Douluo Dalu: A Tom Cat from the Start

Author, are you plagiarizing? I saw a book on FL Studio next door that's exactly the same as yours, but it's almost finished. Send me the rest of your book so I can compare them. Don't let me wrongly accuse an innocent person.

The author is constantly smiling wryly and touching his nose; is he living in the past?

This book was originally good, but I think it's difficult for the author to write now, and Jerry shouldn't have been included. Originally, with just Tom, the interaction between Tom and the main character could make Tom's presence seem less overshadowed. But now that Jerry has come in, and Jerry is the one interacting with Tom, it's easy for the latter to overshadow the former. It's too easy to mess up the writing; in fact, I feel it's already starting to fall apart a bit.

Well, the content is quite novel, but the portrayal of the protagonist feels a bit absurd. He just said he would remain chaste for Zhu Zhuqing, but the next second he's flirting with Ning Rongrong. He uses his modern thinking to explain why he doesn't win over Zhu Zhuqing, which makes me feel like he's playing both sides to build a harem. Anyway, that's a major flaw for me.

The number of spirit rings bestowed by the gods has completely collapsed, from tens of thousands at the beginning to millions for the fourth spirit ring. You should know that there is no difference between the spirit rings bestowed by the gods in the original work. I don't think that the amount of energy makes any difference for a system that can extract conceptual items.

Most fanfiction features multiple female leads, intended to fill gaps in the story and provide entertainment. Moreover, with so many beautiful women in Douluo Continent, some fans' favorites end up being taken by others, leading to them becoming "mummy" or "cuckolded," which diminishes the desire to continue reading. Those who prefer a single female lead are, after all, a minority.

Why can't Tom and Zhu Zhuqing be together? Imagine Tom seeing Zhu Zhuqing activate her martial soul, and Tom's eyes immediately light up as he fawns over her. That would be so entertaining!

The author deliberately intensified Xiao Wu's willfulness and the resulting hatred between her and Tang San. It's unclear which female leads and supporting characters the author plans to include later. Tom and Jerry are hip-hop characters, and what I enjoy is the hip-hop lifestyle of the main characters and female leads alongside Tom and Jerry.

One of his flaws is that even though he and Zhu Zhuqing have confirmed their relationship, he still calls her "Little Zhu," and their interactions don't resemble those of a couple at all.

Hopefully, no other characters will be introduced. One Tom is enough. There was a One Piece game before, and when too many other characters were introduced, it just felt off.