Dragon Ball: I'm Really Not the God of Destruction

It's really rubbish. The protagonist's concept of combat power is really only six years old! Beerus just fell asleep and woke up and suddenly found that he was at the bottom. If he traveled to the past and trained, he could catch up with the God of Destruction. Is the God of Destruction such a rubbish thing?

No. 18

Look at the picture! !

Hahaha!

It is recommended not to play clone style or Bulma, because there is nothing interesting to see. And a lot of Dragon Balls do this, and I'm tired of it

Porokoyi

I can't stand it anymore when I read Chapter 81. The characters are so messed up. He's a god. Why is he written like a gangster? The team that breaks the story seems to be called the Justice Team. As the captain, I remember that he is a very serious character in the manga, but he is written like a little loser. Also, there is a rule in the manga that is broken. Bad gods strictly forbid fighting. No one cares about you when you argue, but you can't do it. This is an iron rule. Even if you want to do something, the angel will stop you. It's so simple here. You cause trouble every day. Angels are just decorations. It's too hasty to have the protagonist succeed Kaioshin. I can't give it to you just because you say so. I have to investigate it. This The time is also measured in years, and it is very long. As a result, I have taken office before I have done anything. The assessment is like child's play, it is a bit logical, okay? Also, it is even more nonsense that Ji Nei treats the angel as his daughter-in-law. He also mentions it again and again, making the writing of these two characters embarrassing. Overall, the author's creativity is quite good. Wrong, it just feels like an emperor going to the ground with a golden hoe. The biggest taboo of fan fiction is that the gap between the character creation and the original work is too big, which will make people feel very disconnected while reading. This mistake was made in this book from beginning to end. I felt that I was not reading a fan fiction, but watching a street gang fighting in a dragon ball skin.

To be fair, the various plots are relatively novel, and I am full of expectations. Personally, I think the only shortcoming is that there can be less plots about Bardock, which is a bit embarrassing. It would be better to write more about the interaction between the kings and angels of the God of Destruction, or about managing the universe and improving their strength. I am more interested in this.

He made random changes and actually said that Raditz made a mistake when he was a child? The protagonist becomes Kakarot's biological brother? ? So speechless, do Saiyans need to have relationships? Saiyans are all warriors, and they don't care about blood. Kakarot can grow as a low-level warrior. Do you need to randomly change the settings of the original work like this?

Let me be fair: The subject matter is novel But it is history

No matter what the purpose of the elephant was, after all, it saved the protagonist's life. Don't you think that the protagonist is ungrateful if you ignore the cold look at the elephant and still want to kill him?

The author please don't write about the heroine and the harem. The reason is that Dragon Ball itself is a passionate anime, not a youth love anime. If you look carefully at Akira Toriyama's Dragon Ball settings, female characters only appear a few times occasionally, and the rest of the time they are the plots of the protagonist and the villain. This writing method has already told you that the main plot of Dragon Ball is not love, not love, not love, and not a harem, so you have to follow the main plot of Dragon Ball instead of worrying about women. Otherwise, you should just write a youth campus love novel. That's all

A bit blunt, the Saiyans of the fighting race are always hee... Hee... Hee... He also likes to visit the house to borrow eggs, chat about family affairs and other gossips. When Kakarot was sent away, the protagonist and Jinai were called by their names in the spaceship... 100 Combat power at the age of five is not considered a warrior and belongs to the logistics or civilians (the combat type on Namek only has a few thousand combat power as an adult, and Piccolo is also a combat type) There are only one or two hundred in the early stage of the plot, and one hundred combat power is considered logistics 😥 Saiyans are not humanitarian. They are a fighting race famous in the universe. People like Bardock who have family values ​​are special cases. King Vegeta and Vegeta do not have much family values. The plot also said that this race itself is an emotionally indifferent type. Its biggest hobby and interest is to fight, fight, fight, and fight again. )... The angel used it to have fun with his own God of Destruction in front of other angels and the God of Destruction (Angels and the God of Destruction are bound, similar to face and inner content, and strictly speaking, angels are subordinates or assistants of the God of Destruction for life. Although angels are stronger than the God of Destruction, for example, would you use your family for fun with outsiders when your brother is unconscious? It doesn't exist. There are outsiders who at least pretend that it doesn't matter how they make trouble in private, just like angels often choke the God of Destruction, but the God of Destruction decides to do something, and the angel will never refuse no matter how reluctant it is)... Raditz has not been close to his family since he was a child (Kakarot is the first one he thinks of when he is missing someone, and he knows the coordinates, so he is obviously involved or has checked the records later)... Etc. The dialogue between the characters is cumbersome and lacks any real substance. Generally speaking, the writing is mediocre. I can't say it's bad, but it should be better than mine at least. It's worth watching if you don't forget the original plot (or forget the character settings of the original plot).

Bulma is the real heroine of Dragon Ball

Male protagonist

Why is the protagonist's mentality and behavior so outrageous? Does practicing in a different space only increase your strength but not your mind? What was the first thing he did after he succeeded to the throne of Kaioshin: fight with Rumsey, who had helped him? If you care about a loved one, the first thing you should do is contact the angels and find a way to resurrect them. And if what you care about is your power as a Kaioshin, what you should do is to immediately use the ability of the space-time ring to achieve your goal, and do it with Rumsey. You will not occupy either of them, and you will appear to be brainless and emotionless.

The protagonist's personality is not great, and the description of some characters is also a mess.

Stop writing about the clone flow. I don't know why you, the author, made the God of Destruction so stupid. He is the God of Destruction, not the brainless God of destruction. Can a brainless God become the God of Destruction? And if the clone flow is so easy to use, why don't the villains in Dragon Ball Super use it? You think you are the only smart person in the world.

One set of poison points after another, forcibly suppressing the combat power. It is obvious that the main body is strong, but in the end, some kind of divine clone remotely suppresses the combat power. The male protagonist is also a clown who repays kindness with revenge. In what way does Rumsey fail the male protagonist?

I have no desire to read your introduction at all.

Isn't Dragon Ball Comics like Zhutianliu? I have never read a novel about the Dragon Ball power system of the Tenten type.

Zamasu is the most disgusting character among the Dragon Ball villains. He cannot be allowed to die happily. He must be cut into pieces with a thousand cuts, and then his soul is taken out and burned with magic fire, so that he will be completely destroyed in endless pain. 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

After watching "Dragon Ball Demon", the Namek planet in the demon world is so talented. It can summon dragon balls that are still stones directly from the earth, and can restore them to factory settings. What's more, it can create a ball god. And what's even more frightening is that the strongest thing in the Dragon Ball universe is not the combat power but Dragon Ball. Can you believe it? Just a wish can turn you into a child, it doesn't matter if you are a god. Can you believe this?

The author hurry up and get Bulma done, I'm getting old waiting.

Introduction... Every time I come in, I am persuaded to leave by the introduction.

The book is okay, but the gender of the main character is wrong. She is obviously a arrogant, arrogant, unreasonable, and pretentious green tea bitch 🤭, which makes it feel as if she is writing about a woman who is claiming to be a man.

If you become a Kaioshin, the protagonist will be gone if the God of Destruction dies. I want to see if the protagonist can avoid this side effect, or will he really die together.

Can Belsay rebuild the Saiyan civilization? ? The original nine surviving Saiyans actually killed each other and there were only five GT left! Kakarot, Raditz, Vegita, Tarbur, Nappa, Onion, Onion's Wife Paragas, Broly, Dales. Think about it, if these ten pure Saiyans united to form five major families and married earth women, human-type alien women would be enough to breed a generation of mixed-race Saiyans! Moreover, the second-generation mixed Saiyans from the five major families intermarried with each other and became pure Saiyans again! At the same time, other second-generation mixed-race Saiyans intermarried with the Earth, and then the descendants of the five major families reproduced more than 90 people within a hundred years! The Saiyans who formed the Earth continued the Saiyan fire for a thousand years and were absolutely reborn into a new civilization of 10,000 Saiyans! How great that they are all descendants of the five pure Saiyan families! However, after killing each other, the six pure Saiyans left in GT, Kakarot, Vegeta, Tabor, Broly, and Onion Couple, can only form the descendants of the four Saiyan families after a hundred years in GT. After a thousand years in GT, the four major families will intermarry with each other and continue to mix, and there will be more than a thousand mixed Saiyan descendants! There are also Paragas, Onion and his wife (Naba's son and daughter-in-law, appearing in the Cat Demon comic). Also, concentrated by the protagonist! Please note that Nappa in the original novel suggested to Vegeta that it would be great to breed more Earth women with the first generation of hybrid Saiyans (with tails) and then the second generation of hybrid Saiyans (without tails, tail genes begin to degenerate)! Called the New Saiyan! It was also Nappa who proposed the plan for the Nappa family and the Vegeta family to continue to breed new Saiyans (hybrid Saiyans with Earth women) and revive the New Saiyan civilization on Earth! Unfortunately, Vegeta replied that he was afraid of the rebellion of the mixed-blood descendants, pursued the selfish Dragon Ball immortality, and killed Nappa Alas, only Nappa found out from the example of Sun Gohan that new Saiyans could be revived on the earth. It can be said that Nappa wanted to revive the fire of Saiyan civilization! So Vegeta is not worthy of being a prince! ! How great that Nappa really wanted to revive the Saiyan fire, but Vegeta actually refused As a reminder, there were five people in Vegeta's team, and two Saiyans named Cabbage Eggplant later died in the battle.

Broly has been fighting the God of Destruction since he was six years old? No matter how strong your talent is, you have to have time to turn it into strength! The body is not developed,

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?