly, but the protagonist didn't take action. It's so uncomfortable to watch. If it's a big deal because you're afraid of being targeted by others, just change your vest and kill them. Every time such disgusting people are let go, it's really uncomfortable to watch. It doesn't feel good to read a novel at all.

In the whole of France, as long as I look like Yue Fei, I don't look good.