The Condor Shooting: the Unparalleled Genius

The setting is quite interesting. Playing with the Butcher Mongolians all day long makes me really speechless. You wouldn't think that Mongolians are really hospitable, right?

Xiaoyuer is never good, but evil. He took advantage of Tie Xinlan's feelings many times, and it would not be an exaggeration to call him a scumbag. When he met Murong Jiu, who saved his life, he tore apart other people's homes because of a disagreement over words, and even made Murong Jiu go crazy. He is a smart man who does whatever he wants and is not bound by the world.

It must be fun for Xiao Yu'er and Ronger to hang out together

Gu Long's writing style, Jin Yong's world, writing Fatela is contradictory,

This is good, the characters of the peerless two heroes + the Condor, the main mission is to assassinate the Five Jue, and the fashion value is very high; But there is a problem, the original plot of the Condor has been written too many times, I don't know how to deal with it when writing it. Is it original new characters and new events, or is it consistent with the original characters and allowing for interesting interactions between the characters? Looking forward to it

It's interesting. Gu Long's protagonist is mixed up with Jin Yong. The key is that he really has the flavor of a pair of peerless prides. It's not like those idiots wearing martial arts skins who have no brains to upgrade and cool articles. Come on, the author.

... There are too many secondary characters like Wuyu, and they are not Xiaoyuer who are both peerless twins at all.

Just flirting but not marrying? Leave a good memory and wait until they become wives and meet old friends in the past?

It turns out that Guo Jing Xiu Xian and Si Guo Ya Sword Master were also written by you. They were both good at the beginning, but I stopped reading them halfway through and didn't read the rest. .

If it weren't for the fact that there is still room for cool things and foreshadowing in the future, I really can't continue reading...

I read ten chapters, and the writing is okay, but I don't see how the time traveler is represented? Author, you can just write about the indigenous people.

This book can be followed. But I suggest the author not to always show a female character with skin as white as snow. Also, there are too many conversations before the fight, and he can be more verbal than Ke Zhene. Especially the part with the Eight-Armed King Kong. Come on author

If you want to write about Jin Yong, it must be consistent. Zhang Sanfeng and Zhang Wuji in the Yuan Dynasty are gone. The 1st and 2nd generations of Xingxiu are hundreds of years away? ? ? ?

I can't catch up anymore, there is no passion, no main line, I am fighting all day long, how about re-opening the Three Kingdoms?

It's a bit interesting to write about Jin Yong's fans using Gu Long's writing style.

A sense of joy and heroism. The author is great.

After looking at Mongolia, I discovered a few outrageous points: Kublai Khan, Ogedai, and even the gentry in the south of the Yangtze River were actually more lenient to the gentry in the south of the Yangtze River than the Han people in the north. He destroyed important Jin towns and massacred the city to the south. When crossing the river, someone asked Kublai Khan if he wanted to destroy the Song Dynasty, "Don't order the Zhao family to be sacrificed." Kublai Khan said to the person who persuaded him: "If you don't forget your old master, you will definitely be able to assist my family. As for the powerful minister Jia Sidao's innocent state of mind, are you willing to make the Zhao family lack sacrifices?" When he was in the south of the Yangtze River, Kublai Khan also wanted to follow Cao Bin's example and destroy the Southern Tang Dynasty young man Wo Kuotai, which was even more outrageous. He met Yelu. There was no such thing as agricultural tax before Chu Cai had a tax of three liters per mu (30 taxes per mu). However, the Great Khan did not know how to collect taxes. After he learned how to collect taxes, he gave various tax packages. The laws of the Yuan Dynasty can also be dealt with as appropriate (as long as the legal provisions do not say how you are guilty of this crime). So judge, then you are the official's boss) (the original words are called Shi Xingbi) (Kublai Khan's contract to Suzhou was 3.6 Million dou of grain, Zhang Shicheng received 2.7 Times the annual dou of grain, and the Ming Dynasty Yingzong received 7.5 Times the annual dou of more than 27 million) The profuse sweat is really outrageous

Is the protagonist a time traveler or a native? It feels specious and hard to tell.

Before Changchun Valley, it was a masterpiece. After that, a crazy plot of abandoning his wife and children for more than ten years directly made all subsequent plots invalid and collapsed. In a few chapters, the protagonist became a world-defying man, abandoning a country for many years, and even a scum in the eyes of his wife and children... This is seriously wrong even according to the three views in martial arts novels, isn't it?

Fan fiction would be boring if it randomly added secondary settings.

After reading it, everyone in the comment section said it was pretty good, but I don't know why I didn't have the desire to read it once I combined it with the title in the table of contents.

Didn't the protagonist say he wants to play with the most beautiful woman? Why is he still a virgin?

The setting is pretty good, but there is no main plot, no opponents, and I keep writing a running account, which makes it a bit hard to follow.

A pot of random stew, stitching monsters 😰

I saw it was fully booked now, but the plot didn't have any climax.

"I have played with guns on the throne of Khorne, drank soup at the cauldron of Nurgle, shared spoils in the house of Tzeentch, and sold songs in front of Slaanesh's bed! This is me, the founder of the empire! The slayer of orcs! The resister of demons, the emperor of mankind, Sigmar!" Sigmar introduced himself to the banquet with his warhammer, and by the way told all the guests how bad he was. "Fellow prophets, who can tell me the future destiny of the human empire! Can it suppress all races and be glorious forever?" The muscular man asked arrogantly. The prophet of Ulric the White Wolf came out first and said: "I see that the future of the empire will be filled with bald priests. They have scriptures in one hand and hammers in the other. They chant the name of Sigmar and brutally surround and suppress Ulric believers. After the civil war, the empire was destroyed." "Heresy! As a devout believer in Ulric, I don't believe your sowing discord!" Sigma was furious and smashed the White Wolf Prophet's head with a hammer. The Great Necromancer stood up again and said: "I saw countless warriors fighting with muskets and giant swords. Soldiers were cut down, priests were bewitched, and the empire was destroyed. Only the world of undead and bones will last forever." "Bastard! Humans will never accept a dead world!" Sigma smashed the bones of the Necromancer with another hammer. The rat prophet took a step forward, and the green crystal ball in his hand projected a picture of the bliss of the world: humans and rats coexist harmoniously, and the future will be prosperous; they provoke wars and sell military disasters, but criticize normal trade; they eat chicken and shoot each other in American style, but they are called They love life; their hands are full of blood, but they claim that they are the victims; they party together on the island, but claim to be human role models who take care of Luo Li... "This future seems pretty good. How can we realize it?" The big golden man asked humbly. "We lie, we cheat, we steal, and we have a course to teach these. With such continuous exploration and progress, the glory of the human empire will surely be realized." "What a wonderful future, I really want to see it with my own eyes." Sigma sighed happily. "Yes, when the empire is about to be destroyed and the last emperor, Karl Franz, dies in battle, you can be resurrected in his body and experience it all for yourself."

Xiao Yu'er, do you want to be Song Jiang?

The first half is good, but the second half is unbearable

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!

If so, will it be single or multiple? Which ones will they be?