Dragon Ball: I’m Really Not the God of Destruction

No. 18

Look at the picture!!

Hahaha!

It is recommended not to play clone style or Bulma, because there is nothing interesting to see. And a lot of Dragon Balls do this, and I'm tired of it

Porokoyi

I can't stand it anymore when I read Chapter 81. The characters are so messed up. He's a god. Why is he written like a gangster? The team that breaks the story seems to be called the Justice Team. As the captain, I remember that he is a very serious character in the manga, but he is written like a little loser. Also, there is a rule in the manga that is broken. Bad gods strictly forbid fighting. No one cares about you when you argue, but you can't do it. This is an iron rule. Even if you want to do something, the angel will stop you. It's so simple here. You cause trouble every day. Angels are just decorations. It's too hasty to have the protagonist succeed Kaioshin. I can't give it to you just because you say so. I have to investigate it. This The time is also measured in years, and it is very long. As a result, I have taken office before I have done anything. The assessment is like child's play, it is a bit logical, okay? Also, it is even more nonsense that Ji Nei treats the angel as his daughter-in-law. He also mentions it again and again, making the writing of these two characters embarrassing. Overall, the author's creativity is quite good. Wrong, it just feels like an emperor going to the ground with a golden hoe. The biggest taboo of fan fiction is that the gap between the character creation and the original work is too big, which will make people feel very disconnected while reading. This mistake was made in this book from beginning to end. I felt that I was not reading a fan fiction, but watching a street gang fighting in a dragon ball skin.

To be fair, the various plots are relatively novel, and I am full of expectations. Personally, I think the only shortcoming is that there can be less plots about Bardock, which is a bit embarrassing. It would be better to write more about the interaction between the kings and angels of the God of Destruction, or about managing the universe and improving their strength. I am more interested in this.

He made random changes and actually said that Raditz made a mistake when he was a child? The protagonist becomes Kakarot's biological brother?? So speechless, do Saiyans need to have relationships? Saiyans are all warriors, and they don't care about blood. Kakarot can grow as a low-level warrior. Do you need to randomly change the settings of the original work like this?

Let me be fair: The subject matter is novel But it is history

The author please don't write about the heroine and the harem. The reason is that Dragon Ball itself is a passionate anime, not a youth love anime. If you look carefully at Akira Toriyama's Dragon Ball settings, female characters only appear a few times occasionally, and the rest of the time they are the plots of the protagonist and the villain. This writing method has already told you that the main plot of Dragon Ball is not love, not love, not love, and not a harem, so you have to follow the main plot of Dragon Ball instead of worrying about women. Otherwise, you should just write a youth campus love novel. That's all