Hong Kong Crossover: I’m Going to Be Number One

Qiu's surname seems to be Qiu, so is the protagonist named Qiuyin (earthworm)?

It's alright so far. I don't think the younger sister's character is a major flaw. A well-developed character is actually a highlight. I believe there are no bad characters in novels, only poorly written ones; it all depends on how the author crafts them.

The protagonist's revenge is actually quite simple; he could just find an opportunity to ambush his enemy, and that would be it, right? But in the story, your protagonist goes to great lengths to develop his power and influence, yet he doesn't actually kill his enemy. It just feels a bit inexplicable.

What I hate most is when the protagonist transmigrates and has younger siblings or similar characters; it's a major flaw in many stories.

There are no cheat codes or systems; this isn't for ordinary people. You need to have the intelligence of Colonel Chu to understand it.

The author's train of thought is incomprehensible; the protagonist has taken the wrong path. The protagonist becoming the Commissioner of Police is equivalent to a provincial-level public security bureau chief plus vice governor, a high-ranking position and vice ministerial level.

What's so great about being just a section chief, or a lackey of capital and ZK?

I really don't understand why people would include Stephen Chow's movies when writing novels about Hong Kong gangsters/police. It's undeniable that Stephen Chow's movies are classics, but they are almost all nonsensical comedies, meaning that the characters' psychological activities and actions often lack logic and are abnormal.

Qiu Yin:

To be honest, if the author wants good results, it would be better to have the protagonist use fewer dark tactics. This kind of ambiguous, neither-right-nor-wrong approach is very uncomfortable for me to read; I don't know how other readers feel. Furthermore, constantly using these ambiguous tactics is like forcibly lowering the intelligence of all the supporting characters.