Spiritual Qi Revival: We Came Back from the Cultivation Realm

No, I want to complain. I saw chapter 74 and skipped a few chapters in the middle. Author, you really need to streamline the text and plot. I understand that you want to use various small branches to reflect the reflection and integration improvement progress of various aspects of society in the era of economic recovery. I also like the various official thoughts written by the author. Even the fact that both parents practice cultivation has surpassed many people. But! But! It's so long-winded, my dear author. I didn't want to read it several times but couldn't bear to part with such a setting that conforms to my ideal. 1. In terms of parents' cultivation, although the author later explained why the protagonist did not practice with him, your explanation was too late! This explanation is too late! As a result, although I agree with it, I always feel aggrieved and unhappy. 2. That wild dog clone, to be honest, I understand that you want to use the fight between wild dogs and the official to reflect the official's progress in "cultivation, rule of law and harmonious society", but is it necessary to think carefully? There are still two chapters left, which made me really impatient. Seeing this from the resentment of my parents who were late to explain their cultivation, my resentment can feed ten evil cult gods. The amazing thing is that after the author explained the arrangements for the dogs, I suddenly felt relieved. I could accept this explanation and even raised my hands to agree with it. Very good, the resentment from my parents' cultivation was superimposed on the resentment of the dog plot, so I had to express it. The author, your explanations are very reasonable and I like it, but I am really resentful of this rhythm (a big sigh).

I dislike this kind of writing about government less and less, because Shuangwen is inherently selfish to the extreme and must become No. 1. But if you become a government official, you will be downgraded to a lower level. At most, you will be an enthusiastic citizen.

I'm here to comment just to support the author and tell me my feelings. I'm sorry if I'm wrong. First of all, the background is drawn from the spiritual energy recovery and time travel. I think this is quite innovative in itself. Generally speaking, it is the return of the Dragon King to pretend to be a big b. Instead, this is a group time travel back to build and face the upcoming world of war. Many authors have written different changes in this kind of recovery, but it is nothing more than the protagonist's one-handed dominance, and will not focus too much on the places other than the protagonist, although this may be more suitable for the film. I only like to see the protagonist become stronger, but I think this book talks about the changes of various groups, and the writing is good. I think this requires writing strength and courage. After all, one bad thing is a bad point, and which group may be discouraged if the writing is not good, and the writing may not be in the taste of book lovers, but I think the author has written very well so far. I can see the effort the author has put in, and he has that kind of thinking. Then I saw a lot of book reviews about the low combat effectiveness of the power system, and why the character of the protagonist is so stable after fighting for three hundred years. I think stability is a more mature approach, and striving for everything is more like a young man. Of course, I have not lived past three hundred years, so I can only say that it is in line with my own views. I think whether this is radical or not is actually just a choice. The key point is how to write it. The protagonist is not the kind of pure dog who wants to avoid all risks. The protagonist has considerations about whether to take risks. I think this is thoughtful. Finally, I think the author's description of family and relatives, the loneliness of the traveler in another world, the alienation after traveling back, etc. I think these are all remarkable. I hope book friends can read it and maybe like it. I think killing and recuperation can enrich the content of the work and are necessary. What the author writes is indeed worth reading.        ,,,, As for whether I am a sailor or not, you can tell without me having to prove it myself. If I am getting any benefits, it may be that the author's reply is quite sincere. I am happy to accept this. No matter what, I still sincerely recommend it to everyone. If you have different ideas, you are welcome to discuss it.

The poor performance of this book is not only due to the update speed, but also to the layout. This is not about the layout of the protagonist, but the layout of the author. For several days, I have been messing around with a few student dolls. How much can be written about the integration of the two worlds? I just fell into the school flow. I'm tired of watching this stuff already. Who wants to watch it anymore? If the protagonist has a golden finger about teaching students, it would be fine to write more about school. That would be the main plot, but what is the main plot of this book? Author, do you have an outline?

The protagonist is not like Lao Deng, who has traveled hundreds of years. He is a character with a simple understanding of high school students and unclear meaning.

A medium-quality grass that is neither superior nor inferior. Worth watching. The following is an objective evaluation 1/The author has carefully searched and checked, so he has a complete logical system for acupuncture and herbal medicine. But, because of this, I read Doze, and this is the problem with the written word. 2/The plot is bland and belongs to the starting state of a top boss's life. This means that there is no need to deliberately set up plot formulas for conflicts and conflicts. This is my personal preference. 3/ It's a bit scattered. The main plot is revealed in a new chapter, but the entire rhythm of the previous article is too scattered and the main focus is not clear enough. It is not advisable to have both. If there is no stickiness, you will suffer a big loss. Of course, dispersion also means the completeness of the world environment, and readers can think of it as modern people. 4/ It is recommended to shift the focus from theoretical knowledge to plot polishing. That is to say, don't worry about the professional knowledge, just let me, oh, he will understand, oh, they will not know, this is the purpose. Instead of telling how it grows and operates, it tells how cultivating immortals is basically useless after the wandering mind. 5/ It is inevitable that there will be many pitfalls in the early stage, but the good thing about this book is that it does not step on the pitfalls twice and gradually grows. I am looking forward to the story after the main plot is revealed now. I hope the author will work hard, because expectation means there is a line of measurement. 6/Why I wrote this post is because I want to see the progress and changes in the future. I hope my writing will get better and better. The author just needs to be himself. Anyone and every word are just a road scene. You drive there and you are on your way to the end. Finally, don't delete my posts. Every post I write is written with care, not just for show. (An author previously thought that I was just pretending to be someone else. Defining me with my own vulgar taste made me sick for a long time). 7/Hurry up and update!

As a joke, thousands of time-travelers have returned with a lot of old monsters who have formed the elixir and Yuanying, bringing their souls with them? Still under the control of the state, I am a cow and a horse 🙂. Isn't this time traveling in vain? So many old monsters are all following the rules 🙂

Long-winded, long-winded, non-stop explanations, sometimes the entire film is compiled to explain the settings. Readers are here to read the book, not to learn how to cultivate immortality from you.

It's obviously an interesting subject matter, but why does it seem so boring from the beginning? It's all a routine, hiding here and there, hiding clumsiness here and hiding clumsiness there. The classic version of me is very cool but I hide it. The classic version of me is very cool but I just don't let you know who I am. I refused while saying, "I know the value of the power of a whole country." It's boring to look at the routine too much.

Well written, but your introduction does not match the content you wrote. What you wrote in your introduction is that you are ahead of others and are strong alone. Things that you don't use can become something that the country values. It shows that you have gone too far, and now what you write is about cooperation with the country.