Prehistoric: Yunmeng Serpent

Non-traditional mainstream prehistoric, a little offbeat, some of the settings of Classic of Mountains and Seas and Pangu Taichu don't seem to be particularly integrated.

Nuwa has not yet become a saint. Where did you get your humanity? You are laughing so hard. It is so ridiculous.

The more I read, the more I care about it. The beginning of the chapter is about traveling to the prehistoric world, and I know the calamity and direction of the prehistoric world. So why after reading the latest chapter, I feel that the protagonist has forgotten the general trend of the prehistoric world, and is like a pure indigenous god. Not to mention planning for the future in advance, but you can't just not know everything, it's a bit fragmented. It's better to just write about pure aborigines and add time travel and nothing else 😂

The writing and setting are all very nice, but I don't understand that the setting is time travel, something from the ancient times. Each author's setting is different, and it may be different. You should write according to which one you don't follow, but you can't ignore it at all. It seems that what you write should involve the Lich Catastrophe, so why are you joining in? The cause and effect that drove the Longhan catastrophe is completely unknown. Even the indigenous people should know about it. The path of the demon clan belongs to Emperor Jun, who is following the path of the Human Emperor, but you are not. You are using your own life and path to pave the way for others. I don't understand it at all. Seeing that I don't understand the protagonist's path at all, and I don't see the protagonist planning for his own way and walking out his own path of proof, I feel like everything just happened by chance, and the protagonist didn't need to do anything to improve his strength. Di Jun embarked on the road of human emperor, Fuxi is a human being and a sacred person, and needs to join a force. They join the demon clan to fight for their own way. Taiyi and Nuwa are also gods of heaven and humanity. It is understandable that they join the demon clan for the sake of the brothers they gave birth to and their own responsibilities. But you, an earth god and just a fellow Taoist, why did you join the demon clan? It's not that you can't join. There must be a reason. You have to let people know what benefits it brings to your path. It can't be just for love. If you keep doing this, how can you attain Hunyuan in the future?

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Ever since I was told that I was going to die, I was choking on my breath and couldn't spit it out or swallow it. Then, marry Nuwa! No matter how many patches are applied later, friends who have been friends for tens of millions of years will eventually become husband and wife. Now getting married is politically correct, right? Singles are sorry for living and wasting air?

The writing is quite good, but the time-travel setting is very strange. We have to mention time-traveling, but the advantages of time-traveling, such as prophets, are not mentioned at all. In this case, why is there still a time-travel setting? I don't understand. It's mainly because it has the setting of time travel without using the prophet. It always seems weird. It's better not to have this setting.

Hongjun has not yet become a saint and preaches. Now he is called Taoist. I don't understand.

Humanoid

I would take a look at the protagonist's enlightenment every once in a while, and I was going to wait until the protagonist's enlightenment and watch it all at once, but it turns out that after chapter 300, the end of the Lich Tribulation is still far away 😰

In fact, I am opposed to Qi and Nuwa's marriage, because this emotional line is too abrupt and has no impact. It feels like it was added forcefully just to increase CP.

Shouldn't this be called The Legend of White Snake🙂

What you wrote is not considered time travel.

Although the author has added the Three Emperors and other traditional mythological elements into it, it still follows the most traditional style of Honghuangliu novels, and the degree of innovation is not high.

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Shen Nong tasted hundreds of herbs. This book is really good.

Although the protagonist group suddenly became the protagonists of the world, the overlords of the world, and there are too many other innate saints with high status, but if you think about it carefully, it is indeed like this. In the original development, Emperor Jun and Taiyi were the strongest, but controlling the stars really won't offend Dou Mu Yuanjun? (He is set to be the Lord of the Stars), and Ziwei Xingjun is also comparable to the Sun Star among the stars. And why does Mr. Dongyang really want to be written to death? But when will we arrange the two queens? When will charismatic characters like Zhen Yuanzi and Ancestor Minghai come online? I'm just asking, hey, the author's writing is pretty good so far. Come on, the only thing that's a little strange is that the three tribes are so miserable. A camel is so skinny that it's bigger than a horse, so they won't be bullied so much.

Where did the luck of humanity come from before humans came out? They were all luck of race. They didn't even have the concept of what a human being was. They were luck of humanity that came only after the great prosperity of mankind.

There are rare masterpieces in ancient literature, but there are too few of them. Write more.

It's not all poison that Daodu recommends. This book is still good-looking and very attractive to me. It's a pity that the number of words is too few 😢

Thinking about it, the key to the turning point is that the Tao created by Emperor Tai failed to work and people's minds changed. Otherwise, after Emperor Jun became a Taoist, a Hunyuan Luo Tianshen would be the Lord of Heaven. Analyze, Taiyi, and Fuxi became Taoists one after another. There would be four Hunyuan Luotian deities and two Heavenly Saints, and the heaven would be an eternal order.

Will the protagonist have to re-train in the future?🙂

By the way, when will the new book be released?

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Write down the rights and responsibilities of each priest in the ancient world! Write it very carefully, Write down the level of the prehistoric priesthood No matter how high your level is, your rights will be restricted in the prehistoric world. Parents in similar countries manage major provinces and cities (children) I hope the author can maintain the level before it was put on the shelves! Here I hope the author's book will be a hit!

Where has the merit of the Golden Crow shining on the ancient continent gone? The karma of the ten-day volley canceled out the merit of shining on the continent? And if the logic of Prince Jinwu sneaking out is a bit unreasonable, just look at this book.

When will the Lich Tribulation be over? I feel like I've been a little exhausted recently. I'll save some money first.

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