One Piece: Torturing Luo from the Start

Most of the chapters are about praising how talented the protagonist is and how shocked the navy is. The protagonist is a shocking person who eats the fruits of shock. Being shocked can make you stronger.

It's cool to write about pirates

It's a big deal in the world of pirates that a gentleman doesn't build dangerous walls, and some authors copy red ideas into pirates themselves, which is also a big deal. No one will be willing to do 996 based on personal power, and people with overlord colors are all bulls and can't be persuaded. On the contrary, the evil Milijian thoughts are suitable... If the Celestial Dragons are not too excessive, the system is also perfect.

To be honest, you can write forty chapters on one thing... I also admire you

The biggest problem with this novel is water, a large pen, and a battle that can be solved in one chapter. It has to be filled with dozens of chapters. The free chapters are like this. Only after it is released, will you subscribe. If you don't subscribe, you won't be able to write anymore, and you will become a eunuch sooner or later.

Let's talk about a few bad points First of all, don't create some moves that you think are cool, or use any compressed swordsmanship. Firstly, it will make you tired of looking at it, and secondly, it will be embarrassing Secondly, it would be much better if the setting can only be used to pluck Roger's wool. Now you let the protagonist have six days to be equal to someone else's five years of practice, and he will win the prize in six days. One month is equal to someone else's 25 years of practice, and you are not invincible. How can you write it? . All I can say is that I'm going to be in trouble.

Go write martial arts novels instead of Pirates.

I'm pretty good at watching the One Piece anime. Luffy has been the Yonko for two years, and Birdcage can play dozens of episodes in a few hours. The protagonist can surpass the Four Emperors just by thinking about it for two years. How can this book not be boring? Let's not talk about the originality, whether it can have a little imagination of wt, whether the reader Haimi can accept it is a question.

I haven't read the novel yet, but the introduction has already shocked me. If Luffy was the protagonist's brother, would you still be able to talk to Roger? ? ? Didn't Roger die long ago? ? ?

The name of the protagonist always reminds me of Peppa Pig, which is a bit weird.