Naruto: Fang

It's drawn out and the portrayal of male and female characters is extremely unbalanced. The author's thinking is too feminine; there are very few chapters written from a genuine male perspective. It gives me the feeling that concubines in the Republican era were manipulating the entire country.

Actually, the writing is alright, but Lin's part disgusted me. Getting someone engaged out of nowhere—who's going to feel disgusted? Because I know people like that, I know how awful it can be. You might not realize it, but it's a very difficult situation for the people involved.

There's absolutely no problem with calling the protagonist a real dog.

Naruto stories are so common these days, this one just relies on the popularity of Baki's name, it's all nonsense, like it was written by AI.

Female authors and female readers; the most outrageous commenters are either women or gay.

That's amazing! The first three chapters were huge!

Having just read the first few chapters, I came across the issue of not being able to get her husband's body back. Isn't that a bit too much? Life and death are major matters, and even for ordinary people, they wouldn't refuse to give them back. A ninja died fighting for the village, and the Konoha leadership refusing to return his body is already shaking the foundation of the village.

That's impressive. Starting by portraying the protagonist like a dog—are you worried about readers getting too involved or not getting involved enough? As for humor, I can only say that novels and comics have different modes of expression.

I sincerely suggest that you stop randomly posting angst-filled content. Your first few books were really good, but you abandoned them all because of the angst-filled ones.

Many people are drawn in by the title, but lose interest after reading the synopsis. Honestly, writing about hand-to-hand combat, like about Yujiro Hanma, would be far better than your so-called "man-dog fusion" or "teeth-crossing" nonsense. These days, many people enjoy watching muscular guys 💪🏻 smashing everything in their path; your portrayal of a delicate, pretty boy is just too effeminate.