From Battle of the Sky Simulation to Overlord

When I look at the writing, I feel inexplicably familiar When I look at the name, I feel even more familiar When I look at the work, Emma, ​​are you Can Guang? Yours is the first fanfic I read starting from Dou Po. You also led me into the pits of Master God Space and Infinite Flow, so Can Guang is greatly encouraged. Looking forward to it! ! !

Everything is written in the astronomy. If you don't have a heroine, kill decisively, and cut off love, I will say that you have the qualifications of a great god. But what you write is about the harem, and you open up the harem, but you just play it and ignore it. Then you create a virtual projection and treat all the characters in it as NPCs, and you don't care about it. I don't understand. You used to write books and you knew how to store them, but now I just want to finish it off and leave it alone. I read in the comment area that many people are giving feedback. You keep saying no, no, no. Since it is not possible, don't add any female characters in the projection later. If you do, it will only prevaricate readers and say that the writing is not strong enough. Then it is better not to write it in the first place and just focus on things in the projection that can enhance the strength of the protagonist. If a certain point of a book is repeatedly raised in the comment area, it is a very serious problem. If you turn a deaf ear and do not change it, it is normal that your grades will not improve. The author is also an experienced writer of harem novels, but he doesn't even understand this. I don't understand it either. It would be fine if there is a patch later, for example, the time in the opposite world stops relatively after the protagonist leaves, and it can be remedied in the future. If you really give up on the heroines of the projection world, I can only say that you use the harem to attract readers, and then give up. , Then readers will really slowly give up on you, don't talk about game characters who won't be regarded as wives by players. If you really play games, beautiful female characters who don't like them will definitely be cherished. Even if you quit the game and occasionally see them, you will miss them, not to mention those high-quality female characters in the projection world you wrote. They must have good looks and settings.

The world of Tianlongbabu is really wasted. The protagonist's real body was cut off without development... The protagonist is a clown? What about giant skills? If you can't use fighting spirit, you can't use physical attacks? If you can't cultivate fighting spirit, why don't you train your body? So many natural resources are really wasted

Why did you delete the post? I just suggest you place the woman who projects the world. Gave people a plot. It also showed people's emotions. In a blink of an eye, I don't care. It's really a bit unkind. If you don't want to accept it, just take it away and don't give too much plot. It's not just me who thinks so🤒

Xiao Yan's famous saying is that it comes at the cost of the lives of the entire clan. It is stupid to offend a Dou Wang family and a Dou Zong sect just for the sake of temporary motivation. Why do you think the Soul Palace protector targets the Xiao family? It is most likely because of the three-year agreement. Otherwise, he will have to wait at least until the Soul Emperor obtains the Seven Ancient Jade before he will fully search for the Xiao clan's ancient jade. Isn't it good for you to keep your head down and endure for decades, and use this time to work hard to improve your cultivation? For those who feel that Xiao Yan's "Thirty years in the east of Hedong and thirty years in the west of Hexi..." May sound relieved, but don't you know how high the price will be? What's more, you are still a time traveler. If you are the protagonist Long Aotian, then you can do whatever you want

Really, why would the protagonist come out when he has nothing to do? Being in a copy does not consume your real lifespan. In reality, there is no time to train for a sub-career. You can practice in the dungeon. Moreover, the protagonist is considered pseudo-invincible in the dungeon. What are you doing in such a hurry to come out? There is also a later explanation that after Xiao Yan becomes emperor, you will directly become the Nine-Star Fighting Saint. So no more effort. The protagonist even came out to practice and just found a corner to hide, waiting for the inflammation to disappear and become the emperor. The protagonist's copy was careless twice. Do you want to die like this in real life? The protagonist is the kind of awesome character who dares to risk his life to go out for training in real life. The protagonist of the nine levels of Dou Qi Continent is at the lowest level and dares to go to the forest with the Dou Emperor to train. And then in the dungeon, he is not willing to waste more time training.

Apart from anything else, author, you really like to post pictures of AI characters, don't post them, especially this kind of fantasy type, I have my own personal taste, and to be honest, the pictures you post are generally better than not posting them at all.

It's too bland. The protagonist has simulated it so many times and has never appeared in a super-standard world. It's all the same. Say it's useful, but it's not that useful. Say it's useless. It's really useful. It can be said that it's almost suppressing the growth progress of the protagonist. For the protagonist who cheats, you should at least suppress people at the same level, a big realm. The realm of people trained by you, the protagonist, can keep up with the protagonist every time. I don't know who is cheating╮（╯＿╰）╭

The portrayal of Yao Lao is a bit outrageous, and he also asked the male protagonist to give the strange fire to Xiao Yan. Even if he can refine the elixir, he will not know that if there is no system, the male protagonist will basically be useless.

The male protagonist is now like a plug-in for Xiao Yan, a gold-fingered nanny like the Traveling Frog🐸. Please, what you wrote is a fan, what we are watching is a fan male protagonist, the ghost cares about Xiao Yan

Hehe, what kind of emperor giant is, it taints the Dou Emperor bloodline at all. The scum giant is no match for the nine-color sky-swallowing python divine beast bloodline, and now it is forcibly fused into a weak chicken that is not even a Dou Sheng... Is this Dou Emperor bloodline fake?

Dou Po is an advanced world. It doesn't matter if you don't simulate Dou Po, the world of Wudong Master, or other fantasy worlds. Why are you going to the martial arts world to make trouble?

It feels like the protagonist is basically picking up junk in the current simulation, just like installing a car engine on an airplane. What is the purpose of going there when the simulated place can't even fight for scraps? Bringing the protagonist down?

The strength is too weak, what's the use of simulation? It's almost 100 chapters and you're still a fighter?

It can only be simulated once a month. The first three times were Giant, Tianlong, and Xiuchundao. They competed every time. I wonder where the protagonist got his mysterious confidence?

It's too humorous. Xiuchundao + Fuse, what are the simulated functions of these two? Peerless martial arts? Or modern firearms? 😅🤣

To be honest, your book feels very strange. First of all, the levels of the world are different. No matter how many low-level martial arts you have, you will not be able to superimpose the high-level martial arts. In the case of Titan Power, you may be able to join the game in one piece. The items you need to write simulations are too many and too complicated. Accepting girls casually in the world will only make many people feel that the girls they see are unable to walk. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is very strange. If you treat Xiao Yan as a brother, you will snatch away the original wife and beauties without leaving any one behind. The Green Lotus Fire is right in front of you. The strange fire wrapped in the lotus can be taken away by its characteristics. The Little Medical Fairy is the same everywhere. You are directly guaranteed to have a solution. The simulator cannot 100% find the items you have. The original medicine can only alleviate but not deal with it in the early stage. Many of the Little Medical Fairy's strengths are gained through hard training. The protagonist feels like he is gambling, betting that the simulator has a solution. In addition, what is the strength of Medusa Douzong? You bargained with her and admired her. The original Medusa alone showed that if she didn't evolve and couldn't be disturbed at the beginning, she would kill Xiao Yan directly, which made Xiao Yan in the original novel a clown. Secondly, getting the strange fire is related to your own evolution and the continuation of the race. The original books describe that the snake people were forced to do nothing in the desert. Only evolution can hope to lead the people out of the desert. Do you think normal people would gamble with the character of a stranger? Moreover, you still have the chance to kill this person and directly eliminate evil. Hai Bodong is no different. Even if Hai Bodong, a fighting emperor, is frightened by Medusa, he still has the backbone. In the original novel, Yao Lao's plan to poison him has become a clown, and he was fooled by Medusa's breath. The elixir directly follows and directly fights the king. Do you think Yao Laohui doesn't know that there is such an elixir? Would you recommend it to Xiao Yan?

Xun'er

I really love the sexy pictures at the end of each chapter.

Are there any good comics?

The author, your update speed, even my grandma could write faster than you.

When I read more than 300 chapters, I already wanted to quit the book. I raped someone and actually fell in love with the male protagonist, and I fell in love with the male protagonist after raping him for several days. What happened later was even more outrageous. The male protagonist simulated the Buddhist joyful Zen technique and directly forced the female character to fall in love with the male protagonist. Is this interesting? What's the difference between this and the previous moving doll? There is no sense of accomplishment at all. Recruiting girls for the sake of taking in girls will only be toxic. You can take in girls, but you can't directly change your mind. Otherwise, why not just let the Lord God's light ball make a clone?

I went back to the book I read in high school, the author's book. Everything started with "Fights Break the Sphere". I was really young. I read it two or three times at that time.

I really don't understand. What the hell are you doing by traveling through the martial arts world of Tian Long Ba Bu? What's the use of birds? And the simulations are all useless, speechless

The author has written very well, following his own ideas. You can listen to opinions, but don't deny your own. Sometimes they may just bring it up when their brain gets hot. I hope the author will continue to work hard 🌹👍🌹

The first part is fine, but the second part only contains the protagonist, which is too monotonous. The other supporting characters have no role at all

Fighting to break through and cheat to go to martial arts... Awesome

What's the point of having so many Easter egg chapters?

Can you please stop writing about these worlds all the time? They are either Dou Po, Douluo is tired of watching them, or they are Perfect Covering the Sky. Even if you write about Conan, Naruto, Three Kingdoms, and Pleasant Goat, it would be nice to have something fresh.

The author's heroine is Xun'er and the little medical fairy? Are there any others?