Bound to the Criminal System, I Choose to Hand It over to the State

I just feel that something is missing to describe the characteristics of the protagonist and group portraits in profile, which is a bit depressing. Then the second ability is to dissect a corpse, which feels too sudden and easily loses the audience.

The staff in the national security department is not well written. The author went to look at the bodyguards behind the ambassadors of various countries in the United Nations General Assembly. The national security staff you wrote is careless.

The writing is very good. I hope to continue writing according to the manuscript. I feel that this book does not need to deliberately listen to the opinions of readers. First, grasp the existing advantages and disadvantages, and then think about and improve them in the next book. I've already rewarded you, but I'm a student and my ability is limited.

You're not good at foreshadowing. The first time we met, I felt like there was something wrong with the psychiatrist. The second time I wrote it, it felt like the answer was put in our faces. The rest of the writing was like using a loudspeaker to tell us that the psychiatrist is not a good person!

Let me taste it 🤓

It's okay, it's a routine I've never seen before

A seedling is a good book if you taste it! ! ! Worth a look👀🤓

I read a few chapters and I really can't stand it. To be honest, it looks weird.