Under One Person: the Desire Merchants of Trinity Gate

It's obvious that he's a newcomer, but the writing has started to get better since the second volume. Junxin's character design and description are pretty good, but does it have a little more length? Could it be that he is an important supporting role? Also, I don't know what the use of the Zhao Xiaoyu portrayed is? Why do I have an ominous premonition

It's not impossible to write about the anti-Japanese war. However, practitioners should not go into the system. Not that cool. The main line should be self-improvement, supplemented by experience. When you grow up, wouldn't it be more fun to destroy a country with one person? Some people may think it is impossible. Watching Zhang Zhiwei and Zhang Huaiyi compete, the Heavenly Master frowns and the color of the world changes.     ， Kill ordinary people at the bottom in groups, and assassinate high-level people at a single point. It shouldn't be difficult to destroy a small country.

Fu Lu, not the cursive prefix of your profile

The author is writing for the first time, and his experience is not very good. He wanted to write a weak golden finger fanfic, but the result seems to be too unclear, making it difficult for everyone to understand. Let me talk about my design here. Spell, I think, is the combination of knowledge and proficiency. Wang Yaozu was famous for his ability to reverse all directions with one hand for more than 70 years, so I designed his skill level to be superb, with values ​​corresponding to 90~99 According to this logic, a minor achievement is worth 30, a great achievement is worth 60, and a perfect score is 80~90. I wanted to make Lin Tong not so weak in the early stage, so I gave up the feedback of the body and energy from the acquisition share, and only gained the knowledge and proficiency of the technique. According to Liao Tianlin's expressive description of Jiyun Society's inversion of Bafang, Wang Yaozu is at least two steps behind. So I designed this place where Lin Tong was guided by Wang Yaozu, and it was not too difficult to accept that he could reverse all directions and reach great success all at once. Of course, this is my own point of view. If you find it really unacceptable, leave a message under this post and I will consider rearranging it.

Personally, I think the shortcomings of this book 1. The writing is not good and the character description is average. For example, Zuo Ruotong's character in the comics is a riddle fairy. If you describe it very life-like, it will cause drama 2. The setting is not very good. If the author wants to write a weak golden finger, he should set the protagonist to be an innate alien who can borrow the future power of the person being helped. The greater the impact of helping people on the world. The greater the impact of this wish on the world, the stronger the innate power . The system is not suitable to be described as a weak golden finger After reading the first 5 chapters, I have a humble opinion

Just come and scold me. Why are you holding back after reading a fan? I get anxious when I see the comments from brothers. If you don't like it, just complain 😁

Save, don't kneel down and thank me 😭

In fact, I originally wanted to write a protagonist in a developmental style, but it seems that it became an invincible style as I wrote it. Maybe we really shouldn't design a system, but should write about innate abilities. Because the challenge seems a bit big, it doesn't seem right to not be stronger than Zhang Zhiwei after more than ten years of training. When I wrote it, I found that it seemed to be a bit too strong, but it was too cumbersome to change it later, so I simply continued to write it as Invincible. I know what Invincible fans like to watch, which is to show off and enjoy. I will try my best to focus on this and the plot behind it.

The recent plot has been a bit boring