Live Forever from Breathing

For various reasons, many new authors are born after 2000. They are either in school or have just graduated. They lack a lot of experience and sophistication. Many of the books they write are based on their existing knowledge. They don't know what readers like, and the writing style cannot support the characters and plots in the book. As a result, most readers are in a state of book shortage. I haven't read the book yet. Let me borrow it and send a message.

You have to rely on the sect, but you have to find the skills and resources by yourself. So what is the point of relying on the sect?

It's quite speechless. Although the author can't say he is a dog-licker towards women, he looks down upon such unrequited efforts.

It's very strange. You have to find resources and techniques by yourself with the support of the sect. Also, you don't believe your own plug-ins. You make a magic pill and then take it for testing, which causes a lot of trouble. The most speechless thing is that the lifespan of the foundation building is only more than 100 years. When you first got the techniques, it was said that the foundation building can have a lifespan of 300 years. In the blink of an eye, after breaking through the foundation building, the life span is only more than 100 years. When I saw this, I ran away 😒

First of all, there is serious homogeneity. There are many books like this with exactly the same beginning. Secondly, the pig's feet don't behave like a time traveler. In the end, I got stuck with farming. I originally chose to be a farm boy to avoid trouble, but the troubles came one after another, so why not leave? Being a casual cultivator will lead to death. You obviously do the same things as being a casual cultivator, and you don't care about the sect, but you don't have the freedom of a casual cultivator. What do you want? You can become stronger just by breathing, so why can't you do it? As a result, you neither enter the inner sect nor do casual cultivation, so you are waiting to die. Choosing to be a cow horse is troublesome one after another. How stupid does it take to do such a thing? You just choose to be a mortal and you can be invincible in the world for a few years. You have to do these terrible stupid things. Are you impatient? There are so many similar books. Learn from others and learn from their experiences.

. . . . The stolen goods are used directly, and if someone is looking for a wanted criminal, they don't call the police. . .

Shabi stuff, you can also divide it into physical foundation building and spiritual energy foundation building, right? Do we still need physical golden elixir and Nascent Soul?

Why can you improve your cultivation level without improving yourself? Why don't you improve yourself when your life is not in danger? There are no extra spells in hand, and the big one can bully the weak without improving his cultivation level. As long as the cultivation level is enough, foundation building is stronger than Qi training, and the fireball technique can kill people in seconds. Even if the enemy is a genius and cannot be defeated, foundation building can run faster than Qi training. In the world of cultivating immortals, you don't know which surprise or surprise will come first. If you don't improve your cultivation level, don't tell me that you can make money to buy things. Once your cultivation level is high, you can make money faster than practicing Qi.

I couldn't stand the first chapter, it was worse than anything written by AI. The writing and plot are a mess.

It's so poisonous. The storage bags obtained by murderers and corpses are hung outside. It can even be said to be shown off everywhere.

The spiritual crystal is omnipotent. It can also detoxify. I think it is highly poisonous. Other elixirs are also available in batches. Formation automatic control. The character is automatically perfected. What more wolfberry do you want?

This book feels like it will get cold after a while, it is simply extremely poisonous.

If you don't cultivate the land well, you'll start beating and killing before you have even a few plots. Alas, you're not meticulous at all.

Why do you still want to be an alchemist? Shouldn't you directly increase your cultivation level? Anyway, the system can cover up your cultivation level. Poisonous.

I don't want to read anymore. The more I write, the more confusing it becomes. The protagonist is at home and the sect leader has gone to the branch line. I'm dizzy!

You are too stupid, you just thought of a traditional fairy cultivation plot model after starting a business. It is really the kind of studio that does not change a word or a plot.

Just read the comments. Nowadays, the new authors are so free that I don't even bother to take the time to read them. I read the comment section first. There are too many bad reviews in Huai'an and then read.

After reading the fifth and sixth pages of Chapter 4, I withdrew. What a perfunctory thing to do to readers. Didn't the author read it himself before publishing it? I can't bear to read the book carefully, and there are cheats about the protagonist. Does shortness of breath when working or exercising count? What does it mean if your breathing is long while sleeping? There is no explanation at all. Even if we don't calculate it like this, we can say how much a patch will be applied in an average day, but there is no writing at all. When I read it, I felt like I had written it casually and perfunctorily.

It's all sarcastic. Is this book really written in such a 💩 way?

On average, I only write one proficiency level in 2 pictures. Is this a high number of words? It's so annoying to watch

Good book. The plot of this book is novel. All the characters in the book have thousand-year-old IQs. The characterization is very rich. The economic system does not collapse, the protagonist improves quickly, and the force value does not collapse. Much better looking than Lord of Mysteries and Sun God. Why are Mo Yan and Chen Zhongshi lagging far behind the author in terms of writing style?

I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. It's not responsible for sleeping with a woman. Really speechless😓

The author wrote well. I was shocked.

The introduction has nothing to do with the content. The protagonist is just a piglet. Others can do whatever they want. They write it as if they are all for the protagonist. Do you like to arrange things for others?

The protagonist doesn't need pills, he can break through as long as he has the skills. I wandered around so low-key that I didn't even see it.