
Perfect World: Heaven-Splitting Double Pupils, Ascending to Immortality
完美世界:重瞳开天,羽化登仙
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- Completed
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- 2.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5mo ago
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- Qidian
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Having double pupils is the path to invincibility, but multiple bones lead to multiple paths!
Before the time travel, he was an ordinary social animal, but after the time travel, he was the only one in the world. I generally don't call this time travel, but the indigenous people get the memory of the time traveler.
The biggest taboo for a fanfic is to highlight the main character by undermining the main character of the original work. I hope this book will not do that. Also, it's not good to grab resources for the protagonist of the original work. If you follow the path of the protagonist of the original work, why should I read a fanfic? The perfect world is very big, and the point of a fanfic is to expand and write something different.
The ability to suppress the battle is a bit obvious. After taking so many resources, they are basically in the realm of immortality. Their talents are also unparalleled. Every realm is broken again and again, and everyone has opened a new path. In the end, Ningchuan was not crushed 🙂. Is it reasonable? This is impure waste
Really, if you work harder, you will definitely achieve more than what you have now
It's okay to write about Chongtong, but to be honest, it's really unnecessary to write about Shi Yi, let alone whitewashing. I really dislike this character in Perfection. For no other reason, I'm very dissatisfied with this character purely in terms of morality as a human being. Chongtong is precocious, and he dares to do that to his younger brother who is still a baby. The baby is still a blood relative. This behavior is simple. There are also basic principles for competing for interests. This kind of person is simply too abominable, just like in Naruto Like Uchiha Itachi, even Eleven is more hateful than Itachi. Itachi at least protected his younger brother. Eleven was completely for his own benefit, and he didn't feel any guilt afterwards. He was arrogant and wanted to kill his returned brother to prove that he was right. This kind of person does not need to be whitewashed at all. He is very dark. As for Eleven who was resurrected in the middle and later stages of the original work, he should have been brainwashed by the girl with double eyes, and cannot be regarded as the real Eleven from the beginning.
Becoming a master has even lowered your own skills. The most important thing about perfection is your skills. But you abandoned it like this. The key is to strengthen the mask because you can't teach me anything.
When writing about Chongtong, you don't have to write about Shi Yi. You can write about previous generations or contemporaries.
Is Yuechan going to give it away? It's a bit disgusting. Since you don't want to, don't have anything to do with the protagonist in the early stage and just be a passerby. Looking at the front, I thought that the Witch and Yue Chan were both going to be together, but in the end, it was still prepared for Shi Hao. So why did you write it?
The novels you wrote are still enjoyable
Of all the perfect novels, you and the one who writes about undercover are the only ones who write it well, but it's a pity that the story about double undercover is the last one.