Teyvat Travel Notes

Write slowly, don't be like "Teyvat: There's a Barrage in My Eyes". I paid to watch it before, but after Zhongli retired, modern politics came out, and a Lord of Order came in, which made me miserable.

Genshin Impact fandom has fallen into the trap of everyone following the traveler's ass, no matter which website it is, it is gradually losing popularity. All fans of Genshin Impact give me the impression that after the appearance of Travelers in the assembly line products, the plot similarity is 80%, so basically I just put it aside and don't want to go back to watch it again.

Come and watch the Coconut Sheep

Why do rookies always appear after becoming an adventurer? What do you mean? Just write the name of the protagonist, but you have to make a rookie. It feels annoying to look at it.

Keep it first, too little

1. The author checked a lot of information Nowadays, many people write fanfics and don't even pay attention to the names of some supporting characters. As for the consideration of characters and speech, they are even more contemptuous. The author is good in this aspect, but the application is a bit straightforward. It is very troublesome to use some background stories into the plot without looking bloated, highlight the characters, promote the development of the plot, and at the same time show his own research. 2. Unstable description A common problem for newcomers is that the writing style is unstable and easy to cause drama In fact, it is very simple. Whether it is narration or description, try to fit the environment of the background story. Since it is an ancient background, some modern expressions should be expressed in colloquial terms as much as possible. Amount to avoid For example, awesome, woc Similar problems have already appeared in the article 3. Single character description In the first three chapters, the character description is quite average Even though we all laugh at Jianmei Xingmu as it is very popular and bad, it is really useful. , How to use concise language to describe character characteristics, newcomers should think carefully Yanxiao, Filgodette, the protagonist, Mandrill, etc. There is no description of physical characteristics In addition, there is little language description, and there is no personal characteristics. You can tell by observing the voices of a few gods. Linguistic description must fit the character. If a calm person's inner activities are chaotic, unless it is intentional, it is the author's fault In the end, the description angle is single, almost only verbal and psychological description, and it is not brilliant 4. Supplement later

As the title states, the new book is in great need of traffic and follow-up reading. If you don't dislike it, please give it a read. If you feel uncomfortable after reading the first few chapters, it is never too late to give up. If you think it's okay, you might as well keep one, just read it every day, please 😭

After reading it, many book friends commented that the pace was too slow, that few of the main protagonists of Genshin Impact appeared, and that the golden finger function of the protagonist was not fully utilized. These are indeed problems with this book. I have thought about several situations, and here are your opinions: The first is to speed up the plot and be closer to the mainstream Genshin Impact fans, focusing the main text on characters that everyone is familiar with, and quickly allowing the protagonist to grow up and participate in the major events in Teyvat. But this will squeeze out the deeds of some NPC characters, such as Zhuyu, Zhen Qiang, Yu Hua, Soraya and other NPC characters that everyone is not familiar with. There will definitely be no time to write their stories. Maybe Jiang Xue's story about his arrival at the inn will be cut off or hurriedly told. The second word is to speed up the progress in a small amount. I try to let popular characters come into everyone's field of vision at a reasonable time. Of course, the protagonist will definitely not continue to stay in Wangshu Inn like before, and we have to find a way to get him out. I am very worried about what events to use to promote it. If you have suggestions, you can tell me below. For three, just stay still and take your time. Because the plot is set two years before the traveler wakes up, I originally wanted to write some NPC stories that everyone may have an impression of, but don't know much about. While letting the protagonist grow up, I will also let everyone see the little characters in Teyvat that they usually don't notice. It's a bit slow-paced. Fourth is others. If you have ideas, you can give suggestions to new authors. (Whispered) Three is definitely the most comfortable for me, but some book friends may not necessarily find it comfortable. After all, it is too slow. If you have any other suggestions, please let me know which one you like better. If there are many book friends who choose one, I will change the outline a lot, woo woo woo!

I think Yiyi Diudiu is a bit dull now, so we can speed it up a bit.

After reading Chapter 66, you can say that Gan Yu is of lower generation, but her age is not low. At least she is one of the immortals who followed the emperor very early Unless there is new text to support it, Gan Yu is older than Mandrill, which is very counterintuitive~

Will there be a heroine? Will there be eyes of God?

Author, I seem to have seen the same book as yours elsewhere, so in order to prove that you are not plagiarizing, please send me your manuscript quickly and I will identify it (dog)

Put a rock lolita.

Coconut Sheep

It's okay, but it's just too bland and I don't have the desire to follow it after watching it.

Just change the main character's name to Rookie. What should he call Lin Che?

There's no need to worry about who it is, it's probably just a background. Mr. Zhong's words are quite funny.

Good guy! ! I have ordered more than 300 chapters, have you cut them? ?

So has the single heroine decided to be Gan Yu? 🤔