Huo Yuhao: From the Start, I Picked Up The Unrivaled Tang Sect

Revenge is very exciting to write, it means revenge is obvious, jumping across the face of the opposite party. Don't imitate the animation and whitewash Dai Hao. The owner of a duke's palace doesn't know what is going on in the palace, and the gatekeepers all know.

Little Huo Niang

The author of this book also contains personal information, insisting that Ma Xiaotao went crazy because of the influence of the Buddha. Come on, the Buddha really didn't bother to influence this guy.

Now Huo Yuhao has also imitated Tang San and knelt down to become his teacher, right? He's still Shrek's teacher. It's so funny.

Seeing Huo Yuhao take Fan Yu as his disciple, he really retreated.

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Huo Yuhao is not like Huo Yuhao, but like a time traveler

At first I thought this book was written by a new author, but after reading the comments in book circles, it seems that works from other platforms have been updated simultaneously here. If you are a complete newcomer, I will feel that the flaws are not concealed; but if you are a veteran, I can only say that the author has quite a lot of room for improvement. It is a traditional Long Aotian Queen palace novel, with its own main line and it is quite interesting so far. The relationship between the characters is quite well grasped. But for me, a picky reader, there are several problems: 1. Huo Gua's character setting problem. The setting is obviously that of the original Huo Gua, which spoils the plot, but his personality and behavioral habits are like a time traveler. 2. The character of the protagonist is not very likable. He is neither the kind of pure dragon Aotian who is arrogant and slaps everyone in the face, nor the kind who is deep-minded and far-sighted, like a fool who doesn't know the heights of the world. Take the negotiation between him and the emperor as an example. His attitude towards the emperor was condescending even though he had no one to rely on. 3. The logic of some plots is not very smooth. There are many places in the aftermath of killing Dai Huabin where the logic is not very smooth. 4. There are a lot of typos and wrong line breaks.

Why do you still have to wear a white ring and directly change a skill into a simulation? Do you intend to be looked down upon by others? Do you really want to persuade others to quit? Do you have to learn from Zhang Wei's mistakes? He is a little genius of the Xingluo royal family in this life. What do you think of Xu Jiujiu who sincerely helped him? {"NickName":"Book Friends 20220221192458075","UserId":379928273}

Latecomers, please stop reading. I caught up with the latest chapter and I can still read the previous chapters. But the following dozens of chapters are full of typos, the sentences don't make sense, and the writing is even a bit logically confusing. I don't know if it's caused by too many typos. In short, it's very uncomfortable to read, and Long Xiaoyao has reached level 98. I'm curious, author, have you really read the original work? In short, don't look at it