
Copy Sign-In: I Was Xu Xian in My Previous Life
副本签到:我前世是许仙
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- Completed
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- 684k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Let me give you a suggestion. Many dungeon game streams are written about suspense and The Riddler. You introduced them as easy, so don't do this kind of forced decryption, which can't play the protagonist's invincible story, and don't come here that is literary and pretentious. Don't write about suffering in this kind of game dungeon stream. This social reality is very painful. Why do I still read the bitterness and suffering in novels?
The protagonist's fate and ability are so abstract
Before the change, it was to follow the words and skills, and after the change, it was to strengthen the swordsmanship. Let's talk about this kendo enhancement. Passive is to improve kendo ability (basically not reflected), and active is to consume life force to strengthen kendo skills (basically reflected here). But the problem is that the previous ability to speak and speak can completely do these things. Even at the beginning of the chapter, the protagonist's attributes and vitality are extremely low, and he can perform operations involving rules. Isn't this much stronger than this ability later on? The only drawback is that you need to speak to activate it, but this shortcoming does not matter in the early stage. In the later stage, it is normal to develop high-speed chanting or advance to silent chanting, etc. The author also emphasized that the ability exchange was correct several times, which really confused me.
Want both childhood sweethearts? ? I love Yukina but I can't lie to Kazusa? !
What kind of copy should I write? Focus on writing about love.
The author should stop writing any copy, it's almost done, focus on writing about love, and making love is the right way.
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Shennong is not here
It mainly talked about clearing the dungeon to reality, and then the author started to open a harem. The first dungeon was a bit stiff, but the author improved it a little later. That is, the dungeon did not grasp the relationship between emotion and plot promotion. It is recommended not to open a harem if you are not capable. Especially in the genre of dungeon, you need to present exciting stories and multiple relationships, and you need to be righteous, protect everyone, and show heroism. I've seen a lot of people playing with abstractions, but others have done a good job of controlling them, and the characters appear on paper. It is recommended to practice more. (I have read it and cannot reply. Discussions are welcome, feel free to argue)
The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing and full of joy. "The old man in time travels to pick up rags and makes a living by making bad movies" which is hilarious to the heavens...
I feel like the copy went by a bit fast and the writing was a bit messy with reality, but I suddenly ended up with that Sesel 🙂