Beast Control: Live Broadcast from a Deserted Island in Another World

I am a new author, I am still trying to be original, please give me some tolerance QAQ The protagonist's personality is insecure and may be cowardly in the early stage, but he will become more positive later on, don't run away just because of this QWQ

New writer? I pointed directly🤪🤪🤪. Presumably the author should have been prepared when writing a book, including negative feedback. It is difficult to attract people, this is the feeling of these twenty chapters. There are too many elements in the opening chapter, and the attention is too scattered. It is a live broadcast, a beast control, a world view, cultivation, battles, and time-travelers to open up wasteland... Being an original is indeed too tiring. It is tiring to write and it is tiring to watch. Secondly, my first concern when looking at beast control is at which level the "beast control" is: the best companion "pet" (secondary status: certain expression and understanding), a "partner" who fights side by side (equal status: intelligent individual), or an indispensable part of life (no distinction between each other: integration into civilization). As the first character of Beast Control: Blessing Baby, you would say it is the first level. The language expression and understanding are well-founded. You may say it is the second level, and it also conveys a sense of humility (I'm sorry, but this is the unattractive part) (it's a bit like giving a beast control version plug-in grandfather after already having a system) For live broadcast... There are too many such articles, it's hard to say, it depends on the choice. Travel system... The epilepsy system for playing tricks is still a serious and ordinary tool. It mainly depends on whether your beast control is for entertainment or for training in combat. The worldview slowly unfolds with the protagonist. Only the reader knows it, but the protagonist does not know it. It is very fragmented to read. It is really difficult to grasp the aspect of time travel and land reclamation. If you are not careful, it will become a waste of time. (Another point is that if the protagonist is an ordinary person, he can immediately change his mind after being "brainwashed" by time-travel experience information, but a desert island? Even if I have a squad of special forces accompanying me, ordinary people will inevitably have random thoughts. Unless they have certain experience or are crazy people, they will change their mentality so quickly at the beginning) This beginning of the protagonist's personality still depends on how it changes (Ahem, don't mind, I've read a lot and haven't written anything. In short, keep up the good work. As far as novel creation is concerned, you are already much better than me 😂😂😂) (Of course, if it brings trouble to your creation, you can just delete it)