Pokemon: It All Starts with Befriending Oddish

I hope the main character focuses on Grass-type attacks and becomes the Grass-type Elite Four member or champion. I don't recall there ever being a Grass-type Elite Four member. Perhaps a Grass-type power-up could be added.

I don't understand why the protagonist needs a family background. It's not appealing and it doesn't serve any purpose. It would be better to write a story where the protagonist is seriously ill in bed, has younger siblings, and one day dies and then transmigrates, or simply start as an orphan. If the family background isn't written well, it's a negative factor and it's very difficult to handle.

There are two identical Oddish on the field! Time to go! I'll unleash both Oddish together! Come forth, my Tamashii, Gloom!

The group is gone... What happened?

The article still needs to be reviewed; there are quite a few grammatical errors.

I've read a few chapters, it's not bad, keep it up! 🤓

Are you not going to write Tomato fanfiction anymore? You could write about other worlds, too.

#MasterpiecesGathering# Mission

Sigh, it's finished. I'll take a break now and maybe read some other books.

I stockpiled seven in ten days... How am I supposed to know what to do with this? 😡