Elf Wandering Player

It's too outrageous, it doesn't have any Pokémon atmosphere at all, it's very ordinary.

It's okay. It's beyond my expectation. After all, it's a bit of a disco Watching Meloetta, I originally felt very uncomfortable when I saw the place. After all, this type of protagonist can easily give me the illusion that "I can do it, and it is even many times better than the protagonist." However, the slow pace written by the author made me want to continue reading. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch (I only read the book because of Meloetta. My original intention was to see what the author wrote in defense. Now, Haochi, Aichi😋)

Since he is a performer, does the protagonist want to conquer the speaker cricket man? 😁😁

It makes my balls hurt to read it. It's not a fun read, nor is it relaxing. I just don't want the protagonist to live a good life.

The taste of the sea is the taste of freedom. It is very pleasant to look at the blue sky, face the sea, blow the sea breeze, and play the relaxed and melodious harmonica. What kind of adventures will you have when sailing with different Pokémon using music...

The main character in the book is afraid of society, so the real author wouldn't be afraid of society as well. He doesn't even have a comment section.

I can only say that you are not the Pirate King, and the sea plots you write are indeed not that lovable. It would be better to wander around the mainland and meet more talents.

How to say it? It is recommended to mention keywords such as "autism", "literary art" and "slow pace" in the introduction and title of the book to screen readers first, as this subject is relatively niche.

I've had this idea before to form a Pokémon band. I just don't have the motivation to write 😭😭😭

I just feel that the protagonist is quite tired, everything is not going well, miserable... Being forced to wander, like being swept away by a whirlpool or something, is not very relaxing...

I just saw the latest one, the growth of the protagonist, the interaction between the elves and the protagonist is very atmospheric, the sense of immersion is super strong, the whole story is very comfortable to read, will the foreshadowing of the great voyage be taken away later? How many ancient movements will be collected? It feels like it will be a very complete main line. I look forward to it! (By the way, there are two small plots in the voyage, one is to snatch Zoroa, and the other is to propose a small theater. It was a bit embarrassing when updating chapter by chapter, but after watching it, it really feels like watching the Pokémon anime (referring to Sun and Moon). If you put it into that style of painting, the sense of déjà vu will be stronger, hahaha)

Book your speakers in advance to play Cricket Man!

The protagonist can no longer be said to be introverted, he is a bit autistic.

Real daily interaction with Pokémon, relaxed and soothing, rather than a daily player-versus-player flow

The first part is fine, but the second part starts to get awkward. The style is like a light novel. The author has read too many Japanese comics.

I hope that the protagonist will use music to bring a different Pokémon story. There can be battles, but it will not be focused on combat. That means there is no need to challenge the Pokémon League Gym, but he can be allowed to join the team that challenges the League Competition like a supporting role. There are many Pokémon competitions that are not focused on fighting, such as the Pokémon Dance Contest. Music can soothe Pokémon, improve Pokémon's courage, or allow Pokémon to evolve. For example, Eevee can use music to evolve into the Song Eevee and fight through sonic waves. Even more exaggeratedly, the climate environment can be changed through music. For example, the music of rain can make rainfall, and the music of all living things can make plants grow. Moreover, you can write relics related to music, unlock the relics through music, and give the harmonica new power.

The subject matter is good, but the first three pictures make me feel sick🤮, why should the writing be so weak?

My impression of Helen, whom the protagonist met later, was really bad. . . I felt fine at first, but then the operation became more and more outrageous I really hope to go back as soon as possible. . .

The leavesfall The sound rises and the ark is picked up, but the sound stops and the spirit stops. The leaves fall. The quiet rhyme holds the harp and sings the tune of the palace, and the guests travel to the fairy dust. (Fuyao: wind, Linglai: wind, Youyun: musician, Gongdiao: music, Youyi: play)

Wandering performer? There must be a speaker cricket man here!

It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of slow-burning daily elf writing, and it's still unsystematic. Nowadays, most of the elf texts are system texts and the combat is so cool that I feel like vomiting when I see the system.

It is recommended to make major changes (if it is to make money). There is no sense of immersion in the novel. When I read about chapter 20, I always felt that the protagonist has a mental illness, and too much characterization has led to a weak sense of immersion in the reader. This is a problem that I personally feel is fatal. Secondly, the main line is vague. Whether it is the growth of the protagonist or the growth of Pokémon, it seems hopeless. As for minor modifications, I personally feel that it would be more acceptable to change the protagonist's background before time travel - the staff of 996 - to a mentally ill patient who commits suicide and time travel. Finally, there is less psychological description. Too much psychological description makes me feel like the first person (Die Jia: I personally prefer the third person perspective. It's not that the first person is not good, it's just that the first person is relatively difficult to grasp the coolness and rhythm). The above are some of my humble opinions. I wish the author can further improve his writing skills! Come on!

The early days of this book are average, but after returning to Alola, it becomes quite good. The Flower Sea skill is very good, just like Fulian's Flower Field Magic. It is amazing and stands out among all the super-powered waveguide Pokémon.

To be honest, it's a pity. It's rare to see such leisurely and relaxing Pokémon stories nowadays.

Next time you write a book, you can increase the density of the plot so that you won't be unable to finish halfway through the writing

Tears, it's about to end😭

The economy is a bit collapsing. It costs thousands to buy a luxury ball or something like that. The evolution stone is only 2,500. Chapter 277: You can redeem the luxury ball with 1,000 game points. The evolution stone actually costs 100,000. The skill machine costs a few hundred yuan in front. It also costs 100,000 to redeem it with game points later.

The protagonist goes out to sea from Alola, encounters Kyogre in distress, and encounters pirates. Is this protagonist really a coward or is he really unlucky? It sounds very frustrating.

The introduction is boring, I only read it when I saw Gardevoir In the beginning, the protagonist can accept everything else, and the social fear is acceptable, but the super social fear, which can't even make money by performing arts, is simply unbearable. Abandoned