Travel to the Heavens Starting from the Dragon Clan

Frankly speaking, the beginning is too clownish, and the following chapters are like a decline. It gets better after chapter 30. So far, it is average, with little fun and few exciting points. It depends on how it will be dealt with in the future.

Dear friends, the data of this first book by a newcomer is no surprise. I know that newcomers will make a lot of mistakes when writing books. I should not make any money, so I don't care about the data in the future. But there are a few real readers who insist on reading my books. They don't comment but they are always there. I have never been so grateful to them. So I want to finish writing this book for them. At least I am lucky enough to have signed the contract, so there may be rewards for perfect attendance later, so please don't worry. I would like to ask all the book friends who commented to show your appreciation. If you feel that the style of the book is not suitable for you or the writing is not good, just cross it out. I am afraid that those supporters will not read my books after seeing the bad comments. It doesn't matter if I can't make money because I write books part-time, but if no one reads it, it will be a big blow to me. 😭😭 I don't know if I can write a novel again in the future, but this time I want to finish it and kneel down for you!

It's okay for the protagonist to use his word spirit for a free day, but he has no brains 😥

It's not exciting enough, and the progress isn't fast enough. Since it's a speed flow, let's quickly let the protagonist grow up. The protagonist has been deflated several times.

Don't really write a follow-up article that is purely routine and enjoyable! 😥 Keep the writing style and the feeling of a shounen manga!

The writing is good, but not cool enough. Fans of Dragon Clan have to highlight the word cool, otherwise there will be no market.

Don't say it, you really don't say it, it's a bit like looking at the inner taste of the Dragon Clan.

There is a feeling that the author is writing his own story rather than a fan (no derogatory meaning)

Just go for your heroine, let me taste it

Wow... It's beyond my imagination At first I thought the main character was a bit too clowny, and I was about to give up on it. But I didn't expect that the later it got, the more it smelled like the old version, especially the section in Chapter 30 Come on, author!

Let's read Chapter 10 and Chapter 8 first~Qiuli Cream~

It's a bit contradictory to disrupt the plot and cling to life at the same time.

The writing is very good, with a dragon-like feel, but the system arrangement is disgusting and the plot content is a bit not very good.

Shouldn't the third online novel be about awakening the system, killing people, and then becoming invincible?

Chapter 54: The author forces the novice protagonist to collect 7 trolls. What's the point? The author comes out

The protagonist doesn't look like someone who has read Dragons, and he's not suitable for the book Dragons. He's not crazy enough.

How to put it this way, there are big problems here at the beginning, but when I read it later, it was okay and I could watch it. I hope it can be maintained. Personally, I still hope to have a female protagonist.

The plot has ups and downs, but it's not good if it's too ups and downs.

Very nice, support😍

Are there still people writing life-span streams now? Don't you know that this thing, like the experience card, is from the previous version?

I have written several copies and they have collapsed. Each copy is screened for readers, unless the writing is good and enjoyable.

The author is really perseverant! You don't want to eat? Why not try Shuangwen first 🤔

Keep going and keep subscribing to you!

No heroine? It's really weird. I have to taste the saltiness of this dragon clan + no heroine.

Recommended by the group, let me know if Kangkang has internal odor