This Civilization Has an Entry on Black Technology

Technology is dark enough. The pace is just too fast. A single smart robot dog contains a lot of technology. Without digging into it, drone technology has been launched non-stop.

The protagonist gives the robot dog 9.9 Free shipping, and the employees work 24 hours a day and sells blood once a month to kill those foreigners.

Don't write anymore. It's a waste of your time and everyone's time.

What to write about? You can add a brain storage place at the beginning. That would be better.

Author, you need to control the progress of the plot. It's a little too fast (it's too much for the readers' feelings after watching it). Slow it down. You can try to expand the scale of the company and expand the number of students. Calculated in tens of thousands, try to provide various detailed data and amounts. Supporting service information, data and other causal things and stories. You can't just have the main dish, it's okay to have some side dishes, pre-meal fruits, sweets (unique emotional stories), and a little water, but don't overdo anything. This depends on the author's writing skills. The total score is 5 points, and the current score is 3 points. You can continue to pay attention, come on!