The Witcher: Astartes of the School of the Dragon

I saw a reader asking the protagonist how to perform 19 surgeries and whether he will enter Warhammer again. Considering that the answer to this mystery is expected to take a long time to be released, I am a little afraid that everyone will be impatient, so I will spoil it first - The protagonist's gene seed is the Super Raven Guard, a more powerful space warrior. The organs required for the 19 surgeries can grow out of the body of the Super Raven Guard by themselves, so the protagonist does not need to undergo surgery and does not need to go to Warhammer World again. Therefore, the protagonist will not go to Warhammer World again. Also New book for newbies! Please collect it! Please vote! Please read it! In short, I want everything! ! !

I came from Astartes of the Bear School. The early version seemed okay, but it was really boring. I haven't read it for a long time. I clicked in and looked at the title of the article, but I didn't have the desire to read it. It's 1,000 chapters. How many surgeries have been performed? Even if it's all done, it's just a barbarian template in the magical world, or even a weakened version. I don't know if the author is afraid of losing his fighting power or if he wants to add a few more chapters. Anyway, I have no interest in reading it anymore. I don't know what to do with this book. Let's have a look.

I have been busy and forgot about it, so I will add it now 1. The source of Li Gen's Super Raven Guard gene seed: ——When Li Gen traveled to the Warhammer World for the first time, the time in the Warhammer World was 43K, and the place he traveled to was a planet set by the author [Yangquan No. 999]. At that time, the Tzeentch believers had occupied the planet and were conducting large-scale sacrifices involving the entire planet. Hamilton's war group, which was also my self-designed [Shadow Wings Chapter], happened to come here to fight. The followers of Tzeentch killed 999 of this 1,000-strong warband, leaving only Hamilton. Hamilton did not know that 9 was the sacred number of Tzeentch. He was guided by the Tzeentch believers to assist the Tzeentch believers in completing the sacrifice. Hamilton took out 9 gene seeds from his companion's body, but all 9 gene seeds had been manipulated by Tzeentch, and they had been changed from ordinary Raven Guard gene seeds to [Super Raven Guard] gene seeds. The most important point is that the gene seeds of these super Raven Guards are pure (so Li Gen who used these gene seeds is also pure. I hope no one will argue with me about this setting in the future. I am the author). In fact, this is part of Tzeentch's plan. He wants to send the pure super Raven Guard seed back to his younger brother's country to prevent his younger brother's country from gradually collapsing and causing the emperor to turn over the card table in anger (but this is another story and has nothing to do with this book. It is just the background of why this super Raven Guard gene seed is pure).

I feel that the writing of this Game of Thrones article is too restrained. I don't want to change the plot but also want to write the protagonist's ambition, but the result is nondescript. What I want to complain about the most is, if you want to change the established destiny, why should you follow the plot? Wouldn't it affect the plot of the original story to dominate the prairie and become the Great Khan?

What the hell is this storyboarding method? I just abandoned the book in Chapter 19

Author, your next book, I mean if you can have another book, when you think about "Showing Skills" again, remember to take a look at how many readings you have read first and calm down. If you are not a buddy, if you like to enjoy yourself, read it yourself after writing it and then delete it. Don't feed the readers with stones.

I hope you don't imitate the Emperor's Astartes from the Bear School next door and become like a dick.

I remember there was a book called Astartes of the Bear School. Is this book following the trend?

The author thinks Chapters 17-19: I am the king of the world! I want to be a great director and make movies! Actually: pure cjb😊

A school must have apprentices. Without dragons, there would be no school. Instead, it would be a nondescript religion.

It is recommended that chapters 17 to 19 be deleted and rewritten

Don't write about Mirror Master in the early and middle stages. Those in the developmental stage are too disgusting.

How dare you write chapters 17, 18, and 19 like this? What writing style can handle such sparse switching? Why don't you change this quickly?

Believe me, delete all descriptions of Geralt's deeds and related content. Those who have never played are not interested, and those who have played don't care.

I went to chapter 18 and it looked so messy. Author, don't do this next time. The perspective is too messy. It's okay if you switch it once or twice.

When I saw Chapter 19, instead of writing about the protagonist, I wrote three chapters about the story of Geralt and Yennefer. It was really unnecessary. Although it is considered a fan, I personally feel that it is better not to look away from the protagonist.

The flashback you wrote is really bad. I suggest you write it normally and just overhaul the chapter. The flashback, which is full of long dialogues, is really a big mess.

The name is quite abstract. I have read two books One is Astartes of the Bear School One is The Witcher of the Dragon School. Your name is really subtle.

Is this whether the stock market is making money or not? Did you make money and retire, or did you make no money and go to the rooftop?

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After it was put on the shelves, it insisted on writing a niche and low-level copy. Why didn't it dare to write like this before it was put on the shelves? It's also very long and stinky to write.

This is not very clear, but watching the official animation of Warhammer, the champion beat Lucius (I don't know if it was intentional?) Lucius killed the Astartes all the way in the monastery, and the castle master's cushion was Lucius again, indicating that Lucius was treated as a miscellaneous soldier... Not to mention that if there are psychic powers, there are think tanks like Mephisto. The combat effectiveness of monks is worse than that of monks and Astra Militarum.

No matter what suggestions you have, you can put them forward and the author will see them. Both good and bad are acceptable. Seek common ground while reserving differences. One book cannot satisfy everyone's taste. But if it is a comment about the setting of the Crimson King or has a bad influence, the author will delete it! New book issue, please forgive me!