Mystery: the 2Nd and 5Th Son of the Witch's Family

It's hard to comment. I heard that this book was well written, so I came here to read it. Then I found out that I had read it, but later abandoned the book. (I only read the follow-up to the protagonist's first arrival in Silver City and the finale.) The idea of ​​the finale is indeed refreshing, but the author of Silver City seems to be high in writing, and of course it is okay. Maybe an ordinary person like me can't understand what the author wants to express. I can only see the protagonist going crazy like a madman. What you write is a web article, not a self-pleasure. You can express it in a way that everyone can accept. That's your freedom. But if you don't write at that level, it's just for self-pleasure.

The most poisonous thing is the protagonist's name. He also said that he and Klein were classmates at the same time. In a world full of Western names. Suddenly a name with obvious Chinese style appeared. Mr. Ke didn't even have the slightest idea. Are you trying to trick everyone in this world?

The protagonist is a fun-loving person. What would happen if we knew in the early stage that Klein is a fellow (this fellow is not that fellow) or a fool? Turn Klein into Melissa's sister 😏?

Finally someone is writing a mysterious fanfic about tasting the taste of a witch, please work hard

My suggestion is that before reading this book, you should keep in mind the two important settings that were revealed in the middle period without any foreshadowing - 1. The protagonist, Zhou Mu, replaced Klein as the Lord of Mysteries, and now it is the second cycle; 2. The protagonist, Zhou Mu, was once the ancient god Elf King, and it was only the demigod who regained his memory. If you don't read with these understandings in mind, you won't be able to survive the first two hundred chapters because you won't be able to stand the protagonist's arrogance, arrogance, and stallion. Advantages of this book: 1. The interaction with the witches is well written, and all witches like the protagonist. But in the middle and later stages, there is no plot about the witch. 2. It is related to almost all the female characters in the original work, and may suit the appetite of some readers. 3. The later ideas are very good. The plot of becoming a god is continued until the end. It can be seen that the author has his own opinions on the original work, and it is a good opinion. It is also unique among many fans. There are too many shortcomings. 1. The OOC of the original female character (of course, if it is acceptable, this is an advantage). Some are milder, and some, like Lovia, are completely different people. Of course, this can also be seen as an advantage, that is, all the characters are very human and seem to be immune to chaos and madness. 2. In the Stallion novel, many female characters in the original novel are related or ambiguous to the protagonist. When they first meet, the protagonist will use coercion, coercion, and harassment to make some of the original female characters surrender - this is true for Sharon, Forsi, and Lovia. Reviews from book friends are relatively fair: a clumsy tease full of imagination. 3. The stupid double standards in the early stage - there is a clear hierarchy below oneself, and everyone above oneself is equal. The protagonist faces all kinds of physical and verbal threats from people lower than him in the sequence. When facing Bernadette who is higher in the sequence than him, he gives all kinds of embarrassing compliments and flattery, and then "I want to make friends with you."; Facing the Coconut Egg Tree in the sixth sequence, "You are too friendly to me, I need you to give me a reason." 4. The author's writing style and grasp of rhythm are lacking. The previous cheats and descriptions of the protagonist are not enough. It only makes sense after more than 230 chapters of explanation, but it is too late. This resulted in the protagonist being just an arrogant and arrogant playboy from Chapter 50 to Chapter 200, with no charm at all. 5. The author is too concerned about the new settings and plots in Suhuan, so that the rhythm and plot are affected in the later period, resulting in visible outline changes and a serious decrease in readability. 6. The author often uses the protagonist's mouth to output a large amount of his understanding and opinions of the original work, resulting in high and low readability. 7. The title of the book is Witch, but the Witch never appeared again in the middle and later stages of the book. Overall: Food and grass-, you can read as appropriate.

Why are you always thinking about your B Suhuan? You think your grades are good, right?

Here I have a more convenient object for comparison-Warhammer 40K. The world view of Warhammer is really disappointing compared to the mystery. And they keep losing. The four gods of chaos will never die, the future of mankind is dark, and the emperor often makes stupid moves and plays bad chess. Why do so few people scold the emperor? To put it bluntly, when the emperor has something to do, he really comes to him. His friend is dead, his son is dead, and he sits on a golden toilet and suffers for thousands of years. What about Kesheng? How nourishing will he and his tarot be? Squid is reluctant to abuse his protagonist group. It's too smooth. Who will be tolerant to those with vested interests who are well-fed? You squid, but whoever writes Tarot Club will sacrifice it? Omeiling would not be willing to die, and Forsi would not be willing to die either. Hanged Man, right? Is the moon okay? Is the sun okay? If no one in your protagonist group dies, where is the despair of this end of the world reflected? Is it reflected in the occult gangster? Is it reflected in protecting the legitimate rights and interests of prostitutes? That's so desperate

Su Huan is completely disgusted. If you really want this book not to be affected, you'd better cut it as soon as possible. Not to mention the Suhuan itself, your book has become disgusting since it started to be contaminated by the Suhuan setting.

I think the author thinks the results are too good

Aboriginal protagonist, just not a mysterious Aboriginal

One day, the Church of Fools was discussing the next matter "Destroy a star": simple, too simple "Create a true god and even the old days": Of course, this is what is planned. "Kill a pillar": This requires careful planning. You can arrange to have his hands on _ after his resurrection, and morally kidnap him so that he cannot be resurrected. In short: it is feasible. "Abolition of the prostitution system": No, this is too radical! Social progress must come slowly!

A huge character OOC, a wild dog-like protagonist, a selfish person breaks his defense in front of a selfless person, but in the end you told me that the selfish protagonist prostituted the selfless Lovia? Do you think the author is right?

One pillar equals two old days. If you don't like this setting, just change it. I keep mentioning this setting, which seems a bit annoying.

Overall 70 points. But some settings are really... I'll give you one for everyone's taste, so I won't comment on it. Original text: "The core of divinity is complete self-interest."

I didn't see the purpose of the protagonist The plot was a bit messy, and then the character was a little self-contradictory Then there were too many descriptions, which may be a writing habit It was said to be joyful, but the three views were exported too much Instead, it was like a story about bitterness and hatred, and the part about the shepherd elder It can only be said that it was written to write about her It seemed like collecting stamps, but in fact it seemed a bit redundant for literary youth

What do you care about Suhuan's settings? This is just a lj mysterious fan.

What did the author think? ? ? Mysterious and mysterious? ? ? Anyone with a peanut wouldn't dare to be so happy! ! ! No matter how powerful and invincible the ghosts in the mystery are, they are only relative to the mortal world! ! ! Not to mention extraordinary, even if thrown into a Chinese martial arts world, he would not dare to wander around! ! ! Are you still extraordinary? ? ?

I think the author thinks the results are too good

The current Su Huan should be separated from the Lord of Mysteries. After all, the Lao Ke in Su Huan is not the Zhou Mingrui of the Lord of Mysteries. The squid is still Jiang Langcai. It is reasonable for Su Huan's ending to be slightly changed.

The writing is really bad. The author seems to have not read the original work very much. Can the old days just rely on knowing the true god of old pollution? The true Creator knew about the Fallen Mother Goddess and was afraid of being polluted, so he quickly cut off the memory so that angels could resist this kind of pollution, okay? After reading this, I really couldn't read any more and died from poison. If it was really that powerful, everyone on Earth would have died long ago. Isn't the reason why the Seven Gods blocked the cracks to strengthen the barrier? Don't they know what the stars represent?

I remember that Klein is not a time traveler, and Squid seems to have said that time travelers come with their own extraterrestrial personality. Hasn't the author read Mystery?

Unfortunately, it was fine at first, but the further I look at it, the more I feel that the protagonist has no clear purpose. His participation in various plots is very weird, with no obvious benefits, and I don't know why he is involved.

Why do some authors have to give a name with oriental characteristics in some Western worldviews? Are they unique? 🙂 Even John recognized it when he named him Tom.

¹: The lustful witch died of love, the conspirator died of loyalty, the traveler died of returning home, the god of death was trapped in the River Styx, the shepherd died of faith, the dusk giant fell before dawn, the blazing sun killed the light of the ancient sun, the dreamer never existed, the thief ended up with nothing, and the secret prayer man died of seeking knowledge. The sleepless man falls into eternal sleep, the key to the star is trapped in the starry sky, the planeswalker never returns home, the snake of fate is controlled by fate, and the god of deceit is deceived. Compared with the distance in space, the barrier of time is more despairing. Silent in the harbor at the end of time and space, that is the home we can never go back to. The name of home is called "hometown". The guide of self-loss, the traveler never leaves his hometown. The witch Triss, the conspirator can't remember, the traveler should be Grossel's Travels or the return of Mr. Door, the God of Death is Mr. Azik's father or Mr. Azik, the shepherd is the elder of Silver City, Lovia seems to be this name, the Twilight Giant is the only face of the warrior, Chief Colin, the blazing sun is the eternal blazing sun, storm and wisdom, which ate up the creator of Silver City. The dreamer is Adam, that is, Amon may be the only son and Adam was replaced as early as the fourth era or when the creator of Silver City just died. The thief can't remember clearly. The secret prayer is Old Neil, the sleepless one is Captain Dunn, the Star Key and the planeswalker are both Mr. Door, and the snake of destiny is of course Will, the deceived god of fraud. It is Amon, and his hometown is the time traveler. In fact, they have not traveled through time. They all belong to the resurrection method of Tianzun, and the world they are in now is their original world, and the marriage law does not protect marriage.

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Do all the female characters who appear in the original work have to be dragged down by their side? I'm going to talk about these insignificant characters for a long time.

The idea of ​​mixing mystery and mystery is a good one, but the writing has neither a spooky nor a ghost flavor, and the protagonist's outlook on life is also very rubbish, which just doesn't match the tone of some white novels. The biggest flaw is that there is a problem with the upgrade route, and the desperate liar makes this article a semi-invincible article. Logically speaking, the normal writing is to collect the ghost puzzle pieces while improving the mysterious sequence, so that it can be interesting.

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I'd like to ask if I can watch it if I haven't seen Mysterious yet.

A man in a witch sect? ! Don't drink assassin! ? Drink the door way! ? It seems like there are still preferential treatment in the Witch Cult... I feel like there are a lot of disadvantages, so I slipped away.