The Witcher: Starting from the Conquest of the Endless Void

I saw something about the righteous world in the introduction and had no desire to click on it. It felt as disgusting as wanting to watch an anti-Japanese drama.

The content the protagonist learned was too complicated, and after learning so many things, the author still failed to write the protagonist's innovative and forward-looking witchcraft. The cultivation method of the wizard's journey is more about learning, research and innovation. The original owner Green started learning from the dog's nose, developing perfume to make money, and then the three secrets, the official wizard's three-piece set of truth, the annihilation hedge of the stigmata wizard, and the witch ancestor plan in the truth stage. These are basically things of his own based on learning the knowledge of the predecessors. But this protagonist is learning from beginning to end, and there is no sense that the protagonist has developed something by himself after learning so many things. The three talents are very powerful, but the protagonist's use of them is very awkward. There are too many things that the author wants to express, but the result is that nothing can be expressed clearly. The knowledge exchanged now is enough for the protagonist to study stigmata, but he just learns everything casually and then puts it down. The author has to consider slimming down the protagonist's knowledge and forming it into a system. There are three talents, each with a witchcraft, artificial sun, I am the universe, the shadow side of the world, and physical training. All knowledge and research are centered around the protagonist's natal witchcraft so that people will not think that the protagonist is mixed but not refined. Of course, the story is well written. The only Witcher Journey fanfic I have seen is Du Miao Miao. I still hope the author writes better and better! Come on! ! ! ! !

When the original protagonist is in danger, the protagonist still runs up to help block the knife? What is the spirit of self-sacrifice that moves others?

A rare wizard's journey fan, the monthly recommendation ticket has been given. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not interrupt updates or eunuchs.

First of all, I have to say that it is a really good book. There is basically nothing to write about this fanfic. Don't say too much. My personal opinion is my own. First of all, I recommended it, and I also signed up for the monthly pass. Let me tell you my true opinions. First, if it were me, I would definitely not learn any voodoo body refining in Blackstone Tower. Second, if I don't want this golden finger, these three talents in the early stage will be enough. There is no system at all. Furthermore, there are many minor problems that have not been revealed, such as equipment problems and magic stone problems. The trial cannot have such magic stones in the early stage. Many of Russell's problems were solved because he had a mentor. These are all minor issues. The core problem is that if there are two talented people in one place, ➕ there are enough Greens, but ➕ there are too many pig feet. Let me give you an example. My personal favorite book is Swordsman in the Snow, Russell the Pig's Knuckle Comes to the World. He is from the persimmon 🍅 camp. He wants to go to the end. Is he one of the 18 people? There is no room for 19 people in this world. So who dies. Is not a problem. Your current problem is whether it is too crowded if they are all in the same camp. The master is still the same. Really bad. No need. Is it useful to force this master in the early stage? Is it necessary to learn from them? If you want to grab it, grab one of the two talented people. I won't touch Green. There is a core problem. Pig's feet are also the focus of the world's will, right? Let's give an example, which is also my personal favorite story. Marvel Universe. Pig's Knuckle Russell passed by, and he was able to survive until Iron Man died in the end. Do you think Russell can avoid Ancient One? Will Gu Yi find him? For sure. Extra variables. What level of wizard strength do you think Gu Yi is? Personally I think it's level 4 at most. The structure of the whole story is still not strong enough. I don't feel like saying too much about many points. First of all, let's write this fanfic, and only two waves of people will read it. One was someone who had seen Journey into the Witcher . One is something newbies don't know, but they might want to read it later, right? Who is the pig's trotter in your book? Russell, right? These three talents are really hardcore and awesome. Too much is really unnecessary. Mixing poison and body refining is rubbish. No matter what wizard tower you put this pig's foot in, it will be the seed of the species, the core of the core. The story must have choices and not both. I liked the book after reading it, and I didn't get the gas ticket for free.

Is it the Witcher Journey worldview? *It's really a wizard's journey fan, it's so rare.

Does the author have a mine at home to generate electricity for love? How many people are subscribing? There are millions of words. It's really confusing that you can't find pirated copies 😥

Moji, there are plug-ins and resources, but it is so difficult to play the apprentice level in the early stage.

If anything is unreasonable, you can point it out directly, and I will give priority to revision I hope you can complete this book with me, which is also a small wish of mine Thank you everyone

Read The Witcher's Journey first, otherwise the plot, economic system, and knowledge will all be very empty. Of course, you don't need to read this book after reading The Witcher's Journey.

Ah, the great mother river is above The brave man of another world I, Russell, pray for your coming to save the wizarding world together

I read a comment saying that Lafite, you wouldn't really assign her to be the Guardian of Spring. This plot is really not good. Lafite's portrayal in the original work is not good enough, and the status of the Guardian of Spring is so high. There are only a few guardians of this level in the whole world. Arrange one of the most ordinary ones. Okay, Lafite has no qualifications or strength to be the Guardian of Spring, and neither is Mina in the original book. She can be the Guardian of Summer. I was speechless when I first saw it. There are so many guardians who want this position, but she ended up in the position, and there is no reason for her to be in the position.

After looking at the previous dozens of pictures, I feel very strange. As a fanfic of The Witcher's Journey, it uses the same setting but doesn't have the feeling of the Witcher's Journey. My first impression was that the protagonist looked like a classic fantasy trappings protagonist instead of a wizard, a fool who was lucky enough to get a cheat. I was given a bunch of good things at once but didn't dig deep. Just learn witchcraft. Without your own thinking and innovation, it is messy and shallow. Just like the protagonist of fantasy, just keep adding values ​​and it's done. In fact, there is really no need to have so many good things. It is enough to write down a few points where you can express your creativity and awesomeness, making people feel cool and awesome. In short, it seems that the innovation in The Witcher is insufficient, making people feel like they are reading a fantasy novel and upgrading step by step.

It looks so fucking disgusting. Licking the dog. If you travel through the past, there will be resources, and you will have whatever you want. What do you care about the indigenous protagonist? Written like an idiot. I feel like I have no brains at all.

It is difficult to write about a world as vast and detailed as The Wizard's Journey. Even if it is a fanfic, the writing seems immature at first, and the description of the thieves' robberies. According to the current situation, if the protagonist focuses on the sun talent, he should be a light wizard in the future. The shadow talent is more suitable for the dark wizard. The time and space dimension talent can be used as an introduction to the dimensional gap in the future.

Update soon, but does the protagonist seem to be mainly attacking flames now? Do we need to pick up the shadows and time and space behind in Stigmata?

There are too many questions. From Dean Pell to Vice Dean. When it comes to meditation, those who can only practice the Stigmata Wizard will not learn it. You, a wizard apprentice who is not even a formal wizard, start to look down on the meditation method... And then you have already increased your power by 9 times. In the original book, Green's magical equipment increases his talent by 20% and 30%, but you can use it directly to increase the power by 10 times... You are not writing about the wizard, you are writing about Long Aotian. Green's nose-hunting at the beginning was very good after he found out? Although you say we are the same person, it is still a common problem. I know the result. I won't learn this and I won't learn that. I want to learn how to be awesome. Learning awesome witchcraft doesn't mean you're great. How were Machinery and Son of the Sun beaten up?

The book is good, but I was put off by the title. If I could change it, I would change it to a better title as soon as possible!

The author has added too many things, and the tricks are too big, and there are too many poison points. Have you ever seen the settings of first-level wizards and third-level creatures? The author also wanted to add artificial clone gene cloning and soul splitting, and then added some anime worlds and techniques for cultivating immortals. He also created a system of his own. Adding too many things made it unsightly, and it no longer felt like a wizard.

The protagonist of this book travels to the wizarding world. Doesn't it mean that he doesn't know the content of the book Wizard's Journey?

Well, I wanted to say at the beginning that the author arranged such top-notch talents for the protagonist. I didn't understand my own talents, and my skills were like those of Eastern immortals. Now when I see the centaur world, I can reach out and reach out with the bloody sea killing sword. What the hell? Although the original work also has people cultivating immortals, doesn't it feel awkward? Judging from the skills and talents assigned to the protagonist, I don't see any need for the protagonist to practice such things.

Isn't it appropriate for your later route to simply plagiarize the original work? Russell is inexplicably hostile to Youquan? Why, is it easier to copy the original text?

Basically copied from The Witcher's Journey

The later it gets, the more nonsense it becomes, a common problem in novels