Konoha: Starting from Being Haunted by Evil Spirits

A kid with no money, trying to survive on his own. The most important thing is not to get sick or injured. A berserker like the protagonist would definitely not survive more than a month.

You knew you were going on a mission the next day, but you still got seriously injured in a fight with Dai, what are you asking for? Don't understand at all

Then your setting should not be haunted by evil spirits, but a noble chariot.

Another one who wrote the Snow Clan as Minazuki

The plug-in is localized. The Hungry Ghost is originally the body of a dragon and can be localized into

Also, the protagonist has too much luck and is possessed by a succubus. If you can't keep up with the writing, don't write like this.

I don't like using AI very much, so I use Fuheisher's pictures.

The author should change the system for the protagonist, such as the Blood Hell Demon God system, and the one with red and blue medicine resurrection coins. Otherwise, just to live depends on the author's halo.

Does the protagonist have an aura of charm that makes all women like him when they see him?

Lin's character doesn't seem to despise others, so it's quite possible to mediate between the protagonist and Obito.

Doesn't the evil ghost + chakra life energy soar into the sky? Don't you still have to press this point?

The protagonist is quite strong, but the more I watch it, the more sadistic it becomes.

Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with the plot. It's not ugly. It's not good to watch.

The image is the third one in the first picture, and the second picture is the weapon it comes with

There are big problems with the plot. Why don't you fix it when you send it out?

In all the Naruto novels I have read, in nine out of ten, the protagonist's first mission to leave the village must be an accident, and the same is true in this one. Does the conflict point of the plot have to appear here? It's not bloody. Isn't it strange? Isn't it okay to go a little further and make a mistake?

Why did the protagonist and his party start a fight with the Grass Ninja Village? Aren't we still friendly with the Leaf Village of Fire Country? I feel like Konoha has no intention of becoming a ninja world at this time👮

Less conspiracy theories, just as appropriate. Mainly because they are all conspiracy theories, I am a bit tired of aesthetics, but I feel that conspiracy theories are too fake.

The writing isn't bad, but it's not that good either. The plot is just predictable and cliche.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

The biggest shortcoming of this book is that it doesn't look like a Naruto story, but more like a historical text. Author, if you want to express your own things, you can, but this is a fan fiction, and many things need to be skipped directly, otherwise it will be really boring, because what you want to write and what we want to read are not familiar with the same field at all. The side plot is indeed very good, and the butterfly effect brought about by the protagonist is very reasonable and not far-fetched, which shows that the writing power is sufficient, but the direction is wrong. Fan fiction should be written about things that fan fiction fans like. Don't write stories about reforms, power seizures, and political struggles in historical areas. I really want to write them there. After all, there is a saying that Kishimoto is a cartoonist. The Naruto worldview he constructed is unreasonable in many places and is not suitable for writing policy reforms in it. Even if he only draws comics and doesn't depict much other than the protagonist, he can give full play to his imagination... But since he has given full play to his imagination in the blank parts, why not just write a blank article? In short, the author is capable, but it's a pity that he took the wrong path.

Will you start novels with multiple female protagonists in the future?

I feel like the ending is a bit too crude.

The character design of the protagonist is quite good It's a pity that the story design is not very good.

This ending is a bit confusing Even if the ending remains the same But He Hao didn't even say goodbye in the end