The Journey to Another World Begins with Strategic Micro-Management

First of all, the author, you have not explained anything clearly about the power system The extraordinary system, you have not given me an accurate concept of combat power at all. It seems that the strength is just a matter of your words. From the very beginning, I used ordinary equipment to beat 10 junior knights, and the ones I beat were bandits and not regular soldiers. This makes me feel that this is not the level of a mortal general? Then you didn't explain how difficult it is to become a knight. When we arrived at the territory, we started spawning monsters one by one. Then I can only infer the combat power based on the character's performance. At the same level, the combat power fluctuates. After the introduction of the magic ring, the situation became even more serious. According to your combat power as a junior knight, you may not have an advantage in 1v1 against the person wearing the ring. You can only fight two or three at most. But the actual result is food abuse. Now I seriously doubt whether you have sorted these things out yourself. The second is that the characterization is rigid Take the female shield knight as an example, her combat power fluctuates between high and low. Either it works alone, or it has no effect. Take it out and use it when you need it, and sit on the bench when you don't need it. There is no subjective initiative at all. This is a person! People who can think independently are not rags. If you can't hit the front, you can still cooperate with assistance. The female noble elf gives me the impression that she appears just for the sake of appearing. Then when the Duke's Daughter first appeared, her character was written quite vividly. Then I bought two chapters and went back. Normal development is probably just a tool to promote the plot. But the way she was portrayed was clearly that of at least a female supporting character. Finally, there is technology and farming. You have basically avoided this exciting place. The fields were being beaten without much planting, and the beating started inexplicably. There is not even a hint of suspense as to why he was targeted. Technology basically means giving a few tools to people to solve. Don't ask any questions, it's magic. In this regard, it is best to lead others to overcome difficulties yourself. The second best is Baidu. There is no sense of involvement in figuring out how to master technology. Currently, even in various blurred battle scenes, there are no obvious poisonous spots.

1. First of all, regarding human experiments, I can only say that for a while I felt that the author's constant labeling of serfs as "them" may not have been a typo. Let's talk about the experiment The experimental goals require long-term attention and a control group should be established. It's not in the book, so forget it. 2. The protagonist's first solution to the incident in Chapter 14. Highlight one??? I can only sigh again that "they" may not be a typo. Judgment without investigation, whether you are planning a plot or some other purpose. It's too bad of character. What do you want to embody? Is the protagonist used to being a master? It's a bit ugly to say more, so let's leave it at that. 3. Although I know the purpose of arranging this out, the one who ate the berries also has a good way out. The subsequent conflict is also to elicit the effectiveness of the berries, but! I still can't accept the arrangement of this plot. Maybe I am too pretentious (The above personal opinions are for reference only!)

The writing is very good, and it is different from other Western fantasy novels where the biological mother dies at the beginning and the stepmother and brother are fighting for the title, or the eldest brother, the second son of a baron, is always trying to do harm. I know that online novels are in a desperate situation at the beginning to attract readers to continue reading, but every book starts the same, do you still want to read it? There are also a lot of most important logical problems 😅😅😅

Don't be too outrageous to follow the trend. Shenwu Liuliu was considered a writer of World War II back then. Do you also have a vest that wrote about the Soviet-German battlefield?

Wrong development path. The author wants to take the civilian musketeer route. In the middle-demon world, the knights and infantry captains carry hundreds of kilograms per person. Even if you switch to iron armor, it can penetrate 20-25mm, and you may not be able to kill it even if you use the 92 infantry gun.

I feel like you're going to be a eunuch, but I have no proof.

You copied 66 at the beginning, why did you want to go your own way later? As a result, the plug-in now has no sense of existence at all.

This bug is interesting

I feel that the author's digressions, comments about the medieval era, and Internet memes are a little too frequent compared to the main text of the story. Although the protagonist still doesn't know much about this world, he overall seems to be resilient, as if the protagonist has seen the destiny that is destined to rise from the perspective of God in the early stage As I read, sometimes it seemed to have a bad taste. In the face of unknown situations, if a sudden and powerful enemy appears, the protagonist's previous mental activities and daydreams about his personal destiny will come to an abrupt end.

Chapter 1 "Traveling through the Middle Ages, but I have a knowledge system" Chapter 2 "The tragedy of serfs, speech in the tavern" Chapter 3 "Recruiting talents and developing technology" Chapter 4 "It's time to let the knight grandpa in the castle see the matchlock gun!" Chapter 5 "How could there be mechas in the Middle Ages?" And what the hell are the Astra Militarum?

The plot at the beginning before becoming a pioneer lord is really well written. 🙂

The article keeps saying that artillery and firearms are of low craftsmanship, as if the main character can make them with his own hands. In fact, firearms are not just design ideas, but more difficult are technical issues such as metal materials, including alloy casting (the material is not good enough to explode the barrel), casting technology (how does the metal form the barrel, and the casting technology is not good enough to explode the barrel), gunpowder ratio and material purification (there is a problem with the gunpowder) It is still possible to explode the chamber), etc., Etc., Explosion of chamber, disfigurement, lack of power (early muskets are not as armor-piercing as longbows, let alone armor-piercing arrows and crossbows), insufficient accuracy and other problems exist objectively. It is not unreasonable for firearms in the real world to take such a long time from invention to large-scale use in modern times. The author himself also wrote in the article that the dwarves who created the muskets themselves despised them. Don't you think it is inconsistent? I initially thought that the protagonist would use magic technology or items, materials, and techniques that exist in other worlds to avoid these problems, but after reading so much, I didn't have any clue. The co-authoring was just a fabrication, right? The key is that the article kept mentioning guns and artillery are very simple, and kept reminding me of this poisonous point. A cool article is not just written casually and without thinking. These are two different things.

Damn it, could Liuliu also start a new genre?

When you write about Western backgrounds, don't use ancient Eastern classical Chinese. It's misleading, it affects the perception, and it makes you look different. It's not as good as vernacular. Combining China and the West is not such a combination. If you are the kind of Eastern country that conquers the West and achieves cultural unification, it's fine. Don't do this purely Western thing.

The beginning is good, well, the beginning is good

After reading Chapter 30, the power system is also very confusing. It feels like a trial work without thinking about what to write. There are artillery, knights, large magic and vampires, but none of them stand out, and the integration between them is very stiff.

Tired of hand-to-hand combat with cold weapons. My favorite thing about Hammer 3 is the one where you line up to be shot.

Is the introduction to this book plagiarized? When Napoleon escaped from prison and led his 700 soldiers to attack Paris, France, what the newspapers said was just a magic change after a magic change. It really made people laugh 🤭

Successful cases 1. Advancing from east to west, flanking attack from north to south: Ji'an Defense Battle 2. Central bloom: Battle of Taierzhuang 3. Contraction tactics: Battle of Southern Henan 4. Hub battle tactics: Battle of Shanggao 5. Snake of Changshan: No successful cases yet 6. Side attack: Battle of Longling 7. Cong Lin Tactics: Counteroffensive Campaign in Northern Burma 8, Tunnel Tactics: Battle of Songshan 9, Inverted Pocket Tactics: Battle of Western Hunan 10, Tianlu Tactics: The Third Battle of Changsha 11, Push forward to gain external wings: The First Battle of Changsha 12, Roundabout Tactics: Battle of Kunlun Pass 13, Retreat