Perfect World: Double Pupils Open up the Sky, Become Immortals

You can only keep it one chapter a day, otherwise it will be too uncomfortable to keep up with it. Let's keep it for half a year.

Having double pupils is the path to invincibility, but multiple bones lead to multiple paths!

Before the time travel, he was an ordinary social animal, but after the time travel, he was the only one in the world. I generally don't call this time travel, but the indigenous people get the memory of the time traveler.

The biggest taboo for a fanfic is to highlight the main character by undermining the main character of the original work. I hope this book will not do that. Also, it's not good to grab resources for the protagonist of the original work. If you follow the path of the protagonist of the original work, why should I read a fanfic? The perfect world is very big, and the point of a fanfic is to expand and write something different.

The ability to suppress the battle is a bit obvious. After taking so many resources, they are basically in the realm of immortality. Their talents are also unparalleled. Every realm is broken again and again, and everyone has opened a new path. In the end, Ningchuan was not crushed 🙂. Is it reasonable? This is impure waste

Really, if you work harder, you will definitely achieve more than what you have now

It's okay to write about Chongtong, but to be honest, it's really unnecessary to write about Shi Yi, let alone whitewashing. I really dislike this character in Perfection. For no other reason, I'm very dissatisfied with this character purely in terms of morality as a human being. Chongtong is precocious, and he dares to do that to his younger brother who is still a baby. The baby is still a blood relative. This behavior is simple. There are also basic principles for competing for interests. This kind of person is simply too abominable, just like in Naruto Like Uchiha Itachi, even Eleven is more hateful than Itachi. Itachi at least protected his younger brother. Eleven was completely for his own benefit, and he didn't feel any guilt afterwards. He was arrogant and wanted to kill his returned brother to prove that he was right. This kind of person does not need to be whitewashed at all. He is very dark. As for Eleven who was resurrected in the middle and later stages of the original work, he should have been brainwashed by the girl with double eyes, and cannot be regarded as the real Eleven from the beginning.

Becoming a master has even lowered your own skills. The most important thing about perfection is your skills. But you abandoned it like this. The key is to strengthen the mask because you can't teach me anything.

When writing about Chongtong, you don't have to write about Shi Yi. You can write about previous generations or contemporaries.

Is Yuechan going to give it away? It's a bit disgusting. Since you don't want to, don't have anything to do with the protagonist in the early stage and just be a passerby. Looking at the front, I thought that the Witch and Yue Chan were both going to be together, but in the end, it was still prepared for Shi Hao. So why did you write it?

Of all the perfect novels, you and the one who writes about undercover are the only ones who write it well, but it's a pity that the story about double undercover is the last one.

How can I put it, the only high-quality fan fiction in Perfect World is Double Undercover, White Night is okay, but the others always feel inferior.

This is the reason why many readers look down on Nine Heavens and Ten Earths. The protagonists are all the young and best people in the world. They have ancient immortal methods, such as the son of the Immortal King, the ancient species of the Five Elements of Chaos, and multiple limits of this world's methods. Half of the origins can defeat the invincible hands of the younger generation. Even the immortal family dares to kill. The three elders still feel that they cannot touch the Wang family and can only intimidate.

How can you limit the exemption? I've always wanted to be a clown. If I had known, I would have saved myself from watching it.

A bit... I originally read about Chongtong, and I was very happy. I directly ordered 100 comments But I came in and found out that Chongtong is invincible?

The writing style is too average, and the combat descriptions are very homogeneous. There are only two categories of groups and people. I don't understand the positioning of this book. The invincible text is not like the invincible text, and it doesn't mean to make up for regrets. It doesn't express any feelings. I gradually develop antibodies after reading too much. However, if you update ten times a day, I won't even pass a fart. But if you squeeze out a few words like toothpaste in a day, you can't read enough, and it's not refreshing enough, then I have to criticize you 🥱

There is always a feeling that the protagonist used 10 points of opportunities, took 20 points of risks, and finally achieved a 2-point lead... This must be my illusion.

The book is not dead, the readers are dead. No matter how long you chase it, you no longer have the patience. Every day one comes one after another, and you almost vomit blood.

In other words, during the Battle of the Border, the original number 10 was too outrageous. That's why he was exchanged as a hostage. Now Shi Yi is even more outrageous. Don't replace Shi Hao like in the original work. This is unreasonable

The author is more of a civil servant than a civil servant. He always takes holidays on holidays. He usually writes in two days of three days, and one chapter a day. The updates are few and slow. Pursuing books feels like completing a task.

I still think the name "The Perfect World in Chongtong" is better.

What is the purpose of adding finesse? I don't quite understand this 😰

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When will the author's new book be released in June 🙂

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When will the new book be released? I can't wait.

It's the 12th, no news yet?