Gou Dao Xiu Xian: I Have a Scroll of Longevity Pictures

After offending an evil cultivator with five foundations and being hunted down, this pig character still chose to stay in the Zhou family. There was only one person who had just established a foundation and one who was about to die of old age. If you don't go to a safe Jindanfang market, you have to stay on a ship that can sink at any time. What kind of plot is designed by the author? If you can't write it, don't write it.

Those guys in the fast food restaurant, Diaomao and Xin, are weak and weak. You and Xin, please hurry up.

Do you want to defy heaven by practicing Qi? Qi training is just an apprentice, and foundation building is the entry level. It took six years to practice Qi to the fourth level. Are there still high-level immortal cultivators in the world you write about? Also, the world view is slowly spreading. Does the previous Qi practice require Nanming Lihuo? ? ? And mythical beasts? ? ?

There's something about pig's feet that has no desires and desires. It's just for the road. It suits my taste. Although there is a real turtle, I also like to read what you write.

It's Qi training, physical training, spiritual pets, all kinds of omnipotence, anyway, it's all about finding resources to break through the realm, infinite matryoshka dolls.

I finally realized that this is because the BG is so low. A spell that can be practiced during the Qi training period requires Nanming Lihuo 😰

The writing is a bit too petty. It is clearly about the world of immortality, but it does not make readers very yearning for it. The writing style is a bit jerky, the progression lacks waves, and the perspective is not broad enough. Even if the protagonist is still at a low level, even if he is still a small person, even if he is still a novice map. As long as the plot is relaxed and relaxed, a small incident, a small conflict, or a fight can be described vividly and vividly, allowing readers to take part in it, feeling as tense and exciting as the protagonist. But at present, the author is not profound enough in describing the psychological activities of the characters, especially in the arrangement of some hidden lines and the game between various forces, which is too naive. The rendering of the environment surrounding the protagonist is too deliberate and formulaic. In terms of emotional processing, the author may want to highlight the protagonist's single-mindedness, which I understand and support, but it does not necessarily have to be highlighted by "Others like me, but I don't like others." The single-mindedness can be the absolute determination when facing the long-lasting love between children, or the unyielding in the face of hardships, or the planning when facing natural resources, or the prudence in the face of conspiracies. All in all, since we want to depict a magnificent world of immortality, we must broaden our perspective, set our stance high, and let our hands and feet go. Don't be too petty all the time.

After seeing too many lonely Taoist cultivators, can't there be one or two Taoist companions who support each other?

Refining the void, combining rest, and Mahayana can directly save you, and you can become an immortal directly?

First of all, change the name of the exercises, even the Eternal Spring Sutra, make the exercises stronger and have more magical powers, and maintain more channels for obtaining various resources. And already know what is needed. The third suggestion is that women look for more. Don't imitate fast food. The woman writes giving up. Some are written to death. Even if we can't cultivate to become an immortal when we are together, it doesn't matter. I find it strange that monsters accompany me, but not women. Strange.

There are Qi training, physical training, spells, magic weapons, magic weapons, and several spiritual pets. Each level up requires various heavenly materials and earthly treasures, elixirs, elixirs, and there is also Zifu between foundation building and golden elixirs. Basically, they have been planning the inheritance of materials, elixirs, spells, talismans, alchemy, and weapon refining, and they are constantly spinning.

It's okay, but it's too monkish. It's the same as not good. It's unrealistic.

I haven't seen it yet, but when I look at the catalog, it's all about fighting? It's different from the Goudao I understand.

After all, it is also a golden finger that can travel through time and space, and its name is also a tall and tall Jianmu Tongtian Diagram. There are nine stages in total. The first and second stages only consist of a skill and a third-level talisman. Isn't it too cheap! For example, would it be better to give a full-level super skill in the first paragraph, but the protagonist is not yet in a realm and can only see the first three realms? In the second stage, the same super talisman inheritance is given, and only the content of the two realms of Gao itself can be seen. Later, it will be displayed after breaking through the realm. In this way, Bige will be much taller! Furthermore, the first-order high-grade golden light talisman only teleports 500 meters, which is too short. It should be about ten miles and five thousand meters. Not to mention that it can be directly attacked by the spiritual consciousness in the foundation building stage, even if the Qi training is expensive or perfect, it can quickly catch up 😅! Unless you use it one after another, then the price of this golden finger is too low.

Who started the Foundation Establishment Ancestor? The Foundation Establishment Pill is also indispensable.

I heard that you wiped out the fast food restaurant? Then let me see you

It's a bit bland, has no fighting power, and farming is just average.

Don't imitate fast food turtles who often pretend to be corpses.

I saw that it took six years to break through the fourth level of Qi training and I didn't bother to watch it.

There is also a little girl from the Zhou family in Shenyin Valley who is being trained as a piano master. Why is it missing?

What does it mean to have normal outlook on life? Are the emperor's views normal? Is the eunuch's outlook normal? Is it normal for poor peasants to commit adultery?

It seems really bland and boring. If there are enemies who take risks, they will find ways to kill them, and they will not explore the caves when opportunities arise. But to be honest, it doesn't matter what the chance is, it just depends on the author's random strokes. But it's really too silly and has no plot.

This book does have the flavor of a mortal cultivating immortality. Unfortunately, times have changed, and how many people can still calm down and slowly watch the protagonist upgrade bit by bit. Finally, I want to say that Gua is too weak, and the main techniques are based on picking up corpses, which is a bit of a joke.

After reading the first chapter, the person surnamed Song should marry a girl from the Zhou family, and then have a lot of children. One of them must have a pretty good talent. Is this the trick?

What can I say, I didn't want to go into too many details here. For example, I just learned the talisman. It cost 8 yuan for 30 pieces of talisman paper. It was probably the most expensive thing I have ever seen. Within two days, he practiced a level of Qi and drew a first-level mid-level talisman. It's a bit overwhelming, even though the talisman is easy to learn but difficult to master. Since you can draw the middle grade at the first level of qi training, you might as well go straight to the first level talisman and forget about the upper, middle and lower levels, otherwise your brain will not be enough. Oh, endure the nausea and ignore it, go shopping, if others are polite to you and give you some discounts, your friends will say whether they like you. To be honest, if there are such people in reality, I will probably stay away from such people.

The protagonist's friends are all Zifu, and they can go to other big cities so that they can stay in a small place for the early stage. Also, this book truly explains how a person can achieve enlightenment, chickens and dogs ascend to heaven. Also, this lifespan is too long, and it is not shown clearly. What's the use of it?

I don't even watch the protagonist's surname: Lin or Ye.

There is a saying that the author needs to work hard on characterization and description, because the description is like "an old monk looks like an elegant monk". What kind of problem will this bring? The characters you all participate in seem to be just walk-ons, and the readers cannot imagine the specific image and temperament of the characters. This is what you need to portray. If you read it for a long time, the readers will gradually lose interest in the book. After all, no one wants to read a text that fades away.

Is this Honglian an old man or an old lady?😅

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