All Heavens: Crossing Changjin Lake at the Beginning

Instead of going to the battlefield, it is better to report it and provide future information to the great men. If nothing else, just the information about the disintegration of the Soviet Union can make that group of human beings give the country a big bite of meat.

If we really travel to Changjin Lake, there will be one more corpse on the battlefield. It's not that you won't survive, but you can't change anything!

Go to fight in a harsh environment, physical fitness is 2, then never increase physical fitness, keep increasing marksmanship

Apart from giving away cotton-padded clothes without thinking, and not focusing on physical fitness at the beginning, there are not many big poisonous points. I also have some suggestions. It is completely meaningless to write the paragraphs about the enemy. The old Americans I wrote in the past few chapters were all killed. It is a waste of time to remember the names. And it is easy to write once It's a few hundred words, and the whole thing is dragged down. At present, the proportion of what you write, the author, is entirely a multi-main line approach, and the main line of the entire U. S. Military in this anti-American theme is completely against people Then really, does the point allow the protagonist to airdrop thousands of miles away or does it produce too many leaks? Hole, I understand the mentality of those who can work harder, but when you may die on the front line, what do you worry about as a commander... It's not that you have the ability and you don't contribute, but you should blame the people who prepare supplies in the local area, the people who coordinate the intelligence system, and the local managers, >We shouldn't blame the protagonist for being a big-headed soldier. On the one hand, unless the protagonist's contribution is fed back to the readers as a positive point, otherwise the investment will be completely in vain. Nearly tens of thousands of points have been thrown into it. The US military has written it in such detail. Why not write about the changes in the place where the clothes are sent? On the other hand, it is becoming more and more difficult to make the plot reasonable. With such a powerful golden finger, airdropping all over the map, and airdropping some viruses to the Americans, wouldn't they all win directly? And then you use this aircraft to make random airdrops with the identity of the US military, directly paralyzing their air defense system, and then you go to directly drop rocks on the heads of the US military, hit people with airdrops, and airdrop other tricks, Really, this golden finger is inappropriate and difficult to control, and most importantly, it is difficult to write, and the feedback after writing is not high.

Complaining, time travel, time travel, you still take people, time travel,, it's not interesting to watch

Changjin Lake is a good movie. The only flaw is that the actors didn't work hard to lose weight! Where could there be a group of fat-headed and big-eared warriors in those days? ? I was shocked when I saw their body shape.

The more you write, the more rubbish it becomes. It is originally a good book. It is understandable that you want to write it in depth, but you should not think about changing this book. This is the essence of a good book.

The War to Resist U. S. Aggression and Aid Korea can be said to be the most brutal war since World War II. The gap between the weapons and equipment of the two sides was extreme. The U. S. Military had overwhelming advantages in land, sea, and air, and massive industry, while the volunteers' weapons were all IWC brands, and logistics was disrupted. When the Soviet Union fought the Germans, at least the weapons gap was not big. You Tiger, I still have T26, and the U. S. Army is a regiment It has more firepower than an army of the Volunteer Army, with squad communications, platoon-level artillery, armored vehicles, armed to the teeth, and firing tens of thousands of tons of bombs a day. It is extremely difficult. Under such circumstances, the Volunteer Army overcomes all difficulties, breaks through the physical limits, and fights one to five battles. Why should the US military be forced to surrender?

Zhutianliu, I have written more than 200 chapters in one world, when will the next world be released?

Is this astronomy? A plot is almost two hundred chapters in and it's not over yet?

The new map is still North Korea, which is easy to lose readers, even if it is a different character, even if you change the war of another country, it will be fine

This kind of writing is written in the world, if it is better to rush into the street, if the grades are good, you will soon suffer disaster, which is not interesting.

I feel that a scene should not exceed 400,000 words. Don't write about super powers.

Since it is a journey across the heavens, the author should not focus on the land. He should engage in the sea, build their warships and aircraft carriers, block the straits, prevent the armies of those 17 countries from receiving supplies, and bring their supply levels to the same level as ours.

Cut it off, war is serious and cruel. The system is not suitable.

Personally, I feel that it cannot keep up with the ancient text "The Decisive Battle of Korea"

It's almost 200 chapters, when will we change the map... Although it's fun to watch, it's a bit visual fatigue...

It's better to use all your intelligence to develop weapons and nuclear bombs

There is a lot to write about during the Anti-Japanese War, and it is exciting, but just one chapter on the joy after the war is too hasty. At least write about the developments that changed the situation. There is nothing interesting about modern times.

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It feels good 😜 The details of the battlefield are there, and the golden fingers are well integrated.