Please Call Me Superman

After reading 50 chapters, subscribe to one chapter and leave a message. Originally I didn't want to leave a comment and delete the book directly, but after seeing the comparison between the number of votes this month and the quality, I decided to come over and leave a comment. First of all, let me state that it is just my personal opinion, just take a look. 1. Setting: The protagonist is a chuunibyou patient. At first, ordinary people like me saw the description of the protagonist and thought... Is he a mental patient? The first chapter was really awkward. I saw the author's explanation of chuunibyou in the comment area, so forget it and continue reading. 2. Regarding the magical sea water in the free chapter, the comment section of Xingyue World said that it was well written, but the first fifty chapters gave me the feeling that the protagonist saved Sakura, the protagonist was on the way to fight group C, and the protagonist was fighting group C, and group C ran away. Various chapters are interspersed during this period in which the protagonist is completely invisible. The writing is descriptive, no details, superficial, and short. Just like Chapter 42 Black History, what is this chapter about? In just 9 pages, the protagonist goes out, the protagonist returns home, and it's over. It doesn't advance the plot at all. There are actually many chapters like this during this period. I wonder if the paid chapters will be like this. 3. Regarding the magical system, the system is set to a low-level employee working in a system company. A bunch of golden fingers are all N-handed, and they appear only a limited number of times because the signal is not good. This should be defined as a limitation. If a person with a bad mind becomes the protagonist, the sense of immersion is already very poor. Furthermore, the protagonist is a time traveler who does not know the plot at all, and Goldfinger is extremely stretched, so there is no sense of immersion at all. The above only represents my personal views after reading Chapter 50 so far. It is unclear whether there will be any changes in the future. The motivation for posting this comment is purely because after finishing each chapter, I still see the author asking for votes... I am dumb and have no interaction. How dare I ask for votes? Goodbye.

The author Fate's content is very good, even if it is to become a heroic spirit, it is still enough, but what you write about the new world is really not that good! Is the new world Arknights? I haven't watched this anime and I don't know what the plot is like. It's written elsewhere and it's okay. Even if it's a public trial and execution, even though I don't want Superman, it's still acceptable, right? But I couldn't stand it when I saw that the protagonist agreed with the leader of the guerrilla army (he couldn't remember his fate) to kill all the werewolves (I don't know if they were killed in the end, but he did agree to kill them)! Even if the author explained that the stance type is correct, what is the protagonist? He is SuperBoy, the messenger of justice who travels through various worlds with SuperMon as his idol. He is a partner of justice. Even if the protagonist has a stance, it should be a human stance or a just stance, the stance of the world, and not so easily become the stance of the guerrilla army! That team of werewolves are not bad people according to the description (they did not abuse the infected), and the soldiers themselves have no distinction between good and evil! It is very unsuperhuman for the protagonist, as a messenger of justice, to agree to execute people because they may pose a threat in the future just because he joined the guerrillas! As a messenger of justice, you should defend the weak, punish the evil, fight those who commit violence, and fight those who hold power but abuse it to exploit civilians. You should not get involved in political struggles. If they are harmful to the guerrillas in the future, kill them! No matter how nice they sound, the guerrillas are still bandits and rebels before they establish political power! A country's talented people must join the country and join the army to win glory for the country or reform the country, but it is very wrong for the protagonist to agree to kill them because they will be harmful to the guerrillas in the future. It is not justice at all, and it is not superhuman at all! And in this matter, it was your guerrillas who attacked their mines first, but they still fulfilled their duties faithfully! If your protagonist is from the Battle of Heavens genre or the Main God genre, it's totally fine to write it this way in the comprehensive manga genre, but if you're writing about a messenger of justice or Superman, it's very problematic to write it like this! Doesn't Superman need to be protected if his stance is different? Example: Although I don't watch much about Superman or even DC, I know that Superman saves people all over the world. I don't think about people from other countries (including Russia) because I am in the United States, I am an American citizen, and my parents are Americans. Moreover, Superman has never interfered in a military struggle. He will not capture any country's military and let the United States kill it just because it poses a threat to the United States! There is no mention of going to Syria or other places in the Middle East to help the rebels fight the government forces, or to help the government forces fight the rebels or something like that! I may not be able to express some things, but I do feel that the part where the author agreed to kill the werewolf team was very vicious. He directly changed from superman to a general person, who can be considered a good person, but cannot be called a messenger of justice. Because the quality of a person is not determined by his camp, but by what he has done! When the protagonist agrees to kill a soldier who has done no evil but is a threat to the guerrillas because he is capable and loyal to his duties, he is no longer a superman and his character is broken!

I read it casually, and unexpectedly found that this book was pretty good. There are no poisonous points so far, and the plot unfolds very naturally. This setting of a middle school boy can also explain some strange behaviors, so the logic is quite smooth.

Hey hey, I knew it was from the harem, my sister-in-law and sister, hey hey, the author Sai Gao 😌😌

After watching the first World Fate Zero, it was full of timeline errors and character collapse. . . To be precise, it started to collapse when I landed on the ground. When I saw that I came up to save Sakura, I thought there was going to be a plot of causing trouble before the war, but as soon as the timeline collapsed, the war started. Don't you see, Matou Kariya has been transforming the insect for a year. The character breakdown is mainly due to the original characters, but it doesn't have much impact. It's rare that the characters don't break down. It's really hard to help the novel revolve around the protagonist. But it's quite comfortable to watch. Forget about the original work and regard it as a parallel world, and borrow some settings from the original work, it looks pretty good. To be honest, the first part of "Looking for a Sexy Moon" was really hard to imagine. There were so many settings that it looked like an encyclopedia, and the psychological activities of the characters were too complicated.

It's quite interesting to write. I'm optimistic about you😁

Sincere evaluation, Overall 8 points, to be fair, it is a good book, 7 points for sense of substitution, barely, because the protagonist's personality is rare, but various popular plots have brought many readers closer, 8 points for refreshing, at least I am a righteous person, and I enjoyed reading it, 9 points for writing, compared to various brainless novels, the writing is very good, turning details are portrayed, etc., It is worth giving High score, The Cream Tide is 7 points, which lowers the overall score. There are heroes calling here in more than 100 chapters and I shed tears, but the author clearly should have written the Cream Tide later, but the author failed to write it well. The details are 8 points. Many small details, such as the farewell conversation with Sakura, are very refined and the psychological portrayal is in place. Taken together, I recommend it to old bookworms and it is very worth watching. But it's best to put aside your prejudices, this is not a mainstream cool article. Although I know that many people complain because the protagonist is too stupid and too nice, but to be fair, wouldn't it be nice to have such a stupid person as a friend or to save one's life at some point? Doesn't anyone expect to have friends who can help them unconditionally? You can't hate kindness just because you firmly believe that dark life can be good and happy, right?

Superman's low magic resistance is relative! No matter how low it is, it is still much higher than ordinary people! And superhuman weak magic refers to magic such as spirit, soul, and curse! For things like fireballs and ice arrows, wait until the temperature of the fireball exceeds Superman's heat sight! The temperature of the ice arrow is lower than the freezing breath. Let's talk about it!

Being a middle grader doesn't mean being stupid, and the protagonist also has super thinking. Just like many people compare Naruto and Luffy. Naruto has grown a lot since the beginning, but Luffy is still a fool apart from his fighting prowess. I hope that the protagonist of this book will also grow up and adhere to the second level, light, justice and wisdom. Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

If you want to read "Superman of the Universe", you can just go ahead and read it. This book just puts on the skin of Superman, but in fact it doesn't have much to do with Superman. The stench of the house is extremely strong, and the harem and the harem help keep girls. The male protagonist is interesting at first, but then becomes boring and smelly

To be honest, I really can't see how the protagonist is righteous. Although it is said that the protagonist desperately saves people, ah, carries evil thoughts, ah, ah, calms the troubled times, but with all due respect, I really can't see the determination. You want to save all the tragedies that have happened and crush the possibility of all tragedies that are yet to come, but you don't improve yourself at ordinary times, and the system doesn't work, and wait until you are powerless to explode and scream. Can this kind of behavior be called justice? I can't understand or agree with it.

The life in the harem makes me a little embarrassed. When I came to Chen, I already had a harem for the sake of the harem. This plot of a harem collecting girls seems to take me back to the time when I first read online articles more than ten years ago... There is no way it won't be OOC when written like this. Although everyone says they don't like stock trading, I personally think that stock trading is better than this. Representing only personal opinions.

It can only be said that the author was not sure. I quite liked the protagonist's character at the beginning. What's wrong with my nerves? Which hero in American comics is not crazy? If you don't have a little bit of aloofness and stubbornness, how can you have your own characteristics? The current protagonist can be said to be lost to everyone. When the author wrote the DC part, I felt that the characters of each hero had collapsed drastically, and their personalities had changed too much. The master's character has changed, and so has Da Chao. In my eyes, Da Chao is a perfect man, and all the good qualities of people can be found in him, but the author's writing has become ordinary.

If you are a newcomer, you don't need to read it. This book is really not good for starting high and going low.

Tip another 10,000 to support the author, Congratulations on putting it on the shelves! Come on, stick to your original intention, write slowly, I like your plot, Don't listen to those nonsense people who change the text or change the rhythm

At first, I really thought the author was going to write a superhero. I was surprised. After all, there are no novels in China in which the protagonist is a superhero! It is either in line with interests, or it is a pleasure monster, and there is no trace of purity. The protagonist of this book also turned into a pleasure monster under various malicious suggestions.

Author, I gave up the book. I really can't stand it anymore. Maybe you think your protagonist has an above-average IQ, but it really pissed me off. Read the beginning carefully for yourself. The protagonist is a middle-aged boy who still likes Superman and regards Superman as his idol despite decades in modern society. The beginning of this is to screen readers. I want to see those who are righteous in the middle class to stay, and I want to see those who are selfish and have high IQs to leave. fate volume upholds justice. To be honest, there are very few protagonists with normal outlook on life in Qidian. Most readers still like to fall in love with women whenever they see them and grab treasures whenever they see them. So those who still read your books at this time like protagonists who have justice in their hearts. I like this kind of character that can emerge from the mud but not be stained, and be clear and clean without being evil. Ark Volume shows that the author wants to write about the growth of the protagonist, but he has become more sophisticated little by little. But I could barely keep watching. The DC volume is really hard for me to watch. The author thinks that the protagonist's IQ has become online. But in fact, it is no different from the Injustice Superman or other starting point Superman fans. Author, if you think about it carefully, the reason why I read your book is that I like the simple and righteous protagonist. All the other readers who wanted to see you pretending to be awesome by relying on superhuman strength have left. Now you are pretending to be awesome by relying on strength, and you have persuaded the original readers to leave.

Justice Lord

How should I put it? It feels really strange to see that after having a wife and children, I still don't go home for several years. I don't care about my family soon after getting married. I come back every few years for a few weeks and months. I leave during pregnancy, come back after giving birth, leave again shortly after giving birth. The child comes back when he is one or two years old, and leaves again after a while. He comes back when the child can run and jump, leaving his wife to take care of the child by herself. He is not there when he needs to be with him. I can't even imagine what my wife is thinking. Is this love? There is no companionship, no experience of marriage, pregnancy, education and all the bits and pieces of life together. The man who only comes home from time to time to vent will not come back for several years when he needs companionship most. Skip all the things that ordinary people need to worry about, and directly enjoy the happy family of having children and harmonious husband and wife. It's so good, so happy... It's not that I want to box or anything, but I have seen such a scene, and it is easier to substitute it into the novel. In fact, when I imagine this scene, I feel sad from the bottom of my heart. The mainstay of the family is often absent, so I have to raise my children by myself. Usually my children ask me why my father is not here and can't play with me. Everyone else has a father... I can only comfort the children that the father is busy with work and doing something very important. After comforting the children, no one can solve the emptiness and loneliness in my heart. I have to solve it myself at night. Oh, this book also has several sisters who can relieve loneliness together. It's great. Husband... Where are you... (The above is purely fictitious, do not take it seriously, it is not my own experience, thank you)

The first part is okay. Just watch Arknights. Don't read the second part.

Sakura

It seems that the author has chosen self-pleasure between self-pleasure and achievement. . .

There are some plot worlds that you don't want to watch, and it would be troublesome to skip them, which is a waste of book money.

Will the author write another book?

The author wrote the first chapter very well. The image of the hero is very three-dimensional. But in the second chapter, he is writing nonsense. Is justice with a stand still called justice? Well, in the early stage, it is okay to barely accept a public trial. The wolf guards with hundreds of people in the back are killed by other people's suggestions. What kind of hero are you? , Are you a hero of the liberators? Hundreds of wolf guards did not abuse anyone and surrendered. What kind of hero do you want to kill for listening to other people's suggestions? I am going to skip this chapter. It is too disgusting. I think even if a hero has a stand, he stands with the individual people who are suffering.

Everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens. Even the RMB is hated by some. How can we ask for everything?

It's very gentle and has no explosive points. I couldn't continue with chapter 53. I don't know if I've watched it or not. It's very confusing. Maybe I can't adapt to the way of writing group portraits. It feels like the plot has never advanced 😒 Damn, no one is dead. The story I told is not very friendly to someone like me who has never watched Fate. It has a huge viewing threshold 😵 I'll leave first. Come on, author.

Can those missing chapters be restored?

Ten monthly votes have been cast, please give me a try

I haven't seen it in a long time and I went to Madoka. I loved it.